VeeBa FF ~Balika Vadhu~ part 4 pg 10 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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You started on it already! Yay! Thought u were going to start on this after finishing with king. Nice prologue, cant wait to see how the story is going to shape up, update soon😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow nice prologue 👏 i like such stories now veera is baldev's amanat from chidhood itself
wow he has complete rights on her from childhood itself😉 update soon waiting😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Nice... Update 1st part soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Interesting Prologue, looking forward for an exciting update...👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zainabawoon

You started on it already! Yay! Thought u were going to start on this after finishing with king. Nice prologue, cant wait to see how the story is going to shape up, update soon😳

yeah i became impatient😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part_1

Balwant returned home smiling widely, Baldev who sat on the living room sofa made an annoyed face. Bansuri came out of the kitchen.

Bansuri; ki hoya surpunch jee aap ine khush lag rhe ho?

Balwant; khush to honga hi na Bansuri jee, Ranvi gaya he sheher Veera ko lene, aakhir wo ghadi aa hi gayi jiska barson se intizar tha

Baldev got up irritated

Baldev; haan to isme khush hone wali konsi gal he papaji? Uske aane ki wja se pind me 3 din ka sog rakhwa do, pind di museebat wapas aa rhi he

Balwant; oye chup kr nalaiq, Bansuri jee ab waqt agaya he use yahan laane ka aur is khote ko sb bta dete hen

Baldev; kya btana he? main uske swagat me kuch nhi krne wala, Veera wapas aa rhi he, koi rajkumari nahi

Balwant; oye nalaiqa mere ghar ki bahu wapas aa rhi he

Baldev; bahu? papaji aap ka dusra bhi koi puttar he ki?

Balwant; o nahi oye ik iklota tu hi he

Baldev laughed loudly

Baldev; aap ko lagta he k main us veera se vyah karunga (he laughed harder) me usse se theek se baat na karun vyah to door ki baat hai

Balwant; o nalaiqa menu pta si, par tenu vyah krne di koi lod nhi kyun ke tera vyah veera k saath bachpan main hi ho chuka he

Baldev was shocked, he stopped laughing.

Baldev; bachpan me? kab menu to esa kuch bhi yaad nahi, hum to bachpan me bhi dushman hi the

Balwant; o nahi oye, jab wo aayi thi tab hi, sampooran jaane se pehle vyah krwa ke gaya tha, tu bhool gaya tenu kaha tha naataq ho rha he

Baldev sat down, his eyes open wide in shock, he took deep breaths.

Baldev; nahi esa nahi ho skta aap mazaq kr rhe ho na papaji, aap log ne kabhi esa kuch, hum dushman hen, nahi main nahi maanta is vyah ko, menu kuch yaad nahi aur kanoon ke mutabiq bhi ye shadi nhi maani jayegi

Balwant; ithe ka kanoon surpunch honda he aur me maanta hun is vyah ko, je tune nahi maana to niqal jaa is ghar se hamesha ke liye aur me tenu ik phooti kodi nhi deni soch le phir tu.

Baldev was mad, he went to his room in anger.

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Veera and ranvi were returning from Delhi, Ranvi was silent until they were only 100kms away from pritampura.

Ranvi; Veerakhdi tenu ek gal dasni he

Veera; Bataiye veerji

Ranvi; wo veerakhdi dekh papaji ne jaane se pehle ek faisla liya tha, teri bhalai waaste hi, papaji ka faisla tha isiliye, unka sapna bhi, tu unka virodh to nhi karegi na

Veera; ofcourse not veerji, aap btaiye to baat kya hai

Ranvi; (closing his eyes he said in one breath) Paapji ne jaane se pehle tera vyah Baldev se krwa diya tha bachpan me hi

Veera didn't understand at first, but then she replayed his words in her mind and was shocked, her mouth and eyes opened wide.

ranvi; veerakhdi, kal hi teri shadi ki vidhi phirse kr k tenu vida krna hoga menu

Veera looked down her brain had so many questions but her mouth was unable to utter a word.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ppl im a little lazy can u deal without pms plx😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
such a lovely update... but too short... veeba shocked n you rocked...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Wow this is really interesting Sonu 😛 Loved the start !

Cant wait for their fight 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Omg I love it so much ! ❤️ continue this soon !!!
Cant wait cant wait !
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