VeeBa FF ~Balika Vadhu~ part 4 pg 10 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Veera was in her room, she told Amrit everything on the phone and asked for some ideas.

Amrit; kal hi he shadi?

Veera; haan, ab me kya karun?

Amrit; let me think, tu abhi so jaa me subah batati hun kuch okay

Veera; neend ayegi mujhe? okay fine

Veera lay down and tried to sleep, but thoughts occupied her mind, she still had not even met baldev, she knew him but she had no idea how changed he is after he has grown up, she kept thinking until sleep took over and early morning Chaiji woke her up for her haldi ceremony, haldi was applied to her and then she was bathed with milk, all the while she sat as a statue and as she looked at Ratan she saw an expression of extreme satisfaction, she looked down and thought how can her mother be so heartless that she got her 3-4 months old daughter married.

Her mehendi was going on in the evening when Amrit tried to call her but Veera was unable to answer her calls. At about 8pm she was all alone in her room, completely dressed as a bride when Amrit called her again and she finally picked up.

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The rituals happened at Baldev's house too, he was annoyed badly and at last when he was completely dressed a groom his saturation limit was reached.

Baldev: main us se shadi nhi kr skta, wo meri dushman he nahi kabhi nahi, papaji ki jaydaat unhe hi mubarak ho, me bheek maang lunga par Veera de naal jeewan barbad nhi karunga

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At 8;30pm there was a situation of panic in both the houses. As the bride and groom had escaped.

The whole village was in search of the bride and groom and worried.

Baldev was almost 80km away from Pritampura and he stopped his bike at a dhabba for something to drink, he was having his bottle of alcohol when he heard a cry that was of a girl.

Girl; bachao! bachao!

Baldev left his bottle and went to see who wanted help, he saw the back of a girl in bridal avatar, red lehenga, red choli with a bare belly , her hair were messed up and her dupatta hanging on her arms, three big fat goons surrounded her hungrily. Baldev understood at once that she was in trouble.

Baldev; (shouting) oye chod do kudi nu

The girl turned and both of them froze, they recognized each other at once.

Goon; oye tu hota kon he hat pare, ye dulhan ab hamari he

The guy tried to touch her, she moved back, Baldev lost his cool, he closed his fist in anger, his pupils dilated and his face and eyes burned, he moved slowly towards the guy and then grabbed his collar.

Baldev; teri he?

He started beating all the three of them, Veera stood in shock.

Veera; ye menu dhundne aya he ki?

Baldev kept beating them but one escaped and came close to Veera and tried to touch her again.

Baldev; oye, khabardar jo meri voti ko haath lagane ki koshish bhi ki to

Veera's eyes opened wide, did she hear right? he called her his wife, that meant he had already accepted her and he was there to find her.

Baldev beat them so hard they lay on the floor but he didn't stop, Veera went to him and caught his arms

Veera; chad de ab maarega ki? chad de

Baldev; nhi nhi chadunga inhe main

Veera; Baldev chod

she pulled him to a side.

Veera; tu menu dhundne kyun aya he? dekh me tere naal vyah nhi krskti

Baldev; oye! me tenu dhundne kyun aonga me to khud vyah se bhaag k aya hun, pr tune to 7 janam tak mera peecha na chodne ki qasm kha rakhi he

Veera; tu bhi bhaga he, tu pehle nhi bta skta tha, phir me nhi bhagti na, veerji kitne pareshan ho rhe the

Baldev; tune btaya tha menu? akeli bhaag ayi esi bani thani dulhan k roop me, tenu pta nhi akeli kudi khuli hui tikori ki tarah hondi he, kuch hojata to?

Veera; kaha na menu tujhse shadi nhi krni thi

Baldev; to me to jese mara ja rha tha tere intizar me, bhootni, chal ab, akeli mat ghoom wrna tere so ashiqon se ladte ladte thak jaonga me

Veera; main wapas nahi jaa rhi pind wo hamari shadi krwa denge

Baldev; oye shadi to hamari pehle se ho rakhi he na

Veera; wo shadi nhi he, kanoon k mutabiq valid nhi wo

Baldev; pta he menu, pr dharm k mutabiq he, aur me pind nhi ja rha, pr tenu akela nhi chodunga me

Veera; nahi menu teri koi zarurat nhi hat!

she pushed him and started walking,

Baldev; rasi jal gai par bal nhi gaya, is ko to me

Baldev pulled her arm and then picked her up on his shoulder.

Veera; oye oye ki kr rha he chad menu

Baldev; chup oye, do qadam chalne pe hi tenu dusre gunde miljayenge chup kr k chal mere naal.

He walked towards his jeep, se kept protesting, some people at the dhabba witnessed it and blocked his way.

Man; oye tu kyun isko zabardasti udha k le ja rha he, kis ki dulhan he ye

Baldev; meri voti he ye, kahin bhi le jaon tujhe kya?

