Jagraata Express: 'Jo bhi tha, PERFECT tha..' ❤️ - Page 15

Originally posted by: -Amri-

@ RR

Time and the big,bad world are the best teachers:)

@ Divya

If I am not wrong, I think it was you who mentioned in one of your posts long ago that you ordered a copy of her book. How was it, bud?

I hope for your sake that her writing is better than her singing:)

Thats the whole point 😆 I'd rather my parents correct me or explain things to me than have a third part mock/ backbite..To each his own i guess 😆

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Not done, RR😡

@Divya

What an eerie co-incidence! You answered to my question even before I asked it!!! I was meaning to ask you this for quite some time now.

Tussi great ho jii! 😃And my condolences. Nothing spoils one's mood like a badly-written book.

no no that is okay , actually i put lot of efforts to understand what she has written, , each sentence is a test for u ... like that I read 2 chapters -then had to stop

Originally posted by: divyasn

I wont comment about the story or writing style ... but sadly the book is full of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors ...

She uses the word "devotional" instead of "devoted" in many places ... , she does that in her interviews too if u notice ..

I really wonder why the book was not corrected by someone before publishing ...

Originally posted by: rogerrocks

So what? Look at the guy in front of you..And his eyes..And his compliment 😳😆

She blushed when he said she looked like pataka 😆

Originally posted by: rogerrocks

Thats the whole point 😆 I'd rather my parents correct me or explain things to me than have a third part mock/ backbite..To each his own i guess 😆

Tu hi mera rab woyld have been way better then happy shappy.uff sp

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Hmm. The publishing house needs to be established in the first place. I randomly googled the details of her book one day. And the publishing house didn't sound like Penguin/Bloomsbury types to me!

And 16 is too young to publish, IMO. Great writers are handed their first rejection slips at this age, and then they hone their craft and achieve sublimity.

But I guess you can applaud her courage. I am 23, and I wouldn't dare to share a draft of my (non-existent) literary manuscript to an editor's scrutiny!!!😆

that is courage ya delusion - patha nahin ...

To give the credits - story i liked -- story of mermaids ... -- one mermaid is in kind of coma , to treat her , her friend is coming to human world to collect true tears of a human - in love failure .

till that pt i read ...

Originally posted by: -Amri-

That's true. I also prefer that my mom/dad call me out and correct me when I am going wrong. Nothing like tough love. 😃

But since her parents are the ones who're indulging her, I guess the big,bad world has to do it, eh?

And...I am going to stop now. Mods will close this thread because we're making personal remarks. Mein toh chali😃

Yeah, lets spare the kid 😆 She is good as Veera & i guess thats the only thing that matters at the end of the day 😆

Originally posted by: divyasn

that is courage ya delusion - patha nahin ...

To give the credits - story i liked -- story of mermaids ... -- one mermaid is in kind of coma , to treat her , her friend is coming to human world to collect true tears of a human - in love failure .

till that pt i read ...

Actually koi bhi eng gana gata hain to mujhe badi hasi ati hain 😆 its not just her but its kind of funny.
Anways leave it her true friends will tell her truth one day or she will herself realized it.
Hota hain humne bhi aise hi sikha hain