New VeeBa FF - Hulchul PART3

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Hey guys, i thought of deleting one of my FF, not the teri meri prem kahani, but the other one wich is nameless lol.
Anyways, i thought of starting a new one, inspired from the movie Hulchul, u know the one with Kareena Kapoor and Akshay Khanna.
Anyways, stay tuned for that FF which i wll maybe upload today (in that case, only one part) or after 6th june lol.
Anywaays, have a nice day
peace
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART1:
15 years ago:

Veera: Veerji, mujhe nahi jaana
Ranvi: Veera... dekh tere bhale ke liye hi hai

Ranvi tried his hardest not to cry, but he couldnt stop his tears. He somehow managed to see off Veera and waved her goodbye.
Veera was crying her eyes out, she didnt want to go to Delhi, she didnt want to leave her family, but it was her veerjis decision, so she had to accept it.

...
Present day:

Ranvi: Beeji, chaiji, dekho to kaun aya hai
Ratan and Chaiji came running downstairs, they hadnt seen Veera in ages. Once they came down, they saw Veera standing looking happier than ever.

Chaiji: Veera... puttar!
Chaiji ran towards Veera and hugged her. Veera smiled and hugged her back. Once they were done Veera made her way towards Ratan, but she hesitated and looked away. Veera noticed this and didnt want Ratan to feel more uncomfortable, so she bowed down and took ashirvad from her. Ratan hesitated, but Ranvi looked at Ratan and nodded. Ratan put her hands on Veeras head, and that made Veera smile.

Chaiji: Chalo chalo ab idhar hi sara din rehna hai ki? Veera chal upar apne kamre me aram karle
Ranvi: Ha veera, tu chal main tere liye teri pasandida coffe laya

Veera smiled as she nodded. Ratan went back to her work and chaiji took Veera up to her room.

Chaiji: Ae leh Veera, tera kamra
Veera looked around.
Veera: Hayo Rabba, abhi tak waise ka waisa hi hai
She smiled, chaiji nodded.
Chaiji: Ha, Ranvi ne bataya si, ke tennu waisa hi chahiye tha, puttar, main waddi khush ho, ke pritampura ke paas hi me college ban gaya hai, ab tu otthe ja sakti hai
Veera smiled as she nodded. She was so happy to be back, she couldnt wait to meet everyone in the pind. She was eager to meet her childhood friend, Gunjan.

Veera: Chaiji?
Chaiji: Ha cheechri bool
Veera: Main Gunjan didi se milke ayi
Chaiji: Ruk Veera
Veera quickly turned around, facing chaiji. The smile on chaijis face seemed to have gone.
Veera: Chaiji? Kya huwa
Chaiji realized that she had to tell Veera the truth, she sat down on Veeras bed.
Chaiji: Veera puttar, ab humare or Bansuri ke beech koi raabta nahi hai
Veera; matlab?
Chaiji; Ae sab tere delhi jane ke baad hua
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Posted: 11 years ago
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heya annie..so u r back wid a new stry..!!
nyc update dear...
cotinue soon with same speed as b4..
waitin for d nxt..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start! Continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Looks intresting i love that movie & start is also gud waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohhh exciting new story...I'm looking forward to see where this goes...update soon bud:)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay! New FF :) Looks intersting..continue soon!! Waiting for veeba's first meeting.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnx guys, i might update someday soon, if not then after 6th june its full n final as i said
peace
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PART2:
Chaiji; 5 saal pehle Gunjan ka rishta aya si, bare amir khandan se, wo munda NRI si, tennu te pata hai Gunjan ko kinna shauk hai videsh jane da, or Bansuri? Wo to khush si e soch ke ke use Gunjan to chutkara mil jaye ga. Sagai di bari dhoom dham nal tayarri hui si, lekin ek din Ranvi ne sab sun litta. Wo NRI munda or uska khandan changa nahi si, Ranvi nu pata chala ke wo NRI munde di pehle se shaadi ho gayi si, or wo apni voti nu wadda marda si, oddi maa bhi mardi si, aes waste oh kuri ne te divorce le litti, lekin sadi Gunjan kaha videsh jaake ae sab kardi.
Veera looked at Chaiji in a shock. So much had happened and no one had told her anything. But this wasnt it, it was more. Chaiji continued:

Chaiji: Phir sagai wale din hi Ranvi nu jab pata chala, onne Balwant nu ae sab bataya or saboth vi wekhaya... Balwant ne ae sagai rukwa ditti or Ranvi nu Gunjan naal wyah karne de vaste kya. Humara saada Ranvi, jhat to ha keh ditti Balwant di izzat rakhne waste.
Veera: Kya? Veerji ki shaadi ho chuki hai? Aap logo ne mennu batana bhi nahi samjha? Chaiji me enni parai ho gayi ki?
Chaiji: Oye naa cheechri, ae ki keh rahi hai tu? Hum sab tennu koi pareshani nahi dena chahte si, aes waste puttar.
Veera: Lekin Gunjan di...matlab bhabhi maan gayi shaadi ke waste ki? Unko to veerji jaise seeda saada munda nahi chahiye tha
Chaiji: Pehla ek saal bara mushkil se guzra puttar, Gunjan ne waddi koshish ki shaadi torne waste or Ranvi nu bura sabit karne waste, lekin akhir onnu wi ehsas ho gaya ke Ranvi kitna changa hai.
Veera: Lekin chaiji, ae to changi gal hai na, to phir aapne kyu kaha ke aap log ab Bansuri tayji ke saath rabta nahi rakhte
Chaiji: Kyunke enna kuch ho jane ke baad, Balwant nu pata chala ke Bansuri sab jandi si, lekin uske bawajod onne aesa kitta, ae sab Balwant to bardasht nahi hoya or onnu dil da dora para, abi wo 4 saal se coma me hai
Veera: Ki? Hayo rabba, ae sab ki ho gaya
Chaiji: Ha, or Bansuri Balwant di halat da zimedar hum sab nu mandi hai... or Baldev bhi
Veera: Baldev?

Veera remembered Baldev. She was curious, she wanted to see him, after all, he was her best enemy since childhood. She wondered if he had grown up mentaly. Was he still the same mean person? Had he changed? How did he look? She smiled unknowingly. Chaiji continued:

Chaiji: Waise bi... Bansuri jo bi kehndi hai, wo to patthar ki lakeer banjanda hai Baldev de waste

Veera stopped smiling. So he hadnt changed at all, he was still mamas little boy, the same old mean Baldev.

Chaiji: Puttar, ab to tennu sab pata chal hi gaya hai, to ab tu udhar na jana, or waise bi Gunjan se milna si na tune, wo to ab etthe hi rehti hai or wo bhi nahi milti Bansuri ya Baldev se, to tu usse hi mil lena jab aye gi ghar.
Veera: Kaha gayi hai Gunjan di...mera matlab bhabhi?
Chaiji: Har rooz apne papaji nu haspital milne janti hai, beshak wo coma me hai

Veera nodded, and looked at the door. Ranvi stood there with her coffee, he seemed to have overheard their conversation and smiled knowing that Veera had grown up.
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PART3:
Veera had her coffee. She was getting bored, and decided to go out and meet Jasmeet. Jasmeet was one of her old classmates in Pritampura. She made her way out of the house. She was wandering the roads of pritampura, finally feeling a relief. She hadnt felt this kind of feeling all this time she had been in Delhi. Even though Delhi was such a nice and beautiful city, it didnt have the magic like pritampura did. She went to Jasmeets house. Jasmeet and Veera talked for hours, they soon decided to take a walk. While they were walking, she bumped into someone.

Jaggi: praaji, tussi thik to ho?
Billa: Ha praaji, kahi lagi to nahi

Veera looked weirdly at them. What the hell was wrong with those guys? It was Veera who had been hurt, not their so called praaji. She bumped into him, his muscular body, she was soft and gentle. But wait, why was she feeling like these two reminded her of someone. She looked at the guy she had bumped with. He was standing looking with a lot of anger in his eyes.

Jaggi: Oye, ki wekh rahi hai? Praaji se maafi kon mange ga?
Veera: Main kyu mango mafi isse? Meri ghalti nahi hai,
Jaggi: Oye, terri himmat kaise hui humare praaji ko ae sab bolne di?
Billa: Tennu pata bi hai tu kisse takrayi hai? Chote sarpanch se

Veera looked at Jasmeet. Chote sarpanch?

Jasmeet: Kya chote sarpanch lagaya rakha hai, aab pind ke sarpanch Jasvinder chaha hai...
Billa: Hum nahi mante yeh sab, humare liye to sarpanch humare paaji hai

Jasmeet rolled her eyes, she took Veeras hand and started walking. Right then they heard someone say "Oye bari himmat agayi hai tennu ae sab bolne di Jasmeet, tu hoti kon hai? Pehle kaise chup chup chuhiya ki tarha rehti thi, ab jab se teri yeh saheli ayi hai bari hoshiyar ho gayi hai tu hai? Kaun hai ae wase bi?"

Veera turned around, she saw the so called "chota sarpanch" talking. She went towards him with a mischevious smile. The guy looked at Veera.

Veera: Main kon ho? Wo sab chadd, tu mennu ae bata, ke tu kaun hai?
Jaggi: Ae lo, iss kuri ko sach me kuch nahi pata... abhi to kaha ae sade chote sarpanch hai
Veera: Chote sarpanch ka nam bi hai ya nahi? Or waise aapke chote sarpanch ne aapko duty pe lagaya hua hai ki? Ke tum dono iss ke waste bolo?

Jasmeet saw how furious the "chote sarpanch" was getting. She became scared.
Jasmeet: Veera jaldi chall
Veera: Main kyu jao? Mennu mera jawab nahi mila
Veera smiled looking directly into the guys eyes. He was actually handsome, you know as they say "gora chitta gabru jawan". She didnt want to admit it, but she was blown away with his looks. Jasmeet took Veeras hand and dragged her along. They had started to walk away when they heard: "Oh acha, to tu Veera hai"
Veera turned around facing those guys. She saw the guy have an evil grin on his face.
Veera: Baldev?
Baldev: Ha Baldev.
He came towards her with his sidekicks Jaggi and Billa.
Baldev: To tune akhir mennu pehchan hi liya ha?
Veera rolled her eyes.
Veera: Teri yeh jo bematlabi akar or ghuroor hai na, yeh to pehchana hi tha mennu
Baldev: Chal ab tu agayi hai to yeh bi sunle, bachpan ki tarha teri ab nahi chale gi... ab tera chapter khatam, ab Baldev Singh ka yaha chalta hai samjhi
He was challeging her.
Veera: Oye Baldev, kai saal bahir kya rahi iska ae matlab nahi ke main tere se darr jao gi samjha, dekhte hai kisski chalti hai etthe
Baldev: Ha ha wekhte hai

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