Kiss of death- VeeBa OS❤️ Pls read(VdaySpecial)

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Hi guys, Happy Valentines day everyone🤗

today I'm here with that sweet romantic VeeBa One shot i had promised to some people few days back😳😉 let me tell you one thing before u proceed, this story has no logic and its all fantasy😆

~Kiss of death~




She blinked to see if this was another of dreams which she had been having a lot since her marriage. Dreams which were rosy and beautiful, where she sailed in skies and waltzed on waters and danced with his arms on hers.. Dreams which soothed her behind closed eye lids and pricked in day time because they were never going to come real, but she could have been wrong. This was not a dream at all..

He said, "yeh dekh, maine humara naam is taale par likh diya..Veera aur Baldev..ab hum kabhi alag nahi honge..woh kya kehte hain, happy belantimes day! Main tennu bohot pyar karta hoon"(See, I wrote our names on this lock, Veera and Baldev..we'll never get separated again) he hugged her with passion.

As she laid her head on his chest, she did not know if she should smile in wonderment, cry in amazement or laugh at his innocence having pronounced Valentine's day' as belantimes day'

"Baldev..main bhi tennu bohot pyar karti hoon..aur who belantimes nahi hota bewakoof, Valentine's day hota hai"(Yes yes, I love u too, and you idiot, it is called valentines day') she pulled his cheeks, kissing them each and ruffling his hair.

They were in Poland, where it had all began. At the lock bridge which bore their names with the key safely tossed away in the sea below.

"achha tujhe yeh belantimes' day ke bare me kaise pata? Sach bata, kisi ladki ne batayana tennu..chal mennu tujhse baat nahi karni"(Okay now, tell me how did u get to know about this day? Did any girl tell you? Tell me the truth, otherwise I'm not going to talk to you) she turned her face in false anger.

"haan ek kudi ne bataya..aur uska naam hai.."(Yup, a girl told me and her name is..) he looked lost in thoughts.

"koun hai woh?"(Who is she?)jealousy dripped in her voice, unconcealed.

"Gunjan ne bataya mennu..chal abhi wapas chalte hain..tere liyeek surprise aurhai"(Gunjan told me about it, now let's go, I have another surprise for you) he took her hands into his and touched them to his heart.

Her paradise was back, beast turned to prince again and they were here on an unofficial honeymoon.

Just three days ago, they were not even on talking terms. Now it seemed like a nightmare she never wanted to revisit again.

Her eyes became moist, remembering the incidents which had led to the happiest Valentine's Day anyone anywhere had celebrated.

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It was 11th February when the post man delivered a thick manila envelope to their house. Baldev tore it to find a letter typed in queens English, but addressed to his name. She waited to see what he'd do next and he did just what she guessed.

"yeh khat padhke suna mennu..chal shuru ho jaa"(Read this letter for me, will you?) he said as rudely as he could. Uff, this new husband of hers was a real scare sometimes.

She read it silently for a minute and then as she went to the further paragraphs, her eyes widened and as she finished it, her eyes were the size of saucers.

"muh me zaban nahi haiteri..bata ki likha hai isme?"(Have you lost your tongue or what? What is in the letter, tell me quickly) he prodded.

"isme likha hai ki.."(It says that..) she was too lost for words.

"itna kyon chounk rahi hai? Lottery lagi kya teri?"(Why are you so shocked? Did you win a lottery or something?)He asked sarcastically.

"kuch aisa hi samajhle"(Think that it's something similar) she could say only so much.

"tu rehne de, main kisi aur se padhva lunga"(okay, forget it, I'll ask someone else to read it for me) he tried to take away the letter but she stopped him.

"rukja Baldev...isme yeh likha hai ki Nihal chachu ne, Nihal chachu ne apni Poland wali saari property hum dono ke naam likhi hai aur usi silsile me hum eek hafte ke andar andar Poland jaana hoga"(Stop Baldev, this letter says that Nihal uncle has written his entire property in our names in his will, and we both have to go to Poland as soon as we can, in this regard) her voice seemed to come from very far away as she spoke in disbelief.

"tera Mazak tujhe Mubarak..ab asli baat bata" (Keep your jokes to yourself, now tell me the truth)

"Main Mazak nahi karrahi, yeh dekh..tu khud dekh" (I was notjoking..see for yourself) she handed him the letter.

His own shock over powered him as he realized that she had not been bluffing.

The on everyone who heard the news either went into highest level of shock or either to the heights of jealousy. By that night it was decided that Baldev would go to Poland alone and take care or probably sell whatever property had been transferred to his name; since he could not stay there for long.

"tu akele nahi jaayega samajh gaya tu? Aur tu shayad bhool raha hai ki woh property hum dono ke naam likhi hai, mere bina tu uska kuch nahi kar sakega toh menu chalna hi hoga tere naal"(You can't go alone, do you get it? Don't forget that he has willed it to us, you can't take care of it all alone; I have to come with you)Veera exclaimed.

With the nastiest sneer he could muster, he chided her that not only she, but even relatives were set to prove that he could not lift a finger without her help. She had no reply to that.

It was the night of 12th February and Deja vu took over Veera's mind as she traversed through the airport once again after so long. How different was it last time..most importantly, two things had changed drastically, one; she was going for a learning experience last time and this time for something else altogether. Two; Baldev was..words failed and her throat constricted as she thought of the old Baldev who had accompanied her to Poland Last June. His humorous nature, his kind side, his mischievous side, much more than anything else, the love that had bloomed between them, she wanted everything back, she could have traded her life to get it all back, if that was possible.

When they checked in with their baggage and other things it was like two strangers travelling together. It seemed that he was trying to avoid her as much as he could. He called the airhostess to ask if she could shift him to another seat, as he saw that their seats were next to each other. But his request was turned down as the flight was full.

Baldev made a face, shook his head and concentrated on the free drink that was being served.

It was about an hour later, when Veera woke up suddenly from the slumber she had fallen into. The plane was shaking badly and every piece of luggage was falling down from overhead bins. People were walking up and down the aisle in panic and some were looking panic stricken. The harried airhostess tried to calm them but they ignored her.

The pilot's cool and trained voice came over the mike, asking them to sit back on their seats as there was nothing to panic. The plane was going through the very common air turbulence and it would probably pass soon.

Veera felt a bout of motion sickness and she was about to enter the wash room when two people's voices made her stop in her tracks. There were two airhostesses talking just behind the wooden partition that separated the wash area from the staff cabin.

"Should we tell the passengers about the real problem, the plane has developed a snag in the engine and it can go up in flames any moment.." one of them said.

"no..the pilot is very experienced and he will take care of the problem so I think we should keep quiet and not scare the passengers unnecessarily" the other replied.

Veera felt dizzy. They all were set to die anytime soon and no one had a clue about it. Baldev, sleeping with a permanent mask of anger specially designed for her; his life was in danger, along with so many others.

His dear face appeared in front of her as she walked back to her seat. Not too long ago, while taking the vows of marriage, she had promised him that she'd take upon herself, any danger that came his way, that she'd stand with him in sickness and health..

Maybe the love that he had for her had died, the previously mutual feeling of affection was one sided now, but with their lives at stake, did it matter that he hated her guts? Her life was put on a timer and she had one last task left to finish before bidding final adieu to the world.

"Baldev?" she shook him softly.

He woke up with a huge question mark in his eyes.


The remaining is below in the second post😳

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(remaining part)

"dekh, abhi main jo bolne wali hoon..woh dhyan naal sun..kyonki iske baad shayad hum kuch bolne sunne ke layak na rahe..tujhe mujhpar gussa karna hai kar par meri ek baat sunle..please"(Look, I'm going to tell you something very important now, please listen to me very carefully, if you want to get angry, then do, but hear me out once) she pleaded.

"aisa kya kehne wali hai tu?"(What is so important?)

"main abhi washroom se lout rahi thi toh maine 2 logon ko baat karte suna..yeh plane kabhi bhi phat sakti hai, hum beech hawa me mar sakte hain..par mujhe marne se darr nahi lag raha, mujhe is baat se dukh ho raha haiki mere naal jee nahi paayi zyada din, par mujhe khushi bhi hai ki marte samay bhi tu mere naal hai.."(I was just coming from the washroom when I heard two people talking, the plane can burst any moment..we can die midair..but I'm not scared of dying, I'm getting sad thinking about the fact that my life with you was too short, but I'm happy that when I die, you'll be by my side) her voice became thick with emotion.

"main marne se pehle tujhe bas itna kehna chahti hoonki-ki main tujhse pyar karti hoon, bohot pyar karti hoon..maine na jaane kitni baar tennu dukh diya hai, kitni baar chot pohonchayi hai aur uske liye maafi tak nahi maangi..tu aaj bas itna jaanle ki tu meri duniya ka suraj hai, teri roshni se main khilti thi aur tere bina andhere me murjha jaatithi..mera suraj dooba toh main bhi nahi rahungi..humari zindagi bas khatam hone hi wali hai, main tujhe batana chahti hoon ki maine aaj tak tere jitna pyar kisi se nahi kiya, apne veer ji se bhi nahi, khudse bhinahi.."(Before I die, I want to tell you this much, that I love you, love you so much..I have hurt you infinite times, been the cause of your pain a million times and I didn't even apologize.. just want to tell you that you were the sun and I was the flower reigning in your warmth, you disappear and I will wither..at this moment, just want you to know that I've never loved anyone more than you, not my brother, not myself) as she kissed his hand, a huge tear fell down from her eyes, staining the seat.

Baldev had suddenly lost his voice. What was she saying? Were they really in such big danger? Is this some kind of a game? A late night dream maybe..

He looked at his wife's weeping face and a wave of some tugging emotion rose inside him. Her face looked crestfallen and she was crying continuously. When was the last time that she had smiled? When was it that he had not looked at her with scorn but with love? He did not remember...

Everything felt so unreal at the moment, like waking up from a deep sleep in a strange, unknown place. He still could not believe that everything was going to end this way. He held his head tightly with both hands and drew in a slow breath.

The timer was ticking, tick tock tick tock..and he was still wasting time brooding over himself and his miseries, hadn't he always believed that life was too short and one had to make the most of it every moment? So where had life gone? He had been too busy settling scores and it had passed by him..

He looked at her again and saw that she had buried her head in her own lap and she wept silently, probably thinking that he was going to shout at her for whatever she had said a minute ago.

"Veera?" he called out her name softly and she looked up.

The glistening drops in her eyes, the sheer helplessness and unmasked fear on her face diluted the last drop of hatred he had so forcefully accumulated inside him for so long.

Her eyes bore into his, forging a connection so deep. He placed a warm hand on her cheek and she took his free hand in hers, placing it directly above her heaving heart which was perhaps beating its last few beats. That small gesture brought everything they felt to the forefront and tears flew abundant from both pairs of eyes. The tears made it difficult to see each other but they refused look away. This moment was so precious, so rare; few prized seconds where there were no words or sentences yet they could comprehend everything that was unsaid. All barriers broke, disentangling all knots that had complicated their relationship. They exchanged thousand words silently, yet a single word too was not required. They smiled together for all those moments of their courtship and they cried together for all that precious time after marriage which they had never valued in true sense.

She bent forward, cupping his face in her palm. He did the same and both closed their eyes; sending up a silent prayer to god to protect the one they loved the most and pleading for another chance at life.

Five minutes must have passed or it could have been a life time, when the Pilot's voice came over the mike again, making Veera and Baldev open their eyes suddenly.

The Pilot informed them about the snag the aircraft had incurred and requested them not to panic. He said that since flying until Poland in this condition was impossible, they were aiming for an emergency landing at a nearby airport in about 20 minutes or so. The passengers could take a connecting flight thereafter and everything was under control.

No one said a word until the plane landed. Veera heaved a sigh of relief but did not let go her darling husband's hand until they had set foot on solid earth.

