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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: niyaati

arrey...aage to likh jaldi...............



niti lolzzzzzz ff thoda to wait karna hi hoga na😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
wO...first Day Of VEER and antara as a married couple...Now DS and HS are not gonna leave em for sure...😆

O'o so all r heading towards Temple huh..😃
Lolz...chota VEER aayega..🤣...Omg! 🤣
Gudness....abhi toh they hav just married and theya rent in love wid each other and abhi se everyone is Like ''Chota VEER''...🤣
Lolz...Ananya so frustuated by those comments...😆

Oh God...Siya saying VEER inna shaitaan hai toh chota VEER kaisa hoga...🤣

Hillarious Update TwinKy di...😆👏😆

Aww VEER cant see his wifey crying...😉😳...atleast they arent enemies..Lolz! 😆

Lolz....VEER shud hav atleast given her a compliment...😉😃

Lolz....Why is everyone so excited bout ...''Chota VEER''...!!! 🤣

What..😲😲😲.....Wow baba telling bout VEER's future!! 😃 it means VS will fall for each other soon...😳😳😳
Lolz...this harsh is olways thinking bout Kids....VEER's kids...and nao His kids...🤣🤣🤣
Truly Mad...😆

TwinKy di aapne toh saare raaz khol diye.......waah Bright future...👏 and HS marrying within 15days..👏

Lolz...really liked Dharam's dialogue....hume beti hi chahiye 😳 beta hoga toh VEER jaisa hoga! 🤣

Ohh From precap it means VS will catch Jv and agni poisoning the food and will ruin their plan..

Great Update TwinKy Di...👏👏👏....Please Update Next Part soon! 😃




RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

wO...first Day Of VEER and antara as a married couple...Now DS and HS are not gonna leave em for sure...😆 yup hum log chodte hain kya jo wo chodenge

O'o so all r heading towards Temple huh..😃
Lolz...chota VEER aayega..🤣...Omg! 😆dear inna hasi hehehe
😆 Gudness....abhi toh they hav just married and theya rent in love wid each other and abhi se everyone is Like ''Chota VEER''...🤣yup dont u see hindi mvies jaan
Lolz...Ananya so frustuated by those comments...😆frustrated they wanna kill them

Oh God...Siya saying VEER inna shaitaan hai toh chota VEER kaisa hoga...🤣

Hillarious Update TwinKy di...😆👏😆thanxx

Aww VEER cant see his wifey crying...😉😳...atleast they arent enemies..Lolz! 😆 yup so cute

Lolz....VEER shud hav atleast given her a compliment...😉😃

Lolz....Why is everyone so excited bout ...''Chota VEER''...!!! 🤣

What..😲😲😲.....Wow baba telling bout VEER's future!! 😃 it means VS will fall for each other soon...😳😳😳 awwwwww dear yahan to sab baba ke piche pad gaye hain😆😆😆
Lolz...this harsh is olways thinking bout Kids....VEER's kids...and nao His kids...🤣🤣🤣
Truly Mad...😆

TwinKy di aapne toh saare raaz khol diye.......waah Bright future...👏 and HS marrying within 15days..👏 raaz ab bhi baaki hai vinu lolzzzz

Lolz...really liked Dharam's dialogue....hume beti hi chahiye 😳 beta hoga toh VEER jaisa hoga! 🤣

Ohh From precap it means VS will catch Jv and agni poisoning the food and will ruin their plan..hmmmmmm most probably

Great Update TwinKy Di...👏👏👏....Please Update Next Part soon! 😃
thanx will update soon



RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍



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Posted: 16 years ago
where r u im waitin for ur update .............. plzzz update fast
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwww dear will update soon lolzzzzzz
will pm u as soon as i update
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Posted: 16 years ago
frnds me back
n is bar i m late sry for that but u all will love this
hope u all like it

recap

antra again imagining 😳
dat bhavishvani..
chota veer

ab aage..........

