VeeBa OS: Sweet Home Pritampura

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VeeBa OS: Sweet Home Pritampura

My heartfelt thanks to the makers of the movie Sweet Home Alabama...which is one of my all time favorite Romantic movies. I must have watched that movie for atleast a 100 times...The title of my OS is my tribute to the makers of that movie...

Thank you Sina dear. After knowing u, I have more motivation to writing stories...Love u.

Part - 1

She was gone...She left Pritampura without informing him. How dare she do that? Puzzled Baldev. His blood was boiling ...enough to burn down the entire pind. He remembered her tears the last time they met a week ago. She was behind Baldev for an answer to her proposal and Baldev was intentionally avoiding her when finally she forced him blurt out what was the most stupid lines he spoke in his entire life...

Veera: Baldeva, bas mujhe tum kuch tho bata dena...Yes or No...Please

Baldev: Veera...it is a No. You and I can never be lovers or life partners... You have mentioned a million times how irresponsible I am and how much you hated me walking around you. You have played with my heart once and I was wounded enough... I cannot fall in love with you again... I don't feel anything for you now. We can be friends but nothing more.

Veera was in tears ...a strange pain tugged at her heart and was trying to pull her soul out...Was she ready for this? She was more or less only waiting to hear his Yes' because she knew he cared for her but she never knew he was guarding his heart from her. She was not prepared for a heart break. It pains...it pains like hell. What will she do now? She can never imagine anybody else in her life but the only person she wanted turned her down. She was broken.

Veera kept walking at a fast pace...her legs were almost running...running away from the harsh reality that she just now faced. She went to her room and locked herself up for a good two hours...changed and went outside to the city...After a couple of days she informed her Bheeji and Veerji that she wished to do a special course in modern Agri Techiniques at the Agricultural university in Delhi. It was a years' course and she had to leave the next day. The very next day. She never waited to say good bye...not even to her best friends...not even to Balwant ji and Bansuri ji...and not even to her love - Baldev. Her leaving so suddenly left her Veerji and Bheeji in a shock...neither could they convince her against leaving home nor could they reason out with her...She had only one thing to say...She must leave and she was gone.

Baldev called her atleast a hundred times but she never picked his call. He wanted to go after her to Delhi but he was not sure what will he say to her. He introspected his words on that fateful day. Did he really not love her? Was he not dying to make her only his...Was it not jealousy when he sees her with any other guy? Then what made him spit out that venom on that day. It was his friends. When he happily mentioned Veera's proposal for him, they made fun of Baldev saying he was going to be taken for a ride again by Veera. He grew wild and what followed led to Veera leaving him. Pritampura never looked the same after Veera left. He thought he will sum up enough courage one day to go and meet her in Delhi.

Three months passed by:

Ratan: (Over the phone)Veerakadi tu teek hai na?

Veera: I am fine Bheeji. How are you? I am missing veerji, you, chaiji and Gunjan Bhabi like hell.

Ratan: Ok then why don't you come down for a couple of days.

Veera: Nahi Bheeji.. Have loads of work to do and three project papers to be submitted and also a youth carnival where in me and my friends are part of a dance show.

Ratan: Accha...you are dancing. Good to hear. Wish I could be there but lots of meetings pending at the panchayat...Will definitely send Ranvi and Gunjan. OK.

Veera: How is Nihal chachu, Bheeji?

Ratan: He is fine. We offered him to stay at our house but he preferred staying at Balwantji's house. He is of great help to our farmers and the new technique has come out really well. Good that you requested him to come down for a year so that Pritampura and its farmers benefit the most.

Veera: I am so Happy Bheeji. Wish I could be there. Bye Bheeji...

Baldev who had come to visit Gunjan was witness to this phone convo..He was happy that he could atleast hear Veera's voice feebly through the phone. He now felt restless and wanted to meet her. He planned to tag along with Ranvi and Gunjan to the dance show.

Ranvi, Gunjan and Baldev were at Veera's campus. It was a huge place. They did not know where to meet her. Luckily they found one of Veera's friend, Malini who guided them to the auditorium. They still could not see Veera as she was in the green room getting ready for her performance.

Ranvi found a tall and handsome guy rush towards him. He instantly hugged Ranvi and welcomed them all on behalf of Veera. He introduced himself as Rahul, Veera's class mate. Veera has shared family photos with her friends that he said he could identify each one of her family members...however he had no clue of Baldev. Baldev self introduced himself as Veera's very special friend...Gunjan and Ranvi were a little surprised at Baldev's possessive tone and so was Rahul. All three were given seats. The show began and all the three were surprised at how lean and thin Veera has become...though she still looked very beautiful. It pained Baldev to see her like this and felt guilty that he was the one behind all this. Once the dance was over, Baldev and Ranjan went back stage to meet Veera. All her friends were hugging her and congratulating her on a splendid performance. Rahul and a couple of other guys too hugged Veera but Rahul did hug Veera for more than a minute. He seemed genuinely happy for her and looked so smitten by Veera. How could such things ever escape the eyes of a true lover- Baldev and he was ofcourse very angry, wild indeed.