They were in the waiting lounge, anticipating the arrival of the connecting flight, when it hit her that she was not walking through a fantasy but reality. All those fears, that danger was gone now. They were alive! Yes they had not died midair..but then, will he go back to his brooding, preoccupied self again?

"kya hum sach me bach gaye? Hum mare nahi? Woh sab jo plane me hua-"(Did we really escape death? We didn't die? And what about the things we spoke in the plane..) He did not let her complete her sentence, smothering her voice and choking her with a tight hug.

"haan Veera, hum dono bach gaye..jis baat ka dar tha woh nahi hua..hum zinda hain!!"(Yes Veera, we both are not dead! What we feared never happened! We are alive!!) he exulted.

"iska matlab, tune..mennu, maaf kiya?"(So does that mean..you have, forgiven me?) she asked apprehensively, in a small voice, fearing the return of the angry young man.

He released her and her heart stopped beating for a second. Then he took a deep breath and began, "jab tune menu bataya ki ab hum marnewale hain aur plane phtane wala hai, tab menu purane dino ki yaad agayi, woh din jab hum chote the..har pal ladte-jhagadte the hum lekin ek dusre se door nahi ho sakte the, mujhe laga ki mennu ek baar aise pal dobara mil jaaye, ek vari aur zindagi mil jaaye toh main use kabhi nahi jaane doonga..mujhe yeh samajh aaya ki koi bhi zidd, koi bhi shikwa shikayat, pyar se badhkar nahi hai, jab hum hi nahi rahenge toh gusse ka kya karein? Tujhse badhkar kuch nahi hai Veera, tu hai toh main hoon, tu nahi toh main bhi nahi"(When you told me that we have no hope and we are going to die, I was reminded of old days, our childhood days when we fought all the time; but we were never apart, I desperately wished that somehow we get those minutes back..i understood that any resentment or complaint is not bigger than love.. when we don't exist, then why should we let the anger live? There's nothing more important than you, if you are not there, I won't be there too) he lifted her face gently and she looked down shyly.

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"Kitthe kho gayi tu? Wapas aaja hume ghar jaana hai.."(Where are you lost? Come back, we have to go home) he tickled her and she came back to the present, locking away the memory trove for another day.

As they got down from their vehicle at the gate of the ranch, Veera's eyes lit up in astonishment, the whole wooden gate had been decorated with crimson roses and a huge board with the words Happy valentine's day' stood next to the gate with balloons and festoons in place.

"chal ab aankhein band kar"(Close your eyes) he closed her eyes with his left palm and took her right hand to guide her forward.

"tu kitthe le jaa raha hai mennu? Ruk, mat bata, tu kahin bhi le jaayena, main aankhein band karke tere saath aaungi, bilkul isi tarah"(Where are you taking me? Wait don't tell me, I will come anywhere with you with my eyes closed) she said the words with conviction.

They must have walked for five minutes or so. Veera had removed her foot ware and she could feel cool grass at first and then the grass slowly gave way to tiny rocks under her feet. As the breeze hit her face, she understood where she was.

"chal ab aankhein khol"(Open your eyes now) he released her.

Her gasp echoed in the whole river front as she drank in, the unmatched beauty of that place. The silent waters coolly flowed without giving away their presence and birds waited on the shore, waiting for that perfect opportunity to lunge into the river and steal the fish. The big and small rocks shone in the glow of the fading sun and the small trees lining up the river bank swayed their branches slowly. This was the same place where they had danced together and celebrated the Kupala festival last time. The same place where she had floated the sacred wreath in the name of the one she loved..

"tu yahan kyon laaya mennu? Tera woh surprise dene waaste?"(Why did we come here? For that surprise?) she could barely hold back her tears.