Part-21

antara sanyo aur sia khana bana lete hai

antara:sia ab khana to tayyar hai chalo sab ko bula laate hai aur sanyo tab tak tum ye sab khana bahar le aao

sanyo:theek hai aur haan vo agni aur jai mama ka khana unhi ke kamre mein bhijwa dena

sia:jai aur agni ye dono kaun hai

sanyo:maharaj ke bade bhai hai aur agni unka beta hai aaj hi aaye hai

sia:to vo itne dino se kahaan the

sanyo:ye sab hume nahi pata

sia:theek hai hum bhijwa denge

on the otherside in agni's and jai's room

jai:agni agni agni ......................

agni:pitaji hume maaf kar dijiye par hum aapse wada karte hai ki un dono ko hum ab jinda nahi chodenge

jai:yehi baat tum naa jane kitni baar keh chuke ho

agni:pitaji is baar mere paas ek bahut hi achi yojna hai jis se dharam veer bhi mar jaenge aur kisi ko hum par shak bhi nahi hoga

jai:kya yojna hai tumhare paas

agni:kyon na pitaji hum aaj ke khane mein jahar mila de jis se ye saara raj pariwar hi khatam ho jaega

jai:haan ye theek rahega par ye kaam karega kaun

agni:vo sab aap mujh par chod dijiye pitaji is baar dharam veer ko mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta

jai and agni laughs

after some tym a man in black cloths with his face covered enters the kitchen no one was there in the kitchen vo jakar sabji mein jahar daal deta hai par veer antara ke paas aa raha hota hai to vo ye sab dekha leta hai

veer:kaun ho tum aur yahaan kya kar rahe ho

man gives a push to veer and starts running veer also follows him aur phir bhaagte bhagte vo antara se takara jaata hai antara neeche aur veer uske upar dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein kho jaate hai aur vo aadmi wahaan se bhaag jata hai thodi der baad veer ko hosh aata hai aur vo udhta hai aur antara ko bhi udhata hai

antara:veer ye is tarah ghode par sawar hokar kahaan jaa rahe the ki tumhe ku6 bhi dikhai nahi diya....................aankhein kya chod kar aaye ho

veer:are vo aadmi

antara:kaun aadmi aur tum uske peeche kyon bhaag rahe the

veer:are vo hi jo abhi abhi yahaan se bhaga tha tumhara banaya hua khana kharab karke

antara:kya humara banaya hua khana kharab kar diya

veer:haan bas isiliye uske peeche bhaag raha tha aakhir uski himmat kaise hui tumhari mehnat kharab karne ki

antara:to tum hamare liye uske peeche bhaag rahe the

veer:aur nahi to kya

antara:koi baat nahi veer hum khana phir se bana lenge

veer:par akele kaise karogi ye sab vo sia aur sanyo to hai hi nahi

antara:koi baat nahi hum kar lenge tum chinta mat karo

veer:chalo mein bhi tumhari madad karta hoon

antara:tum aur humari madad vo bhi khana banane mein

veer:haan to kya hua kya mein madad nahi kar sakta

antara:par tumhe to khana banana aata hi nahi hai

veer:tum ho na tum mujhe batati rehna mein vo sab karta jaonga

antara :theek hai chalo

dono rasoi mein jaate hai aur khana banane lagte hai veer saari sabjiyaan kaat deta hai aur antara puriya bana leti hai is tarah dono mil kar khana bana lete hai par khana bana lene ke baad veer ki haalat dekhne layak hoti hai afterall usne pehli baar khana banaya tha antara uski aisi haalat dekh kar hasne lag jaati hai

veer:tum has kyon rahi ho

antara:jaakar apni shakal to dekh kar aao tumhe bhi hasi aa jaegiaur haan naha jarur lena aane se pehle

veer:par mujhe to bahut bhook lagi hai aur thak bhi gaya hoon

antara:koi baat nahi hum tumhara khana kamre mein hi le aaenge

veer:haan ye theek rahega

antara:vaise veer shukriya humari madad karne ke liye

veer:isme shukriya ki kya baat hai ek dost hi to dusre dost ke kaam aata hai

veer jaakar apne kamre mein naha dho kar vahin so jaata hai

idhar sab khana kha kar apne apne kamre mein chale jaate hai aur antara jai aur agni ka khana lekar unke room mein jaati hai jahan par jai agni par gussa kar raha hota

jai:tumse ek kaam theek se nahi hota aaj itna acha mauka tha aur tumhari wajah se vo bhi haath se chala gaya

agni:vo pitaji hume maaf kar dijiye bas ek aakhiri mauka aur de dijiye is baar vo dono mujhse bach nahi paenge

jai:rehne do tum to ab jo bhi karna hai vo mein hi karunga ........................................dharam veer manalo jitni khushiyaan manani hai mana lo aakhir kar tumhe ab marna jo hai


antara:mamaji

jai:k...............kkk........kaun

antara:hum hai antara aapke liye khana laye hai

jai:par beta tum aayi kab

antara:bas abhi abhi aaye hai aap log ku6 baate kar rahe the

agni:na..........nahi to

antara:nahi aap log ku6 to keh rahe the ki kisiko marna hai

jai:vo..........vo .................vo to hum humare dushmano ke liye keh rahe the

antara:acha ab un dushmano ko baad mein mar lena khana kha lijiye thanda ho jaega

jai:theek hai tum jao........................... acha suno sqab ne khana kha liya

antara:ji bas veer bacha hai uska hum ab lekar jaa rahe hai

agni:kyon veer ne kyon nahi khaya

antara:aaj usne humari madad ki thi thak gaya to kamre mein hi khane ka intezaar kar raha hai bas aab jaakr use khilana hai

jai:theek hai jao

antara veer ki thali lekar kamre mein pahuchti hai aur dekhti hai ki veer to so chuka hai

antara:ye lo ye mahashaya to so gaye....................................
..... veer utho khana kha lo

par veer to itna thak jaata hai ki uski to neend hi nahi khulti par antara badi mushkil se use uthati hai aur use khana khilati hai


antara:veer utho bhi aur khana kha lo .......................... pehle to bhook bhook chilla rahe the aur ab so gaye..................veer ....................veer

veer:sone do na antara

antara:are khana to kha lo phir so jana

veer:nahi mujhe nahi khana mujhe sona hai

antara:veer bas thoda sa kha lo

veer:nahi......na mujhe ........ ni khana...

antara:mujhe ku6 nahi sunana utho ab nahi to hum ye paani se bhara jag tumhare upar daal denge

veer uthata hai aur abhi bhi thoda thoda neend mein hi hai

veer:do .......... mein kha lunga....

antara:haan hume pata hai tum kha loge aur khila bhi doge]

veer:matlab??????????????

antara:matlab ki hume dikh raha hai ki tum kitna hosh mein ho abhi bhi sapne dekh rahe ho....................... chalo ab muh kholo hum khila dete hai........

veer:nahi mein khud kha sakta hoon

antara:cup chap muh kholo

veer apna muh kholta hai aur antara use khana khilati hai

veer:acha tumne khaya

antara:nahi ab jaakar khaenge

veer:khud ne bhi to nahi khaya chalo ab mein tumhe khilaonga

antara:hum pure hosh mein hai hum khud jakar kha lenge

veer:meine keh diya na mein khilaonga matlab khilaonga............................ye lo muh kholo

then veer antara ko khana khilata hai

antara:bas humne kha liya acha chalo ab so jao hum thali rakh kar aate hai

veer nakiya utha kar neeche jaane lagta hai

antara:kahaan jaa rahe ho

veer:neeche sone

antara:are koi baat nahi aaj tum upar so jao hum jaakar neeche so jaenge

veer:nahi tum aaram se upar sona aur vaise bhi mujhe ab aadat ho gayi hai

antara:tum aaj thak gaye ho na to upar hi so jao aur vaise bhi hume pata hai tumhe neeche neend nahi aati raat bhar idhar udhar hote rehte ho

veer:nahi koi baat nahi hai aur vaise bhi mujhse jyada tum thaki hui ho

antara:acha humare paas ek aur tarika hai

veer:kya?????? batao


antara bed ke center mein ek parda laga deti hai

veer:ye sab kya hai

antara:dekho abse tum bistar ke us taraf sona aur hum is taraf so jaenge

veer:par antara.....

antara:par var ku6 nahi bas aaj se hum aisa hi karenge aur aage hum ku6 bhi nahi sunana chahte ................................aur ab so jao hum thodi der mein aate hai

veer :theek hai

veer so jaata hai aur antara bhi thodi der baad aakar vahin so jaati hai


Precap:sanyo marriage fixed.
antara n sia goes to awadhi veer missing antara

hope u all love the update

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Posted: 16 years ago
me first again 😆
7th time..
yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
🥳🥳🥳🥳

twinkle muah muah muahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
lovely update 🤗

I loved veer n antra....... 😛

aw ekdum jodha akbar istyle 😳 so sweetttttttttttt
dono ek dusre ko khana khilaye....awwww 😍
n veer helping antra in rasoi 😳 how cute......

lol very very cute....
any ways plz update it soon yaar......😕😆 ab intazaar nahi hoga 😭😆

Edited by Rash2cool - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely update as usual.
Plz continue asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanx subhs di will update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow what a lovely update...great change in Veer's & Antra behaviour towrads each other...veer missing Antra hmmmmmmmmm.... lagta hi aage bahut maza aayega...Pls. post the next part soon twinkle....This part was just awesomeee.....

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