VeeBa OS: Sweet Home Pritampura

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

This is too beautiful..this is my FAV OS of Yours! This is beautiful and touchy! And the last line of wht bansuri said is❤️

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow roshni splendid work yaar. I loved the story i felt like crying yaar.it was so touching .baldeva rejecting veera and he was not moved away from her .it was aww and last confession was so cute rosh.i loved the story so much.

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Rosh i love the sweet home in albama movie.its my fav too .i love jack chrecter .but they both wrre like veeba.she was educated girl he was viasge guy but he lived her un conditionally ❤️
That dilog u used its like my all time fav .
This os is ver spdcial for me

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

I loved It! I loved the movie too...and the dialogue you mentioned is my fav too:))

I enjoyed reading this bud, good job!

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Sweet home Alabama is one of my favourite movies too. I have seen it at least 5 or 6 times. Not as many times as you! :). But the story is so beautiful. Your favourite line is one of my favourites from the movie as well.

I also love when Melanie runs from the wedding to see Jake on the beach. He asks her "where is your husband"? And she says "I am looking at him. Turns out we are still hitched"! Loved that scene. Also when Jake says "you don't think you meet your soulmate when you are eight". (Or Something like that). That movie is beautiful.

I want you to write another part to this story. The wedding! :)

Edited by MrDarcyfan - 11 years ago

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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This was such a sweet and adorable story, made me smile at the end , loved bansuri comment and the photo no123 etc
Keep writing

add me yyou ur pm list too.

and an extra wedding/honeymoon in poland chapter would be great

Edited by Nikki36 - 11 years ago

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...-Riya-...

@...-Riya-...

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow. This was so good. I loved how you portrayed their feelings of love, hurt and longing.

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

You did a nice job dear...
Quite an impressive one...
Please do write more...

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Roshini this is just awesome⭐️👏...so beautifully you have depicted the hurt,pain, longing on both their ends...it was so emotional that I was numb after reading this one...loved it to the core...hope you add another chapter to make it a bit more light hearted😳...thanks a ton for this awesome OS🤗 keep writing more and please add me to your PM list if you have one😳

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a4aarsh

@a4aarsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

trust me this is 2 gud,what a wonderful writer u are???? 👏such a sweet story and believe me i had tears in my eyes when baldev hugged her and said those soulful words ,really i'm speechless,this is one of the best os i've read in this website 👍🏼,happy shappy nw ,well done my dear 🤗

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