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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww bidzi it was cute .the way she was trying to confront him he was avoiding then she ? Ing herself.cant wait for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...do update soon dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome plz send this to the writers
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a cute update. Baldev is so in love with her !. I would love to see this on the show
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all Thank Youu So Much Bidzie for updating your OS 🤗
... You have written it so beautifully. Loved every part of it especially when both of them trying to suppress their inner feelings - The way you described it was just 👏 👍🏼 . I so wish CV's could use these ideas & put them into the show
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Posted: 11 years ago
You're Precious
Finale Part

She has never felt so strange before. Something is happening inside her and she cannot understand what it is. Her heart flutters when she thinks of Baldev. She becomes anxious to realize that their friendship is not the same it was before. It changed a lot, perhaps has gone up to a higher level. The thought of it makes her nervous. A flood of thoughts float in her mind and eventually she falls asleep, hugging her blanket tightly.

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Baldev walks pointlessly on the streets. Veera's words echo near his ears. Who is Veera in his life? Why does she mean so much to him? He questions himself but finds no answers.

Suddenly Veera comes running towards him. She seems worried. 'BALDEV!' she screams as she sees him getting hit by a truck. The next moment, she sees blood scattered all over with him lying on the road, lifeless.

'Baldev!' Veera jerks up from her sleep, calling Baldev's name. For a while, she is clueless as to what is happening around her. Slowly reality sinks in her that she was having a nightmare. She heaves a deep sigh in relief. She sniffs and then touches her eyes that are full of tears. She understands that she was crying badly while dreaming.

A little later, she wonders if Baldev has returned back to the cottage or not. She gets up from her bed and rushes to his bedroom to check, somewhere she wants to be assure that he's fine and her nightmare was nothing but rubbish. Entering his room, she is astonished to find no one there. 'Baldev abhi tak cottage nahi lauta?!' she wonders and is shocked. A part of her is tensed for his safety as the nightmare has affect her so deeply. She runs outside and picks up her phone. She dials his number but gets frustrated more as his number is not reachable. 'Kaha gaya yeh?! Abhi tak lauta kyun nahi?'

Veera heads outside the cottage and searches for Baldev all around. But everything she can see is darkness and emptiness. Fear starts to dawn upon her. Is he alright? She thinks anxiously.

Walking a little further and going outside the farmhouse, she continues to look for him. Tears automatically flows from her eyes as time goes by and she finds no sign of him. 'Baldev, kaha hai tu?' she murmurs under her breath and sobs.

The sun rises. People are seen jogging in the surrounding. Veera keeps walking, looking around until she finds a taxi. She runs to it and is about to ask the driver to take her to City Center as that is the only place Baldev knows in this unknown country. Just then she sees him sitting far away with a Polish girl and smilingly chatting with her. She looks at them, dumbfounded. Her expressions gradually change into anger. She walks to them furiously.

'Baldev, ghar chal!' Veera orders him authoritatively.
'Oye Veera ruk na! Oye vekh, aye kudi nu thodi thodi hindi aandi hai aur dekhne vich bhi kinni kamaal di hai. Hai ki nahi?!' Baldev enthusiastically gets engrossed in chatting with the girl again.

A frustrated Veera grabs his wrist and drags him away. 'Oye... oye ki kar rahi hai? Oye chadh mainu! Main thodi der baad aata hu. Tu jaa!' Baldev tells her, making her mad even more.

'Kyun? Taaki tu uss chudail de naal phir se flirt kar sake? Issi kaam vaaste itthe aaya hai ki?' Veera snaps at him as she have had enough of his flirtatious nature with the random girls.

'Tu aise kaise gal kar rahi hai mere naal? Tainu ki pareshaani hai? Tere kaam ke time toh main hota hu tere naal. Ab baaki time vich main ki karta hu, tainu isse ki farq padhta hai?!' Baldev replies her annoyingly.

'Mainu farq padhta hai ya nahi yeh important nahi hai... Important hai ki tu aye itthe time barbaad kar raha hai jab ki tainu cottage vich hona chahie aaram karne de vaaste taaki hum time pe dusra task shuru kar sake. Par tainu toh aye sab se matlabh hai hi nahi. Mere sapne da ki hai, haina?' Veera vents out and slowly her voice turns vulnerable.

Badev confusedly looks at her. 'Tu aise kyun bolri hai? Inna farq kyun padh raha hai tainu? Aur haan main raat ko nahi tha kyunki mainu bas hawaa khaani thi. Ghutan ho rahi thi andar issi vaaste bahar aa gaya.'

'Mainu bolke nahi aa sakta tha? Main kinni darr gai thi tainu naa vekhte. Mainu laga ki kahi woh sapna---' Veera starts weeping silently at the thought of it and lowers her eyes.

