~VeeBa FF~||Ye Bair Ishq||22/6 Ch15 New Update Pg55 - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tamzin43

Lovely Lovely Lovely 👏👏 Cant wait for THE showdown between randev 😉 Thanks for THE pm dear 😃

you welcome and thanks fr reading! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princy48

aaww..i'm loving this chori chori chupke chupke b/w veeba😳😳..n finally the veeba returns..😉

offo i'm jud getting drugged with aanchal's cuteness yaar..u dont even know wat u r doing t me😭😭 ..i'm watching the scenes virtually 😉..i mean vishal saying "chunni bhai"😳😉

omg the character anchal is such sweet ..aaw thw way she hugged her ranvi maamu..n baldev shocked on hearing it....ab kya karne wali ho tum pk??😭😭..
ab jaldi agli part likho re..i can't wait ..anymore😭😭


Thnks princo! ya i know even i hv fallen fr aanchal now!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princy48

updated my res😎..for prev chap..



huh...what was that..mere paas words bilkul hi khatm ho gaye hai..re..

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especially..the below lyns,context..aaw it gvs me a lot of hope..that u gonna write ..on baldev's side of the stry..r u gonna write on it..😕😕


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<font size="2">loved evrything..n cant see veera in pain anymore😲..plzz gv back her ballu ..😭😭</font>

<font size="2">n baldev aaah😭😭😭..the pain in his heart is jus clearly visible😭...n randev tashan..wah beta kamaal ja rahi ..jaldi karna agla update..bhaiting..phor my AYM ballu😎⭐️</font>

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aaww thnku princy! ya i am trying to explain baldev's state of mind!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ElireEli

Awesome as usual👏When I start commenting on your update I usually keep consulting a dictionary as I am at a loss of words. Amazing, marvelous, stupendous,remarkable aur kya likho😳You area great writer and I love the way you express your feelings.👍🏼Both of them yearning for each other's love yet unable to express it due to circumstances, it is really a very emotional scenario. But still this was bound to happen. Baldev was bound to have misunderstood Veera and I feel the Randev tashan was needed to bring out the truth coz I feel Veera would never tell him that Aanchal is his daughter. Super excited for the next update. Jaldi likho😃This is for the amazing update🤗


Thanks fr ur analysis eli, it always assures me that i am able to express my feelings!
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice... thanx for d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww, so touchy update!! Thanks for the long update Rimu!! Waiting for another update! I especially love this part :

Baldev had tears in his eyes. He stretched his arms calling her to him.

She got up and rushed to him and hugged him tightly.

He hugged her affectionately. He caressed her head as she wept.😭


Continue ASAP!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Yaar rimi merey raaton neend ura di ha tu ne ... Wht a fabulous piece of writing ... Just fabulous
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!! 31 likes OH God! i am dancing!! thnku so much each one of u , i love you all !😳... 🤗



Chapter 14


Bansri tried her level best to poison baldev's ears against Veera. But Baldev believed veera more than anything else! He wanted to know the truth and he had got a plan!
One evening he went to the panchayat and started off an argument with ranvi.

Baldev:- Mujhpe ungli matt utha ranvi!! jaake apni behen ko sambhaal!!! Tu uski maa bana firta tha na! ye sanskaar diye tune use?😡
Ranvi:-Shaant ho ja baldev! sacchai jaanke kahi tujhe apni jaan de dene ka mann na karne lage!😡

Baldev:- mai sab jaanta hu, teri vo behen, use logo ko dhokha dene ka shuak hai na. jo hua accha hua uske saath! bhaag gaya hoga koi use bhi dhokha deke! 🤢

Ranvi slapped baldev.
Ranvi:- bass kar baldev!!! chal mere saath! mai bataata hu tujhe ki sacchai kya hai! aur dhokha kisne kisko diya!
Bang On! baldev succeeded in his plan! He didn't resist now., he went along with ranvi!

Ranvi dragged baldev to bansuri and balwant first.

bansuri:- haaye! eh ki kar raha hai ! itne gusse me kyu pakdaa hai tune baldev ko ranvi?😲
balwant:- ki hoya ranvi puttar!😕

ranvi:- chaliye aap sab! chaliye mere saath! abhi isi vakt!😡

Ranvi now stormed into his house along with baldev, bansuri and balwant.

Ranvi:- veera, gunjan, beeji!! bahar niklo sab!!😡

Everyone came out with a confused expression.
Ratan:- abb ki hua ranvi?

Ranvi:- aaj mai.. aap sabko ek sach bataana chaahta hu.!😡

Ranvi looked at veera and veera felt what he was going to say.

Veera:- nai! nai veer jee! meri baat suniye!
😕

Ranvi:- chup! bass kar veera! aaj tak mai chup raha..😡 saare pind se ladd liya maine tere waaste!😡 lekin mai chup tha kyuki isme pind vaalo ki koi galti nahi thi.😡 lekin abb uss insaan se mai teri beizzati nahi sun sakta, jiski vajah se aaj tune itna kuch saha!😡

Bansuri:- eh ki bol raha hai tu ranvi! veera kahi se apna mu kaala kara ke aayi hai toh isme...

RanDev (together):- taayi ji / beeji.😡

Ranvi looked at baldev, his expressions were asking baldev why did he defend veera when just few minutes back he himself was abbusing her.

baldev:- bol ranvi. bol ...😕

bansuri:- puttar tu iss ranvi aur uski kalmuhi behen ki baato me aa raha hai! arre.. gunaah veera ne kiya hai! sirf veera ne!😡

ranvi:- taayi jee... aap aanchal ko paap kehti ho na? toh ye jaan lijiye ki aanchal...
veera:- veer jee nahi.😕
ranvi:- aanchal veera ki nahi... baldev ki beti hai!😡 Aapke puttar baldev singh ki beti!

