VeeBa SS 'Path of True Love' part 5-page 16 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you everyone for comments 🤗

And Sorry for the late update😃


Part 5


Baldev entered in his old room, It was a mess.. Everything was at same place where it was 4 years back, things were fallen on floor nothing was at its right place, it looked like room was closed from many days but there were no dust, looks like it gets cleaned everyday

He had left that room since she left him, and shifted in another room

But he comes in that room to feel those few good moments which he had spent with her there..

He sits on the sofa and the file of their divorce papers was still there on table,

Baldev; Veera
*************

She woke up because she felt someone had called her name, she looked outside the window it was dark, then checked the time it was mid night...
*********

Baldev; Veera tu kahan hai..pichle 4 saal se paglon ki trhan tenu dhond raha hun, par tu aj bhi mujhse utni hi door hai
Tu kyun chali gai mujhse inni door, tune mere liye inna intzar kya bas ek din..bas ek din aur intzar kar leti tu,

He opened the file and saw her sign on papers

Baldev; Veera main sab kuch pehle jaisa karna chahta tha, us raat main ne socha tha subha sab kuch theek kar dunga..menu door nahi jana tha tujhse, tune mera intzar kyun nahi kiya..
********

She holds a framed picture, it was the picture which Baldev gave her
Veera; Baldev main ne tera intzar kiya tha..bohat intzar kiya, lekin main tenu mujhse door jata nahi dekh sakti thi is liye main ne khud nu hi tujhse door kar diya
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Baldev; ek bari to sochti, main tere bgar kaise rahoga..menu adat ho gai thi tere sath ki..
Veera..tu kyun chali gai, menu pata hai bohat dard diya hai main ne tenu aur tu naraz hai mujhse lekin tu bas ek moqa de menu main sab theek kar dunga..bas tu wapis aa ja
********

Veera; main tujhse kabhi naraz nahi thi Baldev, lekin ab bohat dair ho gai hai..hum dono kabhi sath nahi ho sakte
her eyes filled with tears and rolled down on her cheeks
*******

Baldev; Veera...tu mere nal aisa nahi kar sakti tenu wapis ana hi hoga..
Tears escaped from his eyes

He started searching for any clue from which he can find Veera, But there was nothing
******

Veera was seeing that picture with tears in her eyes, and talks with Baldev's picture
Veera; Baldev tenu pata hai.. Jab tune ye tasvir menu di thi, main ne tere pyaar di nishani samjh ke rakhi thi, tera ek hissa tha mere pas..
Lekin

She looked at her right side, and softly placed her hand on her forehead

Veera; lekin menu us wakat ye nahi pata tha ke iske sath tune apne pyaar di ek aur nishani bhi di hai, humari beti...
Baldev menu pata hai ke main humari beti ko tujhse door rakh kar acha nahi kar rahi lekin..
Lekin main ki karon, main majbor hun Baldev...please menu maf kar dena

She kissed on her forehead then smiles

Veera; sote huye bilkul teri tarhan lagti hai..
********

Next day


Baldev was going out from the house when bansuri stops him

Bansuri; Baldev puttar kithe ja raha hai

Baldev; kahin bhi jaon beeji apnu ki karna hai
Bansuri; puttar main to is liye poch rahi thi ke nashta to kar ke ja..
Baldev; nahi karna menu nasht..bhok nahi hai menu
Bansuri; tu inna gussa kyun kar raha hai..main to bas nashte vaste hi bol rahi thi
Baldev; beeji menu raat ko dair ho jayegi ap mera intzar mat
karna
Bansuri; lekin Baldev tu ja kithe raha hai
Baldev; Veera ko dhondne, jab tak menu Veera mil nahi jati main usko dhondta rahoga

Baldev left the house

Days were passing and Baldev's all efforts were wasting..He couldn't get any clue of Veera but he didn't loss hope and keep on searching for Veera everywhere, he visited police stations but it didn't helped him

Bansuri was really worried for Baldev, he goes out early in the morning and returned late at night..

