1-1 A-R Fic: A Rainy Love

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Hi guys

I wrote this !-1 fic for the Monsoon Contest.............It was a really short one there, just adding some more stuff into it and changing a bit of things


"A Rainy LOVE….."


Love is unconditional, just the way as Rain is..............Love like to make a heart full of life as Rain do to the earth and made it lively, while leaving a sweet fragrance behind, which left people mesmerizing and just in the way, Love left a person.......with dreams and happiness.......

Clouds were covering the sky and rain was on its full………..Some people were hiding in there houses while some one enjoining this season..

A girl, wearing a knee lengthen beige trouser with a sleeveless top was jumping in the small water pounds which got filled with rain, having an amazing smile on her face, full of life, as she was holding an umbrella in one hand……….A boy, holding an umbrella, was trying his best to escape from this rain as he was getting late for his job's interview, stood still seeing this full of life girl as she make him remember something

The girl was lost in herself as she was just dancing on the song tunes

Aaj mein boond hoon,
Boond hoon barish ki
Aaj mein phool hai
Leher hoon khwaaish ki
Aaj mein aasmaan se aai hoon
Aaj mein dhoop hoon
Mein baharein laai hoon

Sapnno ke saath mein rehne lagi hoon
Unse yeh baat mein kehne lagi hoon
Armaano ka mila mujhko samundar
Maujo ke ssaath mein behne lagi hoon


Aaj mein phool hai
Leher hoon khwaaish ki

Aaj esha hai lagne laga
soya har khwaab jagne laga
Aaj mein bhi mehekne lagi
Yeh jahan bhi chamkne laga

Dil ki dhadkan bhi woh hai
Teri uljhan bhi woh hai
Usko suna de apne dil ke sada haan


Sapnno ke saath tum rehne lagi ho
Mujhse yeh baat mein kehne lagi ho
Armaano ka mila tumko samundar
Maujo ke ssaath tum behne lagi ho

Aaj mein boond hoon,
Boond hoon barish ki
Aaj mein phool hai
Leher hoon khwaaish ki
Aaj mein aasmaan se aai hoon
Aaj mein dhoop hoon
Mein baharein laai hoon


[Sapnno ke saath mein rehne lagi hoon
Unse yeh baat mein kehne lagi hoon
Armaano ka mila mujhko samundar
Maujo ke ssaath mein behne lagi hoon]


"Riddhima" he said with pleasure……..ah man, she is the same girl on whom he had a crush in college, she was like ever so chirpy, amazing and beautiful…....

She was his college crush…….they both were class fellows but she never noticed that handsome boy under those specs who use to sit in the back lane of her's…….She just know that he is one of those bookworms who don't feel there is life out of books and live in that imaginary life but he………..he know everything about her…….she was not a play kind of girl who use to date boys or one with attitude……..but she was the one after whom, every boy was but she was never interested…………she was soft-spoken, kind hearten brilliant in studies as well as in sports she was the best in the girls of his college and he know……….she is the one for him

He came back to senses as he felt a splash of water and get hell anger seeing that mud and water stains on his shirt and pants

"Heck" he look up with anger to see who did that but just felt back as he saw her standing there in front of her in real, after haunting him in dreams from last two years………biting her tongue and looking really cute and adorable

"Sorry, I mean I ……just not see that" She felt bad………but control your emotions man, don't think she remembered you……..just behave normal

"What you did?" He got annoyed feeling might this job too is getting out of his range, he done MBA in business with such A+ but still, this world is more after the political relations than your capability

"I have an interview in next two hours, firstly its raining since morning, so I need to get out early of thinking might not get late, secondly didn't get any convince so need to go all by myself and then…………..shit man" He was really much depressed now, he need to get this job for survival………as after his father death a year later, he was looking for job but was unable and the money his father left was not enough now

"Sorry"……….

"What will I do of your sorry?" he became angry now

"Ok, come with me, my house is just here…………I will clean them"

"I will get late"………he wanted to go with her but a fact was that It will take much time that he will lose this job too

"Not to worry, I did a mistake, I will solve it and will drop you to your destination on my scooty? Is it ok?" before he can say anything, she just make him move forward and take him to her house

"Grandpa"……..She called out loud as she entered in her small but beautifully furnished house

"You are home, my baccha" a poor man on wheelchair came towards door and after looking at him, looks at her with questioning eyes

"I was playing in rain, and I ruined his clothes and he has an interview in next two hours"....... She looked sorry

"You did right by taking him here, now help him cleaning" She move inside and come out with a pair of Pajama-Kurta of his grandfather

"Now wear this and give me your clothes"....... he nodded as she lead him to a room and stay outside…………as he give her clothes, she went to wash it……….while his grandfather got a company as he started talking to him and really found him applause able…….he was surly a strong boy as he lead his life on his believes along with the rituals

After an hour, washing, drying and pressing of clothes, she handover them to him and after changing, he took blessings from her grandfather and ask him to pry for him to get this job…………Grandfather bid bye to him as he sit beside her on her scooty and left

She was standing outside in the lounge of the multi-national company, he came to give interview and was silently praying for him……….Her eyes flutter open as she look at him coming out from the board room with a wide smile….