Baldev, bansuri, balwant and ratan, all of them were in shock.😲
Veera looked down, tears rolling down her cheek.😭

Ranvi was so angry by now,
his eyes were red. Baldev was sweating badly, he had guessed the situation.

ranvi went to baldev and kept his hand on his shoulder
ranvi:- baldev... aanchal teri aur ananya ki beti hai. samjha tu! haan?😡

wantsuri looked at baldev questioningly.
balwant:- eh sab ki hai baldev.😕

bansuri:- ranvi. baccho jaisi baate matt kar. veera ne khud isi pind me reh ke uss aanchal ko janam diya hai.😕

ranvi:- ye aap apne bete se poochiye taayi ji. ananya kitna pyaar karti thi isse, ye toh chala gaya, lekin vo bechaari apni beemari ki haalat me bhi iss bacche ko giraana nahi chaahti thi.. ek din ...

Ranvi explained everything to them.

Baldev had accepted all this. He always knew veera was not at fault. His face lacked any expression. only tears were welling up in his eyes.

Ranvi came in with all the medical papers, he was throwing it at bansuri, balwant and ratan. gunjan was trying to control ranvi's anger, balwant and bansuri were in shock. ratan was looking at veera with pity.

ranvi:- itni chhoti si umar me uss ladki ne aapke bete ke waaste kya kuch nahi saha! aur aap use ...!! chhee!😡

Everyone felt ashamed.😔

But for baldev and veera, time had stopped. they were only looking at each other and their eyes were talking.

Veera was crying.😭

Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
baldev looked at her with his sad eyes.

Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye

The papers were flying here an there, strong wind was blowing.

Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye

baldev started moving towards veera without thinking what chaos was going on there.

Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye.

Veera recalled aanchal's words:-
"mumma.. papa bohot door chale gaye hai na? kaha? kab aayenge? bolo na!"

Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye

Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye


Veera leaned against the wall and sat down, she hugged her knees. and cried her heart out.😭
Baldev reached to her and knelt down.

Zindagi, le ke aayi hai, beete dinon ki kitaab...

Baldev lifted veera's chin with his hand. veera looked at him.

Ghere hain, ab hamein, yaadein be-hisaab

Baldev's eyes conveyed his love and concern for her.

Bin poochhe, mile mujhe, kitne saare jawaab

All they cud do was look into each others eyes.

Chaaha tha kya, paaya hai kya, hamne dekhiye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye

Ranvi was busy expalining his sister's innocense and now it was his tym to burst out on bansuri.

meanwhile...

Baldev embraced veera. veera hesitated but soon hugged him. and wept.😭

Kya kahoon, duniya ne kiya, mujh se kaisa bair
Hukm tha, main jiyun, lekin tere baghair...


baldev:- sorry veera!! i am so sorry!'
plzz shaant ho ja mai sab theek kar dunga...!

Naadaan hai woh, kehte hain jo, mere liye tum ho ghair

Both of them cried in each others arms.😭
Veera recalled how bansuri had shouted at her long time back saying:- "Khabardaar jo mere heere jaise puttar ke aas paas bhi nazar aayi tu"
How the pind's women taunted her wherever she would go:- " ye lo! aa gayi ... anokhi maa ki 'anokhi behen' "
Baldev felt bad that none ever even cared to tell him that veera was facing so much! Bansuri wud always discourage him to show any soft corner towards veera!
Kitne sitam, hampe sanam, logon ne kiye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye...

Soon the matter got balanced.
both familes agreed to work out something.
Wantsuri left. Gunjan took ranvi to the room.
Baldev made veera stand up.

Baldev:- aanchal kaha hai veera?
veera suddenly felt a terror, what if baldev takes her aanchal away with him!
She ran back towards her room without saying a word.

Precap:-
Ratan-Veera patchup.
Aanchal-baldev moments.
VeeBa 😉

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That's all... waiting for you likes and awesome comments!!!
Sorry for errors!! i wrote this in an hour so it can have many errors!! sorry!
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Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg..!!
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

ek jhatke mein sab itna badal gaya😲😲...oh no my eyes welled up yaar😭😭..no words left bass ..ab waiting for my "bacha"..giri..('ba' ldev-an 'cha' l)🥳..n veeba..😳😳

rimi..ye tere liye..😉😉

"Itna To Mujhe hai Maloom
Mil Ke Tujhe Behtar Insaan Ban Gaya
Thoda Thoda Tujhse Shikha
Pyaar Karne Ka Tarika

i love you ..i love u.."😳😳

love u for writing this stry..in such an unpredictable n ..undefined way..!!

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Edited by princy48 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Marvelous update👏. (Was tired of typing awesome always😕) So Baldev had planned to confront Ranvi to get the truth out. That was the reason I was pondering why is Baldev suddenly verbally abusing Veera when he loves her so much. That was a good trick😉 played by our smart Baldev. I felt like I was watching a movie in front of my eyes during the song sequence.You have beautifully captured each and every emotion. Veera feeling insecure is quite natural because she is yet to trust him. On the whole a very emotional and touchy update but loved it to the core. Excited to see Baldev and Aanchal bonding.thanks for the lovely update dear 🤗
Edited by ElireEli - 11 years ago

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