VeeBa SS 'Path of True Love' part 5-page 16 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: veeba4eva

This is so good!! I somehow missed part 2 so I just read the last two together.. It's so good!! Keep up the good effort guys ❤️ ...and did VeeBa meet again or is this another flashabck?

awww thank u so much for your appreciations its really means a lot for u 🤗 u come to know in our upcmng updates 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks a lot 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys.. Thank you for your comments🤗

Part 4

Baldev; andar chal.. Barish me bemar par jayegi Veera was unable to understand what just happened..she was standing still Baldev turned back and moved towards her, She was looking at him surprisingly, till now she kept on believing that she understands him well because she knows him since childhood but now she has doubt Did she ever knew him!? Baldev was now standing in front of her, she looked into his eyes like if searching for something..maybe the answer of those so many questions that were running in her mind

She thinks in her mind Baldev..main tenu bachpan se janti hun..lekin ab menu lag raha hai ke main tenu kabhi samjh hi nahi saki, teri dushmani tera pyaar teri narazgi teri nafrat tera gussa yahan tak ke mere liye teri fikar sab kuch dekha hai main ne..Lekin tera ye roop kabhi nahi dekha is ko kya samjho main, mere liye tera pyaar ya nafrat Tears were rolling down on her cheeks but in heavy rain Baldev was unable to saw her tears, she was lost in her thoughts, trying to get answers of her questions and kept on looking into his eyes Baldev hold her from shoulders and shock to bring her back in senses Baldev; tu aise nahi manegi na He lift her and brings her inside the poly house, she didn't said anything..They both had an eyelock

When they entered songs were playing on radio

[Ankhon ki neend ho, shabnam ki boond ho bas tum Honton ki pyaas ho, jeene ki aas ho bas tum] Veera broke eyelock and turned to leave but Baldev holds her hand and she looked at him

[Mere khiyalon ki dhondli fasilon pe subha ki barish ho tum Thode se hum thode se tum ishq mein kho rahe,thode se hum thode se tum mukamal ho rahe] He pulled her, she tried to free her hand but his grip gets stronger and he moved towards her, she steps back and losses her balance.. they both fell on hue, now Baldev was on her

[Main meri neende jagey tere hi liye, ye meri neende jagey tere hi liye Kyun har khoshi muskuraye tere hi liye] Baldev gets closer, their lips were about to touch but Veera pushed him She stood up and moved from there, he followed and hugged her from back

[Main tera aaks hoon tu mera aina, aa mitta de sabhi dooriyan Thode se hum thode se tum ishq mein kho rahe,Thode se hum thode se tum mukamal ho rahe] She freed herself from him and starts moving back as Baldev moved towards her Veera hits the wall, Baldev gets closer and lift her..They had eyelock and he lay her down on hue without breaking eyelock

[Kyun tera zikar rahe khiyalon mein mere Kyun is tarhan rehta hai tu swalon mein mere] Veera was about to say something but Baldev put his finger on her lips,He gets closer and Veera closed her eyes Baldev kissed on her eyes, then on ear..he move towards her neck and kissed She slides her hand around his neck...and run her fingers in his hair

[khwahishien tu meri, rahatein tu meri Fasle na rahe darmiyaa Thode se hum thode se tum ishq mein kho rahe Thode se hum thode se tum mukamal ho rahe] Veera felt him tracing his fingers over her cheeks, then lips and continues over chin and slowly down her neck Baldev's fingers run through her hair

He put his lips on hers and kissed gently but it slowly became passionate..

After couple of hours, they were laying wrapped in each others arms, a feeling of completeness and oneness surrounded them..

Sun rays passes through windows and enter in the room, lightened their sleeping faces..Veera opened her eyes and realised what had happened last night,she saw his innocent sleeping face and kissed on his forehead.. She was in his arms and nothing else mattered anymore for her..

(wanted to embed the song 'thode se hum' from Badmashiyan movie, but not able to find the mp3 for some reason😳 so I'm embedding a video..i request u all to play the video in background and read the update with it)


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fg7JhMMnkSY[/YOUTUBE]

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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
This is intense but the question still remains.. Flashback or present..? Eagerly waiting for next update!! Update quick plz 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Loved it...
nice update.
Thanks for pm. 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Amazing Update...!!! ⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
That was so hot intense and romantic ☺️ i was actually imagining the scene in my head 😆 while reading i was blushing kash mash issa kuch actual show par dhikata.
Awesome awesome update i loved. Specially baldev putting veera on the hay part. Thanks for PM. 😃
Posted: 10 years ago
#98
That was a lovely update saffy 😊 Really nice. Do update e next part soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
*Blush blush *
Awesome updaye guyz ! Update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was an awesome update...
Thx for pm...update soon...

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