ReeT( FF ) update pg 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
a ff on Reet.thats nice.shocking that gunjan left Ranvi as she hates him being after music.where is gunjan now?Reet scene with ranvi watching her giggle with rabba ve as bgm was romantic.plz put a title 4 this FF.plz write in English.and u can make just d dialogues in hindi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
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Edited by -dear10- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Mona...edit it above and post the update on page 5..it's at bottom of the page now.😳
Edited by ...-Riya-... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Update 2
Morning
geet apne kaam par ja rahi hoti hai wo deepu ko school chhodne ke liye sath le jati hai wo school chhod kar wapas apne kaam par ja rahi hoti hai tabhi machaan ke paas se usko gaane ki awaaz aati hai jogiya jogiya wo paas jaker dekhti hai to ranvi bilkul kho ke ga raha hota hai usko pata nahi chalta ki geet wahan khade hoke gana sunn rahi hai.
Geet close her eyes and she also start singing
geet- jogiya jogiya jogiya
Ranvi still singing usko pata nahi chala wo besudh jogi ki tarha ga raha or geet bhi
tabhi achanak bohat sare dogs wahan aake bhonkne lagte hai tab dono ka dhyaan hat jata hai or unko pata chalta hai ki dono kafi der se sath main ga rahe hai. Dono thoda awkward feel karte hai.
Ranvi- are geet ji aap kab aayi
geet- ji tabhi jab aap gana ga rahe the bohat achcha gaate hai aap sachhi.
Ranvi- aapne kabhi bataya nahi geet ji ki aap bhi kitna achcha gaati hai .
Geet- are aap bohat mazaak karte hai main to bas thoda bohat bhajan ga leti hoon.
Ranvi excited hoke khada hota hai or bolta hai.
Ranvi- ye thoda bohat tha geet ji veerakdi ki kasa. Aap sach main mere se bhi achcha gaati hai.
Geet- aapko bhi lagta hai main achcha gaati hoon ranvi ji
Ranv i- ji haan aap bohat achcha gaati hai aap mere sath music director se milne kyun nahi chalti wo log naye talent ko mauka dete hai mujhe pura yakeen hai aap bohat kamyaab hongi
geet- aap mujh main itna vishvaas dikha rahe to main aapke sath jarur chalungi ranvi ji
ranvi geet chalne lagte hai bohat tez wind chal rahi or geet ke hair udd rahe wo apna dupatta sambhal ne ki koshish kar rahi tabhi ranvi bas geet ko chori chori dekhe ja raha he don't know wo esa kyun kar raha uska mann kyun geet ko dekhne ka kar raha
tabhi geet ka dupatta hawa main ud ke ranvi ke upar chala jata hai or ranvi ko pata chalta hai ki wo geet ko tukur tukur dekhe ja raha tha
tabhi wo apne chehre se dupatta hata ke geet ko odha deta hai geet ko ajeeb sa lagta hai wo thoda sharmati hai.
Ese hi baate karte karte geet jahan kaam karti hai wo jagah aa jati hai or ranvi wahi khada hoke bas geet ko jate dekhta hai or khud main muskurake wahan se chala jata hai.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Confession time: Before I started reading I first checked whether jogiya was mentioned...aur kitne baar mention hua🤣

The dogs barking scene was the funniest.🤣
MaSh ko bhi show mai aisa scene dalna chahiye. All of the audience who left the show during the Junoon track will start coming back.🤣

Besudh matlab kya hai?😆

The real Geet needs to be as bold and chalu as your Geet Monakdi.😳😆

Thanks for the awesome update🤗
Edited by ...-Riya-... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Besudh matlab apne main khoya hua hosh nahi jisko kuch behosh ki tarha 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Mona kadi maza aa gaya tera reet os padhke 😆
show me dhi dog barking scene aane wala hai jaldi jab gunju gana gane lagegi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
As usual very funny😆
Edited by sam_sf - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awesome update Mons 🤗
"besudh jogi ki tarha ga raha or geet bhi
tabhi achanak bohat sare dogs wahan aake bhonkne" 🤣


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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
reet conv is so sweet.geet is calm n soft like ranvi.now geet will join ranvi 2 sing.duppatta scene was damn romantic.ranvi gazing at her at d end was very romantic

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