VeeBa OS- Finding My Destiny :) - Page 2

Originally posted by: ..-DeViLiA-..

Awesome one.. Would like to read more please..❤️

Originally posted by: sarah333

Absolutely Beautiful... ❤️ Loved it! Do write more!Thanks so much for the PM 🤗

Originally posted by: Sayaani-Chidiya

The background song goes so well with the beautiful OS Loved it!

Originally posted by: feck

Lovely OS. Keep writing.

Originally posted by: kinkinikki

That was really well written, love reading Veeba stories, you should definitely write more often

Title suggestion ?? ' Poland stole my heart'

Originally posted by: krishnas.

Lovely OS.I enjoyed reading it.I loved the way Veera confessed her love for Baldev in a straight forward manner.Do write more.

Originally posted by: TasriS

Very nice...I simply loved it...

Loved the poem.

Originally posted by: Natashapaul

awesome...

Originally posted by: ElireEli

Awesome Vibha...👏 I just loved it...and also loved the poem...OMG you write amazing poems too...👏...I loved everything, the concept,the song in the background which went so well the writing, and the poem...Thank you for this one dear🤗 Please keep writing more dear.😳 Title?😕 I am not very good at such things...😆...I think others may suggest better.😳 but you can keep something similar to the idea of the " Jo tu mera hamdard hai to suhana har dard hai..." 😕 Sorry the lame suggestion😆

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Awww!!!😛Dis was magical!!!Nd da song,one of my favs added to da magic!!!Plz write more?!😃I'd love to read more!A name..Hmmm..M not dt good at dose..
Okay how about<"Finding my destiny.." Or "Where I belong.."😆I know!Dey r corny!😳But I love ur OS!Nd m waitn to read more!

Originally posted by: Jyo_Veebafan

Vibha, welcome back! And thanks for this beautiful OS!
It was just amazing! Love it!! 😊

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy

Vibha this is awesome! Very beautifully written! I really enjoyed reading it ❤️