Sumveer FF PART 1

Here is d first part of my ff.. kindly ignore mistakes.
#Our _Destiny
SumVeer FF
PART 1

Afternoon time..
Parmar's house
Kalawati- suman.. aree oo suman..
Suman- ji maasa..
Kalawati- sun chori.. aaj tulsi vivah hai aur mene shastri chowk me chunar banwaane ko kaha tha.. jaa abhi veer ko bhi laane ka time ho gya hai.. aate waqt vnha se chunar le aana.. thik hai..
Suman- ji maasa.. mein abhi nikalti hu.
She was about to leave..
Kalawati- aree suman me toh bhul hi gayi ye le bijli ki bil bhi aate waqt bhar lena thik h..
Suman- ji maasa..
Kalawati leaves..
Suman's pov- abhi toh sabhzi kaatni bachi hai.. me antara ko bol deti hu vo kaat ke rkh degi aur me aake jaldi se bana dungi..
Suman- antara sun na.. meri ek madad krogi..
Antara- boliye na bhabhisa..
Suman narrates her d story of everythng happened..
Antara- abh befikre jao me sabhziya kaat ke rkh dungi..
Suman- acha me chalti hu..
Antara- jii..
They smiled.. suman leaves..

Mittal's house
Sindhura's pov- dopeher ke 3baj rahe hai.. lekin chunar abhi tak nai aayi.. lgta hai shop waale bhul gye honge.. chaman ji ko bolti hu.. nai chaman ji ko ek baat bolungi toh hazar sawal mjhe hi puch denge..toh kisko bheju akash ranveer manan sahil sbh naaye hai iss city me.. me toh bachpan me yanhi badi hui hu.. aur agr me gayi toh khana kon bnaega..

Ranveer was passing by der n noticed tension marks on sindhura's face..

Ranveer- mom
But sindhura was lost in her thoughts..
Ranveer - mom.. he touched her..
Sindhura- aree ranveer tum Kabh aaye..
Ranveer- 5min phle.. par aapko kya hua knha khoye ho..
Sindhura- kuch nai beta.. jao apni padhai kro
Ranveer- mom.. bhul jaati ho kya me apka beta hu.. vo bhi fav.. aap kisi baat se tension me ho.. pta chal ra h mjhe ab btao kya hua..
Sindhura smiled n narrated him d story..
Ranveer- mom bs itti si baat.. me aur manan chale jaate hai. Akele me kho jaunga lekin do log saath honge toh kese khoenge... chalo btao kaunsa shop..
Sindhura- shastri chowk..
Ranveer- ok.. he was about to leave..
Sindhura- ranveer
Ranveer- yes mom..
Sindhura- i love u.. she pulled his cheeks..
Ranveer- i love u 2.. he kissed her hand.. chalo byee..
Sindhura- byee.. me call kr deti hu shop me taaki vo nikal ke rkhe..

SHASTRI CHOWK
Sindhura called him.
Shopkeeper- hello..
Sindhura- namaste.. me sindhura.. mera beta aa raha hai.. mene jo order diya tha chunar tulsi vivah ke liye vo nikal ke rkhiye..
Shopkeeper- ji madam..
She cut d call..
Shopkeeper- ye kya.. sirf ek hi chunar.. aur ye toh kalawati ji ke naam ki hai kya kru...
Veer- maa icecream icecream..
Suman- beta jao jo chahye vo icecream khao lekin vanhi rhna me chunar leke aati.. ok..
Veer- ok.. love u mom..
Suman- love u 2..
Manan- aree ranveer ruk.. yanhi hai SHASTRI CHOWK dekh likha hai..
Ranveer- haa.. tu nikal me park krke aata hu..
Manan(laughs)- tu kya mall me aaya hai jo park krke aata hu..ye ek galli hai.. idhar park krne ki jagah knha milegi.. chal nautanki..
Ranveer- point.. chal..
both laughs

Suman Ranveer together- Bhaiya Tulsi vivah ke liye chunar..
Both shared an eyelock..
Suman looks at the shopkeeper.. while Ranveer still looking at her..
Shopkeeper- ji mere paas sirf ek hi chunar bachi hai aur ye kalawati ji ke naam ki hai..
Suman- ji mjhe unhone ne hi bheja hai..
Shopkeeper- oh ye lo aapka..aap sindhura ji ke bete honge haina..
Ranveer- ji..
Shopkeeper- ji mjhe maaf kr dijiye.. humne unka order banne diya nai tha..
Ranveer- its ok..
Manan- kya ok bhai.. inka gussa ab humpe niklega..
Ranveer- bhai.. ab dinbhar ye kaam krte hai.. bhul gaye honge..
Manan- aree lekin tusli vivah aaj hai.. hum ynha kisi shop ko jaante nai hai.. kanha se lenge chunar..
Suman was standing listening to their conversation n said..
Suman- ji maaf kijiye me apke bich me bolri hu.. aap chahe toh ye chunar le sakhte hai.. me toh yanhi ki hu me kisi aur shop se le lungi.. lijiye..
Ranveer- nai.. ye apki mom ne order kiya h.. hum ye nai le skhte.. humne ye le bhi liya toh aoki mom apko chilaegi.. no sorry ye aap hi rakhiye..
Suman- jab maasa ko sach pta chlega toh vo mjhpe gusse se zyada garv hongi.. kyunki vo humesha kehti hai zarurat mando ki madad krni chahye.. ye aap le lijiye..
Ranveer- lekin..
Suman- lekin vekin kuch nai.. aap indore me naaye hai.. knha knha ghumenge. Itti asaani se nai milti ye sbh jagah.. ye aap rakh lijiye.. me baaki jagah dekh lungi..
She gave the polythene bag to Ranveer.. Ranveer take it..
Ranveer- thanks..
Suman smiled n leaves..
Ranveer smiled too..
Manan was naughtily laughing seeing Ranveer's changing expressions..
Manan- sweet na..
Ranveer- yaa..
He was still looking at the polythene..
Manan- ahem ahem.. chale kya..
Ranveer holds his neck- chal..
Both laughs n leaves

Precap- Antara confusion..

I hope u guys like it.. give feedbacks plz.. 😳

Good start...waiting for chap 2..

Originally posted by: deepthiabhi

Good start...waiting for chap 2..

Keeping gng gal

thankyou 😳

very cute start

Originally posted by: Kapillian_girl

very cute start

i think manan is small bro in ur story by the way handling him i thought..

good attempt

continue soon

yup.. sahil is the eldest.. then ranveer n then manan.. thankyou 😳