One year later

Bansuri; Baldev..ruk puttar
Baldev was about to leave when Bansuri stops him
Bansuri; Baldev puttar pichle panch(five) saal se tu Veera nu dhond raha hai, lekin aj tak tenu uska kuch pata nahi chala..
Tu bhool kyun nahi jata usko..tu man kyun nahi leta ke wo ab tenu kabhi nahi milegi, tu bhool ja usko puttar aur dosri shadi kar ley..tu khud soch puttar kab tak aise akela rahega tu

Baldev; beeji ap kuch bhi kaho lekin main Veera ko nahi bhoola sakta aur dosri shadi to kabhi nahi karoga, aj ke bad ap is bare me gal nahi karogey warna main ye ghar chad ke chala jaon ga. He angerly replied
Bansuri; Baldev tu samjh nahi raha, main tere bhale vaste soch rahi hoon
Baldev didn't answered and left

In the evening
Bansuri was returning home when someone called her name and she stopped,Bansuri was confused she didn't know that person then how he knows her name

Bansuri ji ap Baldev singh ki beeji hain na?
Ji sahi pehchana apne lekin ap kon? Bansuri asked curiously
Main Baldev singh ka doctor hun wo mere pas apne elaj ke liye atey hain to pichle bar wo aye nahi..to main ne socha ap se poch lun, wo theek to hain na?

Bansuri couldn't believe what she hears, Baldev goes for treatment and he hides this from her

Bansuri; lekin Baldev nu hoya ki hai jiska wo elaj krwa raha hai?
Doctor; wo jo kuch din jail me reh kar aye the uski waja se unke dimagh par bohat bura asar hua tha.. Unki wife Veera ati thi pehle mere pas lekin phir unho ne ana chor diya tha..aur phir ek din Baldev khud aye mere pas wo chahte the ke main unki madad karon..unka elaj karon ta ke wo phir se phle ki trhan ho jayen..
Bansuri; par Baldev ne menu is bare me kuch nahi btaya
Doctor; shyad wo apko bad me btana chahte hoon gey.. Unho ne mujhse kaha tha ke wo ye sab sirf apni wife ke liye karna chahte hain,
Bansuri; Baldev ke andar sudhar to hua hai..ab usko phle jitna gussa nahi ata..
Doctor; ye sab us dwai ka asar hai jo main ne Veera ko di thi Baldev ke liye..ap ke bete bohat khushnaseeb hain jo unko Veera jaisi bewi mili..jinho ne unke elaj ke liye itna kuch kiya,

Bansuri couldn't say anything but was in shock hearing all this

Bansuri; Acha menu jaldi hai main chalti hun..
Bansuri left and after sometime reached home..She saw Baldev's old room door was opened,
Bansuri; Baldev aj inni jaldi ghar aa gaya, main ja ke dekhti hun

Baldev was sitting on sofa and looking at file with tears in eyes
Baldev; Veera menu maf kar de, menu bas..bas ek moqa de
Main sab theek kar dunga..wapis aa ja Veera, main tere bgar nahi reh sakta..tu jo bole gi main karon ga aur tenu pata hai main doctor ke pas bhi jata hun tu yehi chahti thi na..

Bansuri heard all this and felt guilty.. She thought,She had done really bad with her own son, and now she will not let him be like this

She goes to her room and started searching for something, she searched for some time then got what she was looking for.. She then goes to Baldev's room and gave that thing to him


It was a letter


Baldev main ne bohat kushish ki ke tenu apne pyaar ka yaqeen dilao lekin main har gai..tenu aur tere pyaar dono ko har gai..main ja rahi hun..tujhse door, sab se door jahan main ne apni zindagi ke bohat saal akele guzare hain agar kabhi bhi tenu meri zarorat mehsos ho to aa jana..main tera intzar karon gi.. Baldev main ne azad kiya tenu apne ap se. Yehi chahta tha na tu ab main tenu kabhi pareshan nahi karon gi main tujhse door ja rahi hun hamesha ke liye..lekin Baldev main tenu aj bhi bohat pyaar karti hun aur hamesha karti rahogi..
Veera


