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Posted: 11 years ago
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His dream

It is my first VeeBa OS.Hope you all will support me.
It was a winter evening...
It was for his sweet heart Veera that Baldev brought her to the jungle.
VEERA:This jungle remains close to my heart.It was during a winter season in this jungle that we met each for the first time and you made me your princess.
He smiled:You are the princess of my heart.

His smile costed even more than hundred million dollars.
She drowned in his smile as usual.

They found a hut for themselves.

Baldev sat waiting for his sweet heart.Veera came out of the hut.Her hