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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello! 😃 This OS just came into my mind so posted it here!


After Baldev realized that going against ratan is like going pind now, he thought of apologizing.

Veera was reading a novel late night. She got distracted by a loud noise, coming from the window. The novel being a horror one, scared her even more. She slowly got up and moved towards the window when a tall figure jumped in!

Thank fully veera was so scared that she cudn't even scream. She fainted right away.🤢

The tall figure,who was baldev ofcrs, saw this and got tensed.

Baldev:- oh!! Eh ki kar diya maine!!!😕

He panicked, but somehow picked her up in his arms and placed her on the bed.

Baldev:- abb!! Ki karu mai!!!😕

He grabbed a glass of water and sprinkled some of it on veera's face.

She opened her eyes and was about to scream when he placed his hand on her mouth to stop her.

Baldev:- chup ho jaa!!! Paagal hai ki tu?😕

Veera widened her eyes and struggled to take his hands off.

Baldev:- arre shaant rahegi tu ki nahi ? hain?😡

Veera:- uhmmm uhmmm😡

Baldev:- ki keh rahi hai?😕

Veera signaled him to remove his hand first!

Baldev:- oh! Toh pehle bolna tha na! gadhi!😡

He took his hands off. Veera started panting.

Veera:- tu itthe ki kar raha hai?😡

Baldev:- vo😕 ... veera.. mai tujhse😕... maafi maangne aaya tha😳... jo bhi maine kiya ...vo uske liye mai ..sharminda hu..

Veera:- haa toh maine tujhe maaf kar diya baldev! Tu uske liye inni raat me mujhse milne aa gaya?😕

Baldev:- oye nai oye! Mai toh apni... uh.. galti ke ehsaas nu... tujhe dikhaana chahta hu!😃

Veera:- matlab?😕

Baldev:- chal mere saath!😃

Veera:- kaha??😕

Baldev:- chal toh!!

Veera:- iss vakt? 1 baje raat ko?😡

Baldev:- oye! Jo karna hai uska mazaa raat ko hi aata hai na!😕

Veera:- (taking a deep breath to control her anger) BALDEV! Tu ek number ka gadha hai! Ki bol raha hai?😡

Baldev:- mere kehne ka aisa vaisa matlab nahi tha samjhi! Abb chal toh!

Veera:- lekin baldev, hum iss vakt kyu jaa rahe hain!😕

Baldev:- oh pind vale iss vakat so rahe hain! Toh koi hume dekhega nahi! Varna log galat samjhenge na!😃

Veera:-oh! Aur fir bhi, agar inni raat nu kisi ne hume dekh liya? Toh?😡

Baldev:- tu chal bass!😡

Baldev dragged her with him towards the window. He tried to help her get down but she was strong and experienced enough to do it herself.

Baldev took her to a place which was deep inside the jungle.😉

Veera:- eh ki hai? Kaha le aaya hai tu mainu?😕

Baldev:- ruk toh!


He signaled something to his friends who were hiding behind the trees, and he himself moved back.

Veera suddenly felt tiny lights coming up, they were fire flies, her favourite.

Slowly she was surrounded by them... it was just her and the small and sparkling lights.😳

Baldev watched her from a distance. He felt a weird kind of happiness within him.😊

Veera smiled and stretched her arms to feel the beauty. She was overwhelmed. No-one had ever done such a thing for her, no-one hardly knew she liked fire-flies so much.😃

Baldev allowed her to take her own time and enjoy it, while he went and arranged a place to sit.

Veera came to him, she was so happy she cudn't seize to smile.

Veera:- tu itthe kyu aake baitha hai?

Baldev:- tu bhi baith na.😳

Veera sat next to him. He felt so good to just sit and look at her face which was lighted by the fire-flies around them.

Veera:- kuch bola abb?😕

Baldev:- uhmm!! Ah...vo mai... tere liye kuch laaya tha!

Veera:- aur kya?

Baldev hesitantly took out a handkerchief from his pocket and handed it to veera.

Veera:- isme?😕

Baldev:- khol ke dekh rumaal nu.,..


Veera opened it fully and saw that at the corner, with extreamly pathetic needle and thread skills, it was written "veera" along with a small flower which looked more like a poor sketch of a brain.