Baldev; beeji..eh ap ke pas..kaise? Apnu kahan mila
Bansuri; menu maf karde puttar, jis raat Veera ghar chad ke gai thi main kamre vich gai thi aur menu table par eh khat(Latter) mila..
mujhe laga ke agar ye letter tenu mil gaya to tu Veera nu dhond lega aur wo is ghar me wapis aa jayegi.. Main nahi chahti thi ke Veera is ghar me wapis aye is liye main ne ye letter chuppa liya.. Lekin Baldev eh sab main ne teri bhlai vaste kiya tha

Baldev didn't said anything and saw the letter again
Baldev; sab se door akeli mtlab..mtlab Delhi..Haan eh main ne phle kyun nahi socha

Baldev calls jaggi and asked him to meet him soon they have to go Delhi

Bansuri; Baldev puttar inni raat ho rahi hai is wakat tu Delhi
Baldev; bas beeji.. Apnu jo karna tha wo kar liya ab jo bhi karna hai main kar lunga
He didn't let her complete her sentence, and said angerly his eyes gets red in anger and he left from there

Bansuri; Baldev aj main tenu nahi rokun gi tu ja aur dhond la apni zindagi ko terit khushi us me hi hai.. main hi tum dono ko alag krna chahti thi par ab nahi ab boht ho gya bas tu lay aa apni zindagi ko dhond kar aur main dua krun gi puttar ke tenu Veera mil jaye..

Edited by Lovelyvb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very well expressed! Bahut alasi ho par aati ho toh smile lekar ati ho. Bansuri sudhar gai(saffa i think u like bansuri :-D) bt when baldev will meet veera a big blast is going to happen. Ab kitne dino bad update dogi!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sonmusk

Very well expressed! Bahut alasi ho par aati ho toh smile lekar ati ho. Bansuri sudhar gai(saffa i think u like bansuri :-D) bt when baldev will meet veera a big blast is going to happen. Ab kitne dino bad update dogi!

thank u 😳 hahaha main to hamesha bolti hun im THE LAZIEST 🤣 aww im glad ke meri waja se ap smile karti ho 😃 lol no i dont like but phir story me kuch twits ke liye krna parta hai 😆 abhi to kuch pata nahi.. main ne aj apni assignment nahi bnai is update ki waja se.. 😕 but i'll try to give it ASAP 😆 thank u once again🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Lovelyvb

thank u😳hahaha main to hamesha bolti hun im THE LAZIEST🤣 aww im glad ke meri waja se ap smile karti ho😃lol no i dont like but phir story me kuch twits ke liye krna parta hai😆abhi to kuch pata nahi.. main ne aj apni assignment nahi bnai is update ki waja se..😕but i'll try to give it ASAP😆thank u once again🤗

:-/ pehle assignment banao,update toh apna show bhi hote rehta hai :-D just joking bt pls give 1st priority to ur work,baki bad me bhi hota rahega
Posted: 10 years ago
That was an update with full of emotional moments :) Nicely expressed & Bansuri is changing :-P Hehe... Do make her the good person she's turning out. Baldev & Veera are devoted to each other, really nice. Waiting for the next :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome one
thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update...
Thanks for pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was damn emotional,my heart was aching with pain,it was that very well written,good job 👏👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
arey wah...Bansuri also realised that Ballu loves Veera a lot and that she is the right person for him...finally kuch clue toh mila ballu ko..
Looking forward for Veeba milan via unki nanhi pari 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow veeba had an daughter so cute.. Baldev will love his little angel... Thanks for changing bansuri. Nice update 👍🏼 thanks for the PM.. Waiting for next part.


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