Veera turned around to find Ranjan and Baldev. She instantly hopped in to her Veerji's arms and started crying. Ranvi knew she misses them all. She hugged Gunjan as well but dared not to look at Baldev. She answered a curt Yes or No to his queries but avoided looking at him. They all had lunch with Veera and her friends. Rahul sat close to Ranvi and was in good conversation with him while Veera was busy with Gunjan Bhabi stealing glances at Baldev only when he was not looking at her. After the lunch Baldev heard a few friends of Veera pulling Rahul's leg, teasing him that he was trying his best to impress his future brother-in-law. Veera was washing her hand when Baldev went up to her to speak to her...

Baldev: Veera...tu abb bhi naaraz hai kya?

Veera: Nahi

Baldev: Tu mujse teek se baat bhi nahi kar rahi hai, kudiye. (He started moving close to her)

Veera: (Had tears in her eyes which soon started to flow down) Mujhe jaana hai...

And she left him standing alone. Near the hallway Baldev saw Rahul questioning her on her tears...she did not speak. Rahul slowly put his arm around her shoulder and led her away...

Baldev was left standing alone. He could see the hurt in her eyes but he could also see that she has started adapting herself to the new place, new friends, new life and of course he was pained at the thought of Rahul...Has she really moved on? Does she not think of me? Agreed that I said No' but she could have spoken to me...She was one who played with my heart once and she was one who broke my love...Did she not think it to be necessary that she assures me of her love. She is unaware of the fact that I am still standing at the very place where she left me three months ago...I have not moved on and I am not able to...what should I do???

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Part -2

Pritampura:

It was rishta no. 33. Bansuri was tired of getting rishta after rishta for her beloved son Baldev but he seemed to be living on the 60th moon of Planet Jupiter. He simply doesnot want to even look at any girl's photograph...Even if shown on compulsion he is quick to say - No...why????Not good hair, Not good eyes, not good nose, not good color and when he runs out of reasons he even says He is not good enough for the girl... But Bansuri was worried for her son. She loved him and she knew something changed in him the day Veera left Pritampura. She did suspect something cooking between them...She was happy that Veera left but alas her son was taking the path of misery. He was no more the old Baldev...He was least interested in anything. If not for Nihal who keeps Baldev occupied, she would have completely lost her son. I will get the best girl for my Son, a girl much better than Veera. It is a promise my son, thought Bansuri.

A year later

It was almost a year and Veera was close to completion of her course. She never went to pind and even in her holidays she stayed up at the hostel. One morning she got a call from Gunjan...The past year Veera almost dreaded every call from her Gunjan Bhabi. Not because she hated Gunjan but because she was scared of hearing something from her...She strongly felt that Baldev would agree for some marriage and Gunjan will call her up to give her this good news...Is it Baldev's marriage??? was the one question that kept her sleep and peace at bay every day.

Gunjan: Oye Veera tujhe meri phone utane mei itni deri kyon lagthi hai???

Veera: sorry Bhabi mein soo gayi thi.

Gunjan: Accha...sun tere liye ek accha kabar hai.

Veera: (Almost closed her eyes...her heart was beating away...her pulse raced and tears started flowing down her cheeks) ...Haan bhabhi boliye...

Gunjan: Ghar mein shadhi hai...

Veera: (Stood frozen in her place with her face paled off)... OH...kiski shadhi hai bhabhi (she stammered)

Gunjan: Guess what ...We have convinced Bheeji in to marrying Nihal chachu...We were discussing last time right...but Bheeji was not agreeing...See we have convinced her... You are coming this week end right...We are planning the wedding next week...Bring your friends as well. Ok...fine I will hang up now...lots of work pending...bye.

Veera still couldnot move from her place. She realized how much she still loved Baldev. She couldnot get over him...in the past year she put in a lot of effort to get over Baldev..even tried saying Yes to Rahul's love proposal to her but the Yes' will simply not come out of her mouth...it was as if her lips were sealed with gum...She still remembered the day Rahul went down on his knees in front of all her friends and proposed her. She forced herself and pushed herself in to looking happy but alas she couldnot say Yes...She ran away from the place without an answer. She was hiding for a year now but it's time to go back to Pind...How will I live there? How will I face Baldev? He will marry some time or other...how will I be able to take that. I cannot see him with anybody else. She was worried, shattered was more apt.

Her bheeji called her...

Ratan: Veera...Do u really think what we are doing is right?

Veera: Bheeji... I am so happy for you and Nihal chachu... You should not be worried now... It is the best decision and I am sure all of us will be happy.

Ratan: I am not sure Veera. I am old... I should be getting you married and see Ranvi and Gunjan are behind me to get me married.

Veera: Bheeji... you are old but it will be nice if can grow older together with Nihal chachu..

Bheeji: Well Nihal wants me, you and Chaiji moving to Polland along with him...I am too preparing the paper works to hand over Sarpanch post to Baldev... He was the next highest vote getter in the elections...We will all be moving to Polland and Ranvi and Gunjan are moving to Delhi as his singing career now requires him stationed at Delhi.

Veera: So we are all leaving Pritampura, hai na Bheeji...(there was sadness filled in her tone)

Wedding Day

It was fun filled day...everybody were so happy for Nihal and Ratan...after Ratan spend most of her life miserably without anybody to support with her two kids. She deserves happiness atleast now...they all thought.

Balwant and Bansuri were also very happy. They helped out Gunjan and Ranvi with all the arrangements.

Veera stepped out wearing a beautiful red lehenga..She looked the bride. Her friends too were present for the marriage. They were all enjoying their stay at Pritampura...Rahul was determined that he will get an answer from Veera today. His friends prompted him to propose to Veera again. Baldev was standing in a corner. His eyes were searching for just one girl - His Veera...and there she is standing with her friends...Red Lehenga suited her well and she looked divine, he thought. He was determined to speak to her today...because if not today he will lose her forever. They were all leaving Pind three days later. He walked towards Veera and extended his hand to pull her but before he could pull another pair of hands pulled her out of the crowd and took her away.

Rahul: Veera...you know I am in love with you but you still have not given me an answer...

Veera: Rahul, can we talk about this later...People will be looking for me...let me go for now...

Rahul: No Veera...this is killing me... I demand an answer - A Yes' or No' is all that I am asking for..

Veera stood like a statue... The words took her back to the day she proposed to Baldev...Tears started falling from her eyes. She couldnot look up...Suddenly it started pouring down..Veera dropped down on her knees and started crying uncontrollably.

Veera: Rahul...Please forgive me... I did try my best to consider you but I couldnot. Every time I thought of love I could only remember one name...my love connects me to only one face ...Please forgive me. I never meant to hurt you... Even now I am not saying "NO" because I know the pain this word causes... I have lived that pain for a year now. Please understand me... The truth is "I had given my heart away a long time ago and I never really got it back" (This is my favorite dialogue from the movie Sweet Home Alabama)

Rahul was speechless and he moved forward to lift Veera up before which another pair of strong hands lifted Veera up and crushed her in to the most intimate hug...Veera was still crying but she suddenly realized that she was being hugged... Her first thought was it was Rahul and she should get out of the hug...She started trying to wriggle out but slowly was drawn in to the hug...She stated growing calmer and her sobs ceased and finally when she opened her mouth she said ...Baldeva...

Baldev: chup...ek dum chup... I am not listening to even one word of yours...Bahut bolti hai tu...and when required you simply don't open your mouth... Veera do you even have the wildest idea of what I am going through...You left me all alone here... Did you not think you have to speak to me before you took that wild decision of leaving me alone here...My world has stopped that very day. I have not moved an inch from where you left me... How dare you???? You were mine, you are mine and you will always be mine. I love you. Don't ever leave me because the next time you leave me you will not find me alive. You are not going to Polland...suna hum ne... Your sher is here...what is sherni going to do in Polland...haan hum honeymoon ke liye jarror Polland jayenge...teek hai

Veera was not listening...She wanted to sleep in that hug...it is months that she has had a good sleep...

Bansuri came running in with Photo no. 123...She saw Baldev hugging Veera...

Bansuri: Teek se dekhoon... (Looking at the photograph) Right the girl's nose is not good...My son will definitely say NO... Where will I find a girl better that Veera...She lives in his heart...even I show him Aiswarya Rai..he will say Aishwarya doesnot look that good...Ahhh Pyaar...bahut katharnak cheez hai yeh...

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Hi friends ...
Please do read and comment...it gives a lot of motivation...Love u all

Love VeeBa
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww this was really good girl!!! I totally adore the movie Sweet Home Alabama!!! I simply love Melanie and Jake, I have a thing for childhood sweethearts!!!
But please don't make Rahul her man, even for a brief period it hurts to see Veera with anyone else but Baldev!!! I would wanna see Veera asking Baldev, "What do you want to marry me for?? Our Baldeva pulling her into a kiss and whispering, "So I can kiss you anytime I want 😛!!!" This is by far one of the romantic pick lines I have heard!!!
Edited by monumolu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was really good. Please write then next part soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwwieee!!That was just too good for words! please continue soon!😳
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U know Roshini I write about heart strings being pulled or tears prickling at the back of ur eyes..Today u md me live it..I didnt see da movie nd nw dnt evn want to as I wanna see Veeba dere only..It was truly beautiful and heart touching nd I wud be indebted if u add another chapter at least..I m so emotional dt for da first tym m nt evn using emoticons..U r an awsum writer nd I cud never write dis good.Thank u so much for dis..Love u loads..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome work...👏 :) :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing os Roshini...loved it to the core. Would luv to read more parts.=*
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Great read. I too loved Sweet Home Alabama. Pls do write more.

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