Man2; jhoot mat bol hum tujh jese gundon ko ache se pechante hen, bholi bhali kudiyon ko dara dhamka k uth k le aate ho, utaar ise nahi to tujhe chodenge nahi

Baldev; oye haath to laga ke dikha menu, ye meri voti hi hai, oye Veera tu kuch bol na..

Veera stayed silent

Man1; naa maang me sindoor na mangalsutr, kese maan len ise teri voti, aur ye dulhan kyun bani he jo teri shadi pehle se hui he to?

Baldev; teri to me!

Baldev saw a small temple, he rushed there and putting Veera down he filled her maang. Veera's jaw dropped

Baldev; lo khush tum log, ye meri voti he, hamara vyah phirse karwa rahe the ghar wale

Man2; acha jee maaf kardo

The man left.

Veera; ye kya kiya tune?

Baldev; kya?

Veera; jis waja se hum ghar se bhaage the wo to hogya na

Baldev; aisa kya kardiya mene?

Veera; bewaquf tune meri maang bhar di, hamara vyah pura kr diya, ab to kanoon k hisab se bhi hum shadi shuda hen, urgh! (she stomped her foot on the floor) sab barbad krdiya tune Baldeva

Baldev; to kya hua? hum talaq le lenge

Veera; wah! (she clapped) kya dimag lagaya he aapne Baldev Singh jee, tenu pata bhi hai talaq lena kinna mushqil hta he wo hamen kahenge bina sath rahe hi aapko talaq chahiye nhi koshish kijiye, 6-7 mahine hamen saath rehna padega aur itne me hamare ghar wale hamen emotional blakmail krlenge. Tune sab khatam krdiya, ab...ab chal wapas, ainvayi sab pareshan ho rhe honge, hum keh denge humne vyah krliya he

Baldev; sab teri galti hai, na tu bhagti na tere peeche wo gunde lagte na menu ye sb krna padta

Veera; shayad Rabjee bhi chahte hen k me tere naal apna jeewan barbaad karun

Baldev smiled, he looked at her closely.

Baldev; wese..ladte jhagadte zindagi beet hi jayegi tere naal

Veera; ki?

Baldev; aur wese dikhne me bhi tu full piece her

Veera was shocked and anger took over.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Yay !!!
Awesome update Sonu ! Gosh i love this Baldev ! And the storyline too cant wait for the next chapter !!!

Waiting...
Edited by .Jenvita_Neha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Superb update!
Runaway bride and groom 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
You picked this one from movie 'shudhh desi romance'. Bt twist in story,akhir tumne veeba ko jod he diya. Hillarious,dono k dono bhag khade hue 🤣 ranvi ka kya haal hoga! Baldev is so naughty,the last line! Fully enjoyed this part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonmusk

You picked this one from movie 'shudhh desi romance'. Bt twist in story,akhir tumne veeba ko jod he diya. Hillarious,dono k dono bhag khade hue 🤣 ranvi ka kya haal hoga! Baldev is so naughty,the last line! Fully enjoyed this part.

i have not watched shudh desi romance🤢 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: overactor


i have not watched shudh desi romance🤢😆

even i didn't,i've just read the review in newspaper.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Gud one!!! I am exited for the next! Keep updating!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
VeeBa bhaag gaye chahe alag alag hi sahi par mile phir el hi saath
"Both of them froze,,VeeBa recognized each other at forst glance" :* <3 pyaar k connection ;)
Baldeva :* "khabardaar jo meri voti ko haath lagaane ki koshish bhi ki toh" aye haaye meri voti
Sher was fighting for his sherni :*
"Main toh khud vyaah se bhaag ke aayaa hoon,par tune toh 7janam taq mera peechaa na chodne ki qasam khaa rakkhi hain" :v
Veera :v "tu bhi bhaagaa hain,tu pehle nahi bataa saktaa tha,phir main nahi bhaagti na" :v
Ballu with that filmy dialogue :v
Ballu :- "main toh jaise maraa jaa rahaa tha tere intezaar mein,bhootni,,chal ab,akeli matt ghoom warnaa tere sau ashiqon se ladte(2) thak jaaungaa main :v #Epic
Signature Ballu gesture :* "he pulled her arm and picked her up on his shoulder" :*
'Chup kar,do qadam chalne pe hi tainu dusre gunde mil jaayenge' :v
Kahan kahan se paidaa karti ho yeh saare dialogues? #Overactor :D
'Sab teri ghalti hain,na tu bhaagti na yeh sab hota' :v
Baldev :- "ladte jhagadte zindagi beet hi jaayegi tere naal,,dikhne mein bhi tu full piece hain" awww cutest Baldeva <3 :* '-'-
Naughty but the most honest baby Baldeva :* ,,,kaise bejhijhak dilki baatein saaf mann se bol detaa hain <3
Love him '-'-'-'-'-
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Each and every dialogue of baldev was just awesome ...waiting for next part ... CVS should read all ur ff's then they would get idea for a good and interesting story lines
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Awesome!!! Baldev married her on impulse and the way he said talaq for a solution so casually 🤣Baldeva's dialogs and VeeBa conversations were AMAZING! you rock sonu👏

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