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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is the edited version of my runner up OS in the Valentine's OS contest.

Autumn Melancholy


Baldev embraced Veera,"Sweety...have a good sleep.When you wake up in the morning you will be cured completely".
She smiled,but her face was pale as it had lost it's charm.
Veera said ,"My comfort is being with you Baldev.."
Baldev smiled,"I will be always with you Veera".


Baldev wrapped a sheet around his beloved wife Veera's body.She was sick.She was having high fever.

She closed her eyes pretending to sleep as she did not want Baldev to know that she was not able to sleep.

The next morning...
Baldev woke up when sun rays fell on his face.He saw Veera sleeping like a cute baby.He touched her forehead.Still she had high temperature.He felt sad.He did not want to wake her up as she was weak.He looked outside through the window.It was Autumn;his favourite season.

He loved Autumn as it made nature colourful and beautiful.He loved the colour change in leaves which occurs during Autumn.He became pleasant seeing the beautiful nature.

He ran out.
He went near a tree.It was shedding leaves.Leaves fell on him.He felt relief.Autumn always gave him hopes.

It was during an Autumn season that he met his wife Veera for the first time.They met daily.Their friendship grew stronger turning them into lovers.
One day Baldev proposed giving her a red rose,
"Veera...I can't live without you.Will you be with me forever?Will you marry me?"

She blushed taking off the red rose from him,"Yes Baldev".
He was very happy.

She asked him,"But will you promise me that you will be with me forever?"
Baldev did not wait to reply,"Yes,I promise.I will be always there with you.Our love is so deep that we will always be with each other".
Autumn leaves fell upon them.
Baldev felt very happy,
"This tree is blessing us by shedding it's colourful leaves on us".
But Veera's face was fading.
"No Baldev.It is not blessing,it's cursing us.Unfortunately Autumn's evil eyes have fallen on us...that hints that we can't be with each other forever".
"What are you saying Veera?"
Tears covered her eyes making her vision unclear.
"Leaves falling down...that also on our body is a bad omen".
"No,it's such a beautiful scene.I feel nice when leaves fall upon me".
"But my heart felt the pain of separation when leaves fell on us.It was during Autumn that I lost my family.I cursed the moment which poured leaves on us.From then onwards I hate Autumn.I am scared of Fall.We should not have met during Autumn.We should not have fallen in love during Autumn.We falling in love would be tragic like the leaves falling during Autumn.We should not have opened our heart to each other when leaves were falling upon us".
She was pouring out her emotions through her tears.
He wiped her tears.
"No Veera.I still believe that our love life will be as beautiful as Autumn.I am happy that our love blossomed during the most beautiful season.We will be always be with each other Veera.Autumn cannot always snatch your loved ones from you".
He embraced her with warmth and affection.Her tears still had the taste of fear.

They got married believing that they will be always tied to each other.


Two years have passed.
They had a blissful life.But Veera fell ill.Her fever was getting worse making her extremely weak.

Baldev went back to the room.Baldev touched Veera's face.
"Veera.."He called her softly.
Veera was finding hard to open her eyes.
Baldev felt really upset seeing her condition.
He called the doctor home.
The Doctor examined her.
"Doctor...Veera took medicines regularly.Still she has high temperature",Baldev talked about her condition.
The Doctor was gloomy,
"Sorry to say Baldev.Your wife's is not a silly fever.She is suffering from pneumonia".
Baldev was shocked.
The Doctor continued,
"You people did'nt realize it.So it has become really worse.Take her to the hospital immediately.Otherwise it is going to be very dangerous".
Baldev got scared of losing Veera.
The Doctor left.
Baldev saw Veera looking at him.After the sky turned blue now only Veera opened her eyes properly.That gave him hope.
He sat near her.
Her lips shivered,
"I am having pneumonia.Right?"
Baldev could not speak.He was scared whether he will burst into tears if he speaks.
"Baldev...I told you...Autumn is the season of loss for me.Will i die?Will i lose you?Will we get separated?I feel I am going to die"
She was really emotional.
Baldev wanted to burst into tears.But he controlled his tears.He did not allow his tears to flow out as he knew that his tears would make Veera weaker.
He closed her mouth with his hands.
"Don't say like that Veera.For me Autumn is the season of hope.I have hope Veera.Nothing bad will happen".




Her tears were rolling down her cheeks while listening to him.


He embraced her giving her comfort.
"I will change my clothes and come.We will go to the hospital now".
She nodded her head slowly.
He went to change his clothes.
Veera said in her mind,
"I know Baldev.My death is near.I can't be saved.There is no use of hoping as it is Autumn".

He got ready and came out of the dressing room.Veera was sleeping.
"You slept again?Must be tired".
He lifted her up in his arms and started walking to the car.Suddenly he felt strange.His hands started shivering.He placed her down and held her hand.
"Veera".
His fingers moved towards her nose to feel her breath.
But she was not breathing.
To his shock he realized that he has lost his beloved forever.Veera's fear was right.Autumn has separated them from each other.They can never be together again.
Baldev's hopes were shattered and he cried loudly calling his beloved's name:Veeraiii!
Now even for Baldev,Autumn is the season of loss.Just ne second made him hate Autumn.Baldev could hear only the sad song of Autumn.



Leaves fell upon them.Baldev who loved leaf fall could only find melancholy in the leaves.

After a year...
Again an Autumn...
Baldev shed tears as it was Veera's first death Anniversary.
He saw a lone leaf flying towards him.

It fell on his shoulder.He took it from his shoulder and looked at it.He could see Veera's smiling face in it.Time has changed...may be Baldev also changed along with the time.Otherwise he would not have felt that this leaf was bringing his hope back after he buried his hopes when he lost his love.
He kept the leaf close to his heart.
He whispered to himself,
"My Veera is back to me in the form of a leaf".
That leaf gave him hope to live with his Veera.
It was sweet and sour moment: sweet memories of her made him smile, but when he remembered his loss sadness enveloped him.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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after such a long time... an os on veeba... nicely written... wish u write more on veeba
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Awsme os
Loved it

Keep smiling
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How sad, baldev all alone again

I remember reading it for the contest.

hope u write another one.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm! beautiful OS! well written
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WOW!! it was beautiful dear...loved it
By the way , ye contest hote kab hai...mujhe kabhi pata nahi chalta...
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I remember reading this
such a sad story
but very well written
thanks for pm n plz keep em comin

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