Veera:- baldev? Eh?😕

Baldev:- vo.. maine tum logo ka kaam kharaab karna chaha toh.. maine socha mai bhi tenu maafi maangne ke vaaste... Uhmm.. kuch bana ke de doon!😕

Veera:- ye tune banaaya😲

She was blushing and smiling by now.

Baldev:- nahi toh... Matlab ...h...haan...😕

Veera wanted to burst out in laughter but she was so touched by his efforts, she felt tears welling up. It was such a weird feeling, she wanted to laugh but she was crying of happiness? She looked at baldev's innocent face, he was blushing so badly and looking down avoiding eye contacts, she wondered why he was feeling so shy and why she just wanted to cry at his cuteness.

Veera:- Baldev... tere dost chale gaye?😳

Baldev:- haan...Kyu?😕

Veera leaned and whispered in his ear.

Veera:- thankyou so much baldev!😳


Baldev blushed and closed his eyes, he smiled so shyly with such innocence that even the wind came in to touch his face and play with his hair.

Veera moved an inch back from his ear and moved her eyes to look at him. He was looking so charming at that time, she cudn't stop herself from moving towards his lips. She was so touched by his trials to impress her that night, she just wanted to kiss him. She hesitantly leaned and placed her lips on his.

But just at the moment baldev felt her lips, he opened his eyes and backed off. Both felt a weird awkwardness.

Baldev:- tu ki kar rahi thi?😕

Veera:- ah... mm... mai? kuch nahi.. galti se...😕

She was not sure wht to say or wht to do. So she stood up.

Veera:- ghar chale? b..bohot raat ho gyi hai! 😕


Baldev soon came out of his shy avatar and smirked as he realized how veera cudn't stop herslef!


veera:- chale baldev??😡😕

Baldev:- oh! haan haan chal !!😉


They reached home, without talking. Veera felt extreamly awkward for what she did and baldev was smirking away.

Veera climed up to her window and landed inside her room only to find that baldev was following her even there and he had also reached the window.

Veera:- abb kya hai?

Baldev jumped in, went to her, held her by her shoulders and pushed her against the wall.


Veera:- kya hua?😕😕😕.

Baldev smirked and slowly kissed her on the lips.

Veera was stunned, she was standing still.


Baldev smirked and walked towards the window.

Veera:- eh ki tha baldev?

Baldev shrugged.

Baldev:- uhmm... vo... galti se...😉


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That's all...! I donno i just felt like writing this! 😆 For all those who are gonna hit me for NOT updating YBI! i am so sorry! 😭 the next chapter is on mobile and the charger is not working! 😡

But do tell me how was this! Don't forget to hit like! 😳




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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Omg rimi that was such cute & naughty os the kiss & galti se was so cute.
Awww and he made ganda sa flower for her written her nsme on cloth how cute yaar.
It was really sweet os rim gud job
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: krock

Omg rimi that was such cute & naughty os the kiss & galti se was so cute.
Awww and he made ganda sa flower for her written her nsme on cloth how cute yaar.
It was really sweet os rim gud job

aww thnks dear! 😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
thnku! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i want like this to happen in show yaar
as usual bohut bohut achi likhi👏
i loved it
Edited by sparkle2985 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
aaww..😳..
its so cute galti se..😉..
it was romantic ..galti se..😉..
it was choo chweet galti se😳
i luvd the kiss..galti se..😳
mera dil phisal gayi hai..galti se😉

n i love u for this dil se😉🤗
Edited by princy48 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So lovely nd cute OS dear 😳
lost in 'galti se...' moment
Edited by fary5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Wow Rimi👏..cute and lovely and obviously naughty OS. Awesome yaar. I liked that part where he tried to stitch her name on the hanky. That was really sweet. And the kiss and galti was also very sweet and cute.😆 Typical Baldev style ending. Thanks for the OS dear🤗tu likhti kab hain??😲😲 Kal to saratime CC main hi thi??😲😲😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: ElireEli

Wow Rimi👏..cute and lovely and obviously naughty OS. Awesome yaar. I liked that part where he tried to stitch her name on the hanky. That was really sweet. And the kiss and galti was also very sweet and cute.😆 Typical Baldev style ending. Thanks for the OS dear🤗tu likhti kab hain??😲😲 Kal to saratime CC main hi thi??😲😲😲

aaj likha eli...!!
PS:- thnku 😆
Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww rimi it was cute...😊 baldeva

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