VeeBa OS: Miles To Go (In Love) Before We Sleep

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wow rosh this so beautiful os yaar .lived it ur gr8 writer.u catched veebas lessens so well.
I just love last line dear it was so touching.
I wish jisa tune likga wiase epi maib actual hota toconfession ka aur mazza ata.
For me this the best os ever.
I loved the line fever wont kill me but ur absences will.
Kash actual veera yeh samjhti.
U shoukd join writer team

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Its very romantic and soul touching rosh once again gr 8 job

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Kehkelungi

@Poohjabear

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Oh my.. This was such a romantic OS Loved it. Please keep writing Roshni 😃 Loving your stories!

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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Great os, they are getting better and better everytime you write a new one.

loved the concept of this story , shame the veera on tv cant understand his worth like ur veera

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Very nice OS.
I loved this concept...And you really did an admirable job dear...

Your stories are really impressive..
Please do write more...

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Awes Roshni, this was super cute bud...I loved it!

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Siya N

@monumolu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Awww Roshni this is as beautiful as your name. Roshni you truly brought light of realization into Veera's mind. This is exactly how I would wanna see onscreen Veera.

If I gotta pick the brilliant moments that invoked a thud in my heart it has to be these

A) Fever will not kill me but your absence will

B) Yes I will miss my Veerji when he is not around, but when you are not around I will miss myself.

C) Then I loved the bits wherever he addressed her Veerakri

Edited by monumolu - 11 years ago

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Roshu! This is Amazing! Iam speechless! Especiall the last line that veera said! Haye! Fever will not kill me but your absence will. This is my most favorite line!!When will something like this happen in the show!😭The writers of Veera really need help on writing the story!😳 Anyways, Roshu this was Stunning! Waiting for another OS!

Btw, You and Sina make a gr8 writer team!❤️

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Roshini!! This is just mind-blowing...beautifully written with the right mixture of emotion and love...I have become your official fan after reading this...🤗 Amazing concept and I loved how beautifully you made Veera confess her love...your are an amazing writer dear👏...Two lines which bowled me over

1. I will miss him but when you are not around me I miss myself...

2. Fever will not kill me but your absence will

Awesome OS. Keep writing more. And have to tell you I am so jelly that you are such an amazing writer I am planning to stop writing😕..😆 on a serious note loved it to the core... thanks for spoiling us with such awesome stories...par yeh dil mange more😉...want another pretty soon please😃 and thanks again for this one🤗

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Very beautiful. It touched my heart!!

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