Veeba SS:'Is she feeling the same'Part 3 Page 2

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Hii!its vinni. I forgot to tell you that i would be a veebaian as i am in love with veeba and this cutipie baldev.So this is my first story enjoy!!. xXX He kicked the can at the side of the road.His hands in his pockets,two upper buttons of his kurta opened and his eyes rolled.Mr.Baldev was walking alone on the road. "i have done a mistake"he murmuring slowly. No,he had'nt did a mistake,just was thinking that it is a mistake.He had done something that most of the people do.The thing that gives new life to them,the thing happens unknowingly and they started loving every one,but they starts loving one of them the most.Yes!! pind da Sher was in love with the Pind di Sherni.But,because he knowed that she dont have any feeling for him,it was a mistake for him. Suddenly a car passed by his side and the noise broke his thoughts.He wanted to somewhere,where no one could disturb him and he knowed where to go.He started walking a little fast. xXX She saw herself in the mirror and smiled.Finally her BiJi had gifted something to her and their was no special day,festival,ocasion was coming.She had gifted her a red suit and the chunni almost transparent. "haye!! Dikha to"Chaiji came running up. "bohut soni lag rahi hai"she smiled. Ratan too came there. "Veera in kapdo me to bohut soni lag rahi hai" Ratan roller her eyes. Veera smiled and said "biji aapne diye hai to muj pe sone kaise nahi lagenge"she said with pride.Ratan smiled. "oho,ho gaya tum dono ka, ab chale Ratan"Chaiji asked. Ratan nodded and they both walked down.Veera smiled once seeing her in the mirror and finnaly went to the window for the fresh air.She saw a man passing threw her house,she tried to see who the man was and when she saw him,she shouted"Baldev!".But he was defe.She raised her eyebrow."why he is not listening"she thought. And finally decided to go behind him
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HappyST thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start dear.
Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting post dear👏
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Nice one dear loved the start but can u just write the lines properly u mean they r going crossways
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Looks intersting! Continue vinni :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start!!!very interesting,do continue soon and PM me plzzz... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: krock

Nice one dear loved the start but can u just write the lines properly u mean they r going crossways

i writed them in proper lines but i dont know how it became like that
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice dear..pm me whn u will update 😊
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nyc strt dear..plzz continue soon..do pm me of ur updates..
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sorry guys! i tried to edit this but yeh to our bigad gaya...i think there is a problem in my mobile...hope you understand

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