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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
lolz cute part! plz continue soon :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
hey relly nice FF can u plzz PM me wen u update the nextpart?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
it was a very short part, plzzz give a long update next time,
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

really an awwsome one⭐️ and short one😭 but cute one😊 i like it very😊 much so sweetly armaan make her relaxed😊😉 please continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Behte ashqo ki jubaa nahi hoti,
lafzo me mohabbet bayaan nahi hoti,
pyaar karne wala koi mil jaaye tho kadar karna,
knyunki kismat har kisi par meharbaan nahi hoti!"
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
hey peeps om sory it was a short update and btw part 2 wil be shorrt aswell
but part 3 is loking long
but i wont be able 2 update sonn as i am goin a way fr a month sorry 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Rilli an awesum update....that was chooo chweeet....Ridz being posssesive bt ammy....G88888yaar........jus loved the prt 1......n I know the nxt prts wud be jus as amzin as tis one.....it was a rilli sweeet update..

Cont asap love.....
Love ya....t.ccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
very nicely put. short n sweet. looking ward 4 morw frm u shelly
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Hey..itz really cute... I lykk d way u've presentd it n awl... itz damn cute!! I really lykk Ridhimma's characterr 😆...btw I hv a suggestion- wen sumbudy's speakn can u jus put "..." in it?? odawise itz kinna confusin as to wen dey r speakn n stuff...it's jus a suggestion...
Srry 4 d shrt comment
Plzzz cont soon...
Aishwarya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: aish_punk

Hey..itz really cute... I lykk d way u've presentd it n awl... itz damn cute!! I really lykk Ridhimma's characterr 😆...btw I hv a suggestion- wen sumbudy's speakn can u jus put "..." in it?? odawise itz kinna confusin as to wen dey r speakn n stuff...it's jus a suggestion...

Srry 4 d shrt comment
Plzzz cont soon...
Aishwarya

soz i will try an put it nxt time as i had 2 write it quickly sorry
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Posted: 17 years ago
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Part 2 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~

hey guyz sorry it was a short part ive been very stressed lately an soz i couldnt put speech marks in sorry

an peeps i wount be able 2update soon sowie😭

They both woke up and guess who woke them the same air hostess who caused the fight no ridz got angry seeing her face now she got angry and got up leaving armaans head 2 fall of her shoulders as he was still asleep she got her bags and went while armaan was trying 2 catch up with her.

They then went 2 the hotel where they were 2 stay an enjoy each others company fro a whole month. Ridz still didn't talk 2 armaan and armaan didn't now what 2 do. Ridz just went of and all confused went 2 look for her.

While he was looking for her he bumped in to a very old and good friend of his Angand (from KYPH loll) they chatted for a while and unfortunately angand and his darling wife were going back to India armaan said to him okay bye but before u go don't u want to meet my wife u didn't come to our wedding an he hits him armaan said she's a little sidhi sadhi but she will do they both laughed he was looking around for her when he saw her coming out the swimming pool in a red sauce wala red swim suit she came out an came up 2 armaan her anger had cooled and she said what took you so long armaan was shocked and angand's mouth was opened armaan hesitating 2 say this is my wife angand there jus staring at her and then ridz went off 2 get a drink armaan was happy she left and then angand said seedhi saddi khota de sir she's damn modern an then from behind kripa came and pulled his ear and said namaste and they said goodbye 2 each other (angand kripa are officially out of the picture loll)

Now armaan was getting very angry as he was very possessive about ridz he went up to her and started to shout at her ridz didn't no what to do so ridz loudly started crying and screaming he doesn't love me what have I done for him and now armaan is confused and after a while he clicks on and realises she's doing it 2 annoy her he was just trying 2 calm her down as ridz was looking so damn hot many men came around an circled them ridz screamed look what I do for you what's your favourite colour she asked him armaan was very confused and he didn't reply now ridz got angry an she screamed at him again 'WHAT IS YOUR FAVARAITE COLOUR' now he got scared and said red quietly and ridz screamed look people his favourite colour is red and al I do for him I wear his favourite colour so he doesn't say anything to me now armaan got a little scared and then a man came up 2 her and asked is everything aright she screamed yes it will be when I drink poison and now ridz got 2 dramatic so armaan didn't now was 2 do so he pulled her towards her and gave her a passionate kiss and now ridz was blushing and ran 2 her room. While everyone in the result were creaming Oye hoye and then armaan quietly said oye hoye jaavani (loll nyla u will understand this haah)

Hope u guys liked it and next part u will be expecting romance loll

Plz guys do comment

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