my first veeba and ranjan love story chapter 1

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys here goes chapter 1

chapter 1
the introduction
Ranvi was driving in his tractor thinking about Veera.He was very exited that Veera was coming in 2 days but also worried because his mother Ratan did not accept Veera even after the long 15 years,not once Veera came in her pind.Ranvi visited her often in her college that also reminded him of Annanya a small smile crept on his full lips.SMASH!!His tractor had crashed in a nearby tree while fixing Gunjan's eyes fell on Ranvi a slight shyness flushed over her face and the very next second decided to talk to him.
Gunjan:ki haal hai Ranvi vadde pareshaan lag rahe ho.
in a worried and helpful voice while Ranvi with all irritation
Ranvi:main...main toh aethe avai mazey kar raha tha inni kadi dhoop vich..vikhai nahi de raha tractor nu sahi kar raha hoon aur koi kaam nai hai tere paas mere naal galley karane ke illawa meri Veerakadi parson aa rahi hai ussi de vaaste apna kaam khetaan vich jaldi khatam kar raha hoon.ab agar aap ke fuzool ke sawaal hogai toh main kaam karaoon...??
suddenly Gunjan became very sad and tears blurred her vision she ran away not wanting to show them.
Ranvi:lagta hai bura maan gai
and then he drove off to the fields and sat near to the Krishi Vidiyaley board and said
Ranvi:papaji parson meri Veera aa rahi hai aapka sapna pura karne vaaste.
It was 3:50 in the morning while Karan and Veera escaped the college premises for a bachelor party Veera wore a short red dress with loud red lip gloss with red high heels and looking very hot while Karan wore a black and white suit with a black bow and looking dashing.They both entered the party while everyones' eyes were fixed on a very hot looking gorgeous Veera and Karan noticed it and felt jealous while on the other hand Veera was least bother there on the dance floor Karan heard her voice
Veera:oye Romeo othe ki kar raha hai asley maza toh aethe hai.
Karan:haan...haan aa raha hoon.
They both danced on Baby doll and came back before her convocation.yeah she had lied to her Veerji she had all new plans since the convocation was one day earlier and she had an idea
note:ok guys this is for chapter 1 pls tell whether continue or not


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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOL, this looks better than the show itself!
Please write more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The original chapters are here
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4134906


Chapters 1-7
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start dear!Liked dis Ranvi!😃But plz dnt giv too much of Karan,or Karan Veera scenes..He giv me headache!Nd I missed Ballu!😳Do update soon!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks to get the full story pls open this link with the introduction and don't worry I won't show Karan veera a lot

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4134906&PID=111934775&#p111934775
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