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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is something I wish happened in theshow.

Veera and baldev are walking towards the garage to give veera's bike for repairing, baldev notices that veera seems unusually disturbed, at first he feels it might not be right to ask her as they are only friends. After giving the bike to the mechanic baldev walk veera home, now the silence was killing him, his sherni hadn't spoken a word to him the whole way.
Baldev: (angry) What is wrong with you, you haven't said a word, if something is wrong tell me please, we are friends right.
Veera:(crying) Baldeva I am very bad I hurt the people I loved so much.
Baldev: No, I don't believe you, my sherni will never hurt anyone on purpose.
Veera: Maybe unintentionally, but I've hurt my gunjan bhabhi and also my veerji.
Baldev: What are you trying to say, stop crying at tell me clearly what has happened.
Veera tells baldev what all happened on ranvi's birthday, who gunjan planned a surprise for ranvi, gunjan feeling veera is coming between them, gunjan angry with ranveera. Listening to all this baldev gets very angry and assures veera that he will try his best to set everything right.

Next morning
Everything stemmed fine between ranjan at the breakfast table, everyone was happy seeing that, especially veera that was until the girl offered her brother a pratha which he refused to take saying that gunjan would give him another if he wanted and now he has a wife who can look after him and his necessities, holding her tears behind veera went from the breakfast table, her anoki ma wasn't very happy either, it killed him to se his child suffer, but a husband had made a promise to his wife that he wouldn't let his sister come between them.
At the tea stall
Baldev was sitting with his friends he was in deep thoughts of how to set everything right in such a manner that none will be hurt, veera was his friend, gunjan his sister and ranvi well his friend's brother and sister's husband. Suddenly one of his friend judges him to look behind, when he turns he sees veera walking, she looks said and depressed, he goes up to her, she sees him and hugs him tight and starts crying loudly, baldev tries calming her down and gently asks her what happened, she tells him what happened, hearing this baldev gets very angry with ranvi and pulls veera by the hand takes her home, when they reach there
Baldev: (screaming) Ranvi, Ranvi, where are you.
Gunjan: Veerji, you here what is the matter.
Chaiji: Bbaldev puttar, why are you yelling for ranvi, he is not at home, he just went to the field.
Just then ranvi enters the house
Ranvi: Chaiji I forgot to take phone in a hurry (just then he sees baldev) baldev what are you doing here.
Chaiji: Haan baldev, tell us what work you had from ranvi.
Baldev catches ranvi's collar: How dare you hurt veera, who gave you the right to make her cry.
Gunjan: Veerji, chadiye, what are you doing.
Baldev: Stay quiet gunjan, you are the cause of all problems.
Gunjan: Tell me veerji what did I do wrong
Baldev: You are asking me as if you have no idea, maybe not on purpose but who have distanced a brother from his sister and more importantly a child from her mother.
Gunjan: I have done nothing wrong but stood up for what is rightfully mine, ranvi is my husband and I have every right to celebrate his birthday and spend time with him.
Baldev: Indeed you do have the right on him as he is your husband, but do not forget he is Veera's brother and the son of this house so even they have a right.
Gunjan: No, this was ranvi's first marriage after his birthday he should've celebrated it with me, since childhood he has given all his attention to veera, so is it wrong if this time for a change I wanted to make his birthday special.
Baldev: Why are you bringing childhood between, you never loved ranvi that time nor were you married to him. If I remember you hated ranvi when you both firstgot married.
Gunjan: Yes, I hated him then, but now I love him and I have a right on him.
Baldev: Gunjan, for godsake you are repeating the same thing, I have told you before and I will repeat it again, you do have a right but so does everyone else,especially veera because ranvi is not only her brother but her anoki ma.
Gunjan: Veera, Veera, Veera, I am tired of hearing her name, ranvi is only veera's step brother and no one else.
Ranvi: gunjan, what are you saying.
Baldev: (very angry) Don't you get tired of repeating the same dialogue over and over again, didn't you break veera's heart already by telling her the bitter truth.
Ranvi: gunjan you were the one, you told veera the truth.
Gunjan: Yes, but I only told her the truth I did nothing wrong.
Baldev (cups gunjan's face) what has happened to you, where is my sweet and adorable little sister. Where is that girl who used to fight with me when I tortured her best friend.
Gunjan became silent.

Tell me, should I continue.
Edited by janvi0513 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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janvi i loved everything except the last one👍🏼
i thought its veeba but its gundev😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love the whole thing but in the show I don't want baldev to cup her face..I want him to give her a TIGHT slap! 😛
Edited by DazzilerDizzy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Trixie_

janvi i loved everything except the last one👍🏼

i thought its veeba but its gundev😳


I am not to sure it is not veeba neither gundev , but what I wished happens.
Edited by janvi0513 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its really good, do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its awesome... pls continue & also pls pm me...

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