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Loved it 👏👏.

Originally posted by: just_in

Loved it 👏👏.

You have made ragini into a very different but totally believable and adorable charater.👏 Loved her pulling ranveers ears and teasing him afterwards. Totally loved these parts.😉

"Ragini : jee bauji aai ... (she came running ..putting her shoes while running ..off they went and again she wore them ..) haan chaliye bauji ..😃

Prakash: pagli kahin ki ..."

"Ragini : mujhe to lagaa tumhare ghar se koi khadus naukar ayenge ... chalo accha hai ... tum better ho 😛

Ranveer: oye Rags... wht do u mean by better? aaj kal khud ko aaine me dekha hai... kitni badal gai ho .. aasman par udne lagi ho ... pehle kitni chup chaap sehmi sehmi rehti thi ... 😡

Ragini: ranny ab rehne do ... tumhari sangat ka asar hai ...😉😆"

Thank you .

lol yeh .. i did that purposely ... now i m going to make raginis character flavourable ... lol ... she is going to be naughty but at the same time sweet as she is like sadi ...

Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

thanks rafia . so u like it ?

OMG, I luv it.

Originally posted by: priya***

OMG, I luv it.

I luv the clothes 2.

Keep up the good work.

thanks priya.

@ those who will read now - can u all pls tell me, while giving ur comments, wht scene did u like and why .. i mean pls give me the flow.. thts becos i thought so much stuff at one time and tried to bring it together so i m not sure how was the whole part ... i have got the feeling as if it has become a mixture... like a khichdi. lol.

thnx.

the precap sounds steamy TT lol... my favorite part was when Ragni and Ranvir were apologizing to one another after the afternoon... it was sweet and showed how much they meant to one another

great job... i noticed a lot of vivaah and HAHK in there lol 😉

Again Affy this was the WONDERFUL part...!!!👏👏👏 I really liked Ragini's CHARACTER...!!! Hmm, which scene I like best... Ermm... 🤔🤔🤔 That scene when Ranveer apologises...!!! 😳😳😳 Ohh... I am CRAZY about your FF...!!! Seriously...

Ratings...10/10⭐️

Originally posted by: prettylady

the precap sounds steamy TT lol... my favorite part was when Ragni and Ranvir were apologizing to one another after the afternoon... it was sweet and showed how much they meant to one another

great job... i noticed a lot of vivaah and HAHK in there lol 😉

precap ? what precap?

HAHK - my favrt movie

VIVAH - 2nd best!

but the prb is ... shoes stuff and all r common in all weddings....

any way thnx 😃

Originally posted by: neetusidhu

that was great...update soon....

thnx a lot!

Originally posted by: born-leader

Again Affy this was the WONDERFUL part...!!!👏👏👏 I really liked Ragini's CHARACTER...!!! Hmm, which scene I like best... Ermm... 🤔🤔🤔 That scene when Ranveer apologises...!!! 😳😳😳 Ohh... I am CRAZY about your FF...!!! Seriously...

Ratings...10/10⭐️

Best Scene... Ragvir's

THNX aimen .... i think u r the first one to get so crazy abt my FF ..lol!😆 otherwise i m not such a good writer .. i just write for myself .. i mean as a hobby ...