My VEEBA OS Collection#2:OS-DILWALE DULHA Le Jayenge!!!,Prt2,pg-6...

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Wow tj this was so good .ur stories got the magic yaar.loved the update.
Title is hilarious .lovedit.
Plz update i missed ur stories so much yaar

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Nikki

@Nikki36

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Welcome back

missed you too. Haven't read it yet. Will comment again when I do. 🤗 🤗

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Wow, awesome start!!

Can't wait 4 the next part

Continue soon n thanks 4 the pm!!

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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Loved this, now only if the story could be turned into a scene it would be amazing. She got his name on her hands and he knew about it,

has she unknowingly walked into his bedroom? ?

Don't keep us waiting sina, update soo

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Roshini Mathews

@RoshiniManeet

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Sina dear...hi..how r u..

I am almost not watching Veera...only Express updates...cant see VeeBa in so so much pain and that police guy😡

Will start watching soonnn...Hopes..

Absolutely mind blowing story and emotions...Veera ke haathon Baldev ki namm ka mehendhi...who else can have that place...please continue soon...dying to read more

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Beautiful update Sina di⭐️
i loved the part where Baldev stops her from spoiling his name in the mehendi
please post next part soon😛
Thanks for PM😃

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Nice title.loved Veera's determination.

"Dilwale Dulha Le Jayenge..Hum hi le jayenge Baldeva..!Iss Priatmpura ki Sher ko to iss Sherni hi le jayega shaadi ki mandaap tak!

Raj written on Simran's hand.Wll Rajveer marry Simran instead of Baldev?Both of them will match each other bcz of their cunning nature.Last VeeBa scene was so aggressive.