Baldev looks on, shocked. His expressions soften. 'Oye ki hoya? Tu ro kyun rahi hai?'

Veera looks in his eyes and the next moment, she pulls him in a hug. 'Bohot darr gai thi, laga ki tainu kho dungi. Woh sapna-- pata nahi kaise--- maine aisa socha bhi kaise--- aisa kabhi nahi hoga--- tu mere se dur ho jaae aye kabhi nahi ho sakta-- tu mere se dur ho gaya toh main kaise jeeungi tere begair-- kaise--- Nahi Baldeva, tu wadaa kar mainu ki aainda mere nazro se kabhi dur nahi hoga. Nahi jee paaungi tere bina!' Veera confesses in the midst of her cries.

Baldev stands, dumbstruck. Did Veera just say that she cannot live without him? Did she? He breaks the hug and looks at her face tenderly. 'Tune abhi ki bola?'

'Ki bola? Yehi ki tu mere saamne se dur nahi jaaega kabhi bhi.' Veera says rightfully.

'Arre nahi, usse pehele! Ki bola tune?!' Baldev questions desperately.

'Usse pehele?! Haan ki main tere bina jee---' Veera stops as she realizes what she has said. She stares in his eyes, shocked and amazed.

Her eyes slowly start filling up with tears. She is overwhelmed. She has never expected herself to feel this ever in her life. But destiny plans on its own without caring what human beings want, after all. Fate takes its own decisions and maybe she seems to hear what her fate wants to tell her. She finally hears clearly what her inner soul wants to say to her mind. She finally feels the love for her Baldeva she is ignoring and denying since so long.

'Veera?' Baldev cups her face and grins while gazing her. He patiently waits for her to speak.

'Baldev--main---woh---'

'Main tainu kabhi chadhke nahi jaaunga, Veera. Agar chala bhi jaau toh tere paas hi vapas lautna hai mainu aur aye sach khud Rabji bhi nahi badal sakte!' he assured her lovingly.

Veera smiles tearfully. 'Thank you! Aye bharosa dilaane de vaaste. Mere naal rehne de vaaste. Mere life vich sabse khaas insaan banne de vaaste. Thank you!' she embraces him again.

Baldev, though hesitant initially, hugs her back and slightly smiles. He knows and understands quite well that he meant a lot to Veera and vice versa. Somewhere deep down they know what they feel for each other but would never accept it. But for now, they did accept one thing that - they are precious... really precious to one another!

**

Ending was abrupt! But I dint understand how to end it. I am also not sure what crap I've written or whether it goes with the title. Anyways please like and comment guys!😳
Edited by _Bidzie_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khatam??!!!!🥺 Awww!!! Just loved it 🤗... the subconscious mind sometimes blurts out what we are yet to realize consciously...and this has been so beautifully portrayed...👏...just loved it...you are a superb writer so I don't think I need to repeat that...the best thing I like about this story is how I can connect to it emotionally. Hope the veeba confession whenever it happens, happens in such a beautiful way..awesome update. I am just sad it ended😒 ...well all good thing come to an end...and make place for better things...so I am ready for your next. Joldi lekho notun story.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ElireEli

Khatam??!!!!🥺 Awww!!! Just loved it 🤗... the subconscious mind sometimes blurts out what we are yet to realize consciously...and this has been so beautifully portrayed...👏...just loved it...you are a superb writer so I don't think I need to repeat that...the best thing I like about this story is how I can connect to it emotionally. Hope the veeba confession whenever it happens, happens in such a beautiful way..awesome update. I am just sad it ended😒 ...well all good thing come to an end...and make place for better things...so I am ready for your next. Joldi lekho notun story.😳

Haan re! Cannot continue any further cuz I have a different thing in my mind now! Will write it tomorrow! And anyways this OS is basically about how they understand that they're precious to each other, so woh ho gaya😳 Thank you so much! I wasnt really sure how this turned out or whether I cud do justice to the title or not cuz nothing was planned, I wrote it in a flow😆 Thanks once again! Next OS is gonna be on Kupala fest filled with anger, jealousy and intense... Keep waiting and reading😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was great, I liked the ending, they said so much without actually saying it which I think is very veeba.

So whens the next story gonna be ready 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Bidzie_

Haan re! Cannot continue any further cuz I have a different thing in my mind now! Will write it tomorrow! And anyways this OS is basically about how they understand that they're precious to each other, so woh ho gaya😳 Thank you so much! I wasnt really sure how this turned out or whether I cud do justice to the title or not cuz nothing was planned, I wrote it in a flow😆 Thanks once again! Next OS is gonna be on Kupala fest filled with anger, jealousy and intense... Keep waiting and reading😛


😳Waiting...waise though I am not an amazing writer like you I have already written one on Kupala as well😆...do read mine as well😳 But I know your one will be far better...🤗

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