"Surly he must have get this".........She mumbled under her breath

He left stunned as he found her sitting there, looking at him as he assumed that she must have left by now

"You still here" he was confused, did she remembered him…….but no, she can't

"Ya, actually I wanted to know did you get this job or not as I don't want to ever stay with the question that the stranger, I met, got that job or not" He then realize that he didn't even told him his name

"Hi, My name is armaan, Armaan Malik" Sounds familiar, but where..she think to herself but then move forward her hand and shake it "Riddhima, Riddhima Gupta" As she took back her hand, she continued "So I guessed, you get the job"

"ya" he said with a smile "I think, I got my lucky star" He move out leaving her stunned

Next day, She left stunned as she found him, sitting with her grandfather

"What are you doing here?" She asked as she takes seat beside her grandpa

"Ah, I just came with this sweets" he indicated towards a sweet box but than make a mocking face saying "To say thanks to grandpa, for praying for me" He smiled further seeing her mouth left hanging

"Ah what, all credit to grandpa……..while I helped you with all that stuff" she was angry

"Beta don't say that………he is our guest" Grandpa ask her to stop, but in anger, she left the house

"Don't worry beta, she is just like this………but its so sweet to you to think about us in your happiness"

He smiled and said

"You are the only one I got now, so how can I forget you" he hold his hands and squeeze them "And we are there for you, beta" He felt great hearing someone called him beta and just hug him "I think, I should check her out"

He found her standing outside angry…..he smiled and move forward

"I am shorry" he said in a childish manner as he come in front of him holding ears but she ignored him and again he move towards her friend in same position saying

"I am really shoo shorry maam" ........A smiled formed on corner of her lips and seeing him pouting his lips, her smiled get even wider

"So you forgive me?" he asked as she smile

"On one condition"

"What?"…………

"Buy me five ice-creams"

"Five…….are you dumb….in such cold" .........weather was cold from last night rain and rainbow was shinning on the sky in morning, but now its again got cloudy

"You asked for forgiveness and that's my condition" He gave in and take her to the nearest ice cream parlor and just left amazed seeing her so much crazy

"Why I am feeling like, I know you from before………it don't look like a day acknowledgment" ............She speaks between licking her ice-cream……He smiled and then stand up smiling as he passed her saying it loud just for her to hear

"You are beautiful; just you need to know yourself

You are graceful; just you need to show yourself

You are talented; just you need to prove yourself

You are breathtaking; just you need to look up yourself

You are lovable; just you need to love _______"

With his every line, she get stunned……….these lines used to be written on the letters, she used to get on her desk everyday in business class…..She know she had a secret admirer and was always curious to know him, but never got him……….she had kept all those letters safe to herself but today she got all her answers and stand up stunned

"Armaan, you were….." as he nodded, she just hug him…….she was so pleased to find her lover whose lines, she used to love……..who admire her and make her special

But for him, his love got his destination…….having her in his arms, making him feel complete…….They were lost in each other when right then thunder struck and make her get more cling to him and he just smile saying "I love you Riddhima...........A Rainy Love"

"And I love the guy...........Who love me unconditionally" She said as she felt as she get a new life all over again inside herself...........

The Rain was a blessing for them as it help them meet again and filled there life with love................

The End

My Fics List

Angad-Kripa's
Capable Of Love

Armaan-Riddhima's
Love Or What???
As you Left Me.....

Short 1-1 Stories:
Angad-Kripa's: Commin Home, Honey

From Special Squad

Aryan-Shaina's
Phir Millenge
The Night Of Mistakes

hope u guys will like it

luv ya


lolz

ana
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ana i'm luvin it read it befre
n al da short stories wer aamazing
ur 1 was also superb i luved readin it
must say it was one of my favourites
great wrk luved how u workd the conpt
aww true luv found its way lool
great story well dne x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing story
it was really sweet
i liked ridzs charachter it was very lovable
i liked the way u got them together again and how u made them meet after such a long time
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey really AWESOME YAAR!!!!!!!!

i loved it so much!!!!!!!

IT WAS SO SWEET!!!!!!

the way armaan loved riddhima since college days and he still remembers her....and now after 2 years meeting her must have been total suprise!!!!!!!!!

I CAN ONLY SAY ONE THING FABULOUS......


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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds really interesting👏⭐️😊 please continue it😊 and send me pm😉

"Usake hote hue bhi tanhai mili hai,
Wafa kar ke bhi hume bewafai mili hai,
Jitni duwa ki usse pane ki,
Uss se zyada usaki judai mili hai."
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ana!
Wow dat was lovely!
I voted 4 dis short story too because i just loved the storyline!
Gr8 job!
I wont ask u 2 continue dis bcoz i knoe u already r writing a fantastic FF...But i genuinely loved dis story!
Keep writing as fantastically as u do!
-Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ana just read it. wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ccan't believe it. wow!!!!!!it's so nice. wow!!!!!!!!!reallly excellent!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dis short story was jst awesome 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Wow, i did not know u had written another AR ff, this one was so sweet and innocent, loved reading it.
Thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Ana,

I didn't know you have written on Angad-Kripa as well, not to mention all these wonderful short stories…I just loved this one👏. It was just soo perfect⭐️. I was sighing over it long after it finished😳.

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