"sahi socha tune..tujhe pata hai yahan aate waqt main kya sochke aaya tha? Yahi ki yeh saari property kisi ko bechke paise leke hum india chale jaayenge..par ab maine faisla kiya hai ki hum yeh nahi bech sakte kisi gair ko..yahan humare pyar ki shuruat hui, yeh jagah humare liye bohot khaas rahegi humesha..toh hum yahan saal me ek baar zaroor aayenge.."(You guessed it right..do you know what I thought while coming here from India? I had plans to sell this property and go back to our country with the money, but now I have decided that we will not sell it to any unknown persons, because this was the place where our love was born..it is special, and it will be special for years to come..you see, we'll come here once a year atleast, until we live) he said wiping her tears away gently.

"tera surprise mennu bohot bohot achcha laga..par, par main tere liye kuch nahi kar paayi..maine toh tennu koi gift bhi nahi di.."(I loved your surprise, but I could not do anything for you.. I didn't even buy a gift) she lamented.

"tu mennu abhi bhi gift de sakti hai.."(You can still buy a gift for me)

"kaisi gift?"(What gift?)

"dekh, mennu poori cricket team khadi karni hai, toh 11 bachche kaafi honge?..saath me do extra player bhi, aur uske saath.."(See I want to create an entire cricket team, so eleven kids will be enough? Two extra players will also be needed and also..) he began to count his fingers and Veera slapped his arm playfully.

"tu kabhi nahi sudhrega..tennu toh main!"(Oh you will never change!!) she hit him again.

"chal cricket team na sahi, pappi toh de hi sakti hai"(Ok let the cricket team be, you can give me a kiss atleast) he pouted.

As the last rays of the sun fell over the lush earth, they sat together on one of the huge rocks, feeling the warmth of the blanket both shared. The air held the fragrance of wild flowers and moss. Their eyes shared a common dream; of the lovely life they were going to have and all the much loved children they were going to create; now the subject had been raised. They didn't have to express in words that it was the most beautiful Valentine's Day that was ever celebrated by two people.


i wanted to post the entire thing together but this IF😡

lol..So, i hope i lived upto the challenge, this story had no negativity (ok almost😆)

it took me 5 days to put this together friends😳 please comment and like😛

The title of the story was suggested by one of my dearest friends🤗 so this is dedicated to her😃

Thank you🤗


Edited by ..IshqShava.. - 10 years ago
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Guys, seriously 218 views and no one, absolutely no one felt like posting a comment or pressing a like??
I'm hurt really😭
maybe i shouldn't have posted this..sorry everyone😊
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Wow!You made my day 😳
Lovely OS ❤️ VeeBa in Poland all over again Loved every bit of it!
Thanks for bringing back the memories of Kupala Fest Watched it last night on star utsav!The best track of the show ❤️
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Wow its so amazing vibha👏. I loved it from the start to the end. BAldev wants a cricket team and two extra players😆 it was aweome.
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Originally posted by: ...Jammy...

Wow!You made my day 😳

Lovely OS ❤️ VeeBa in Poland all over again Loved every bit of it!
Thanks for bringing back the memories of Kupala Fest Watched it last night on star utsav!The best track of the show ❤️



Thanks Jammy🤗😃 yup, even i watch it on star utsav.. that was the best track this show ever had, no doubt!
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Happy Valentine's day❤️
This was such a beautiful veeba story and so apt for the day. Thank you so much for taking us back to one of my fav Poland track. You recreated the magic yet again from where it started. 🤗
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Originally posted by: overactor

Wow its so amazing vibha👏. I loved it from the start to the end. BAldev wants a cricket team and two extra players😆 it was aweome.



Thank you Sonu🤗😃
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Originally posted by: vinu24

Happy Valentine's day❤️

This was such a beautiful veeba story and so apt for the day. Thank you so much for taking us back to one of my fav Poland track. You recreated the magic yet again from where it started. 🤗



aww thank you🤗❤️ Poland track is my favorite too very Happy Valentines day!
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aww Vibha you made my valentines day complete😃..
This is so beautiful..i enjoyed every moment of this OS😳
poland and veeba is an unforgettable combo❤️...im glad you included Poland atmosphere for this😛😛...
happy valentines day sis...you rock😎...

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