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Princy

@princy48

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Trixie_

i m proud of u😃

☺️..ab CC pe chal😳😆

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rasiya.

@rasiya.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

I just got to read both the parts now...ah very nicely written by three of u👍🏼.I wish if something like this would have happened in the show too especially the eye talk vala part😳.Anyways good work guys.

Waiting for the next part,jaldi update karna.

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Princy

@princy48

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: rasiya.
I just got to read both the parts now...ah very nicely written by three of u👍🏼.I wish if something like this would have happened in the show too especially the eye talk vala part😳.Anyways good work guys.
Waiting for the next part,jaldi update karna.

thanku..ritu😳🤗..from three of us😉..eye talk was by me 😆😆

n nxt update kab hoga yeh mein khud nahi jaanti🤣..will pm u wen its ready😉

Edited by princy48 - 11 years ago

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krishnas.

@krishnas.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

I loved it.The dance part was beautifully described.I could imagine this happening.After reading this I kind of wish it had.I am looking forward to the next update.Good job.

Edited by krishnas. - 11 years ago

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Farhat Jahan

@fary5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Mujhe nhi pta tha munni or princy me itna talent hai 😡 😆
both parts are excellent 👏 that dance part nd eye talk is amazing waiting for 3rd update 😳
eli dnt be lazy 😡 update it phast 😡 😃 😆

Edited by fary5 - 11 years ago

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: krishnas.
I loved it.The dance part was beautifully described.I could imagine this happening.After reading this I kind of wish it had.I am looking forward to the next update.Good job.

Thank you dear :) Glad you liked it 😳

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Princy

@princy48

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: fary5
Mujhe nhi pta tha munni or princy me itna talent hai 😡 😆
both parts are excellent 👏 that dance part nd eye talk is amazing waiting for 3rd update 😳
eli dnt be lazy 😡 update it phast 😡 😃 😆

mujhe bhi nahi pata chala ki maine yeh likha hai🤣..but tried it for the first tym😳

glad t know dat u loved it😳..thanku 🤗

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

OMG!!!M so late!!!Dis was so beautiful!!!😛Loved both da parts!!!U penned it all down so beautifully!!!I dint know u had so much talent!😲😃Now no more story requests Princy and Muna..!I will send my story requests to u ppl and will read at leisure!😎
Eli,plz mk it fast na?M so eager to read da next part..My GM is activated..!😈
Truly awesome work u guys!⭐️Keep writn more!😉Nd I m serious about dt!😡😆🤗

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ
OMG!!!M so late!!!Dis was so beautiful!!!😛Loved both da parts!!!U penned it all down so beautifully!!!I dint know u had so much talent!😲😃Now no more story requests Princy and Muna..!I will send my story requests to u ppl and will read at leisure!😎
Eli,plz mk it fast na?M so eager to read da next part..My GM is activated..!😈
Truly awesome work u guys!⭐️Keep writn more!😉Nd I m serious about dt!😡😆🤗

Arre Tehsina I am just the fill-in-the-gaps writer...creatives to baki dono hai... As soon as creatives finalize the sequence, I will pen them down 😆

Edited by ElireEli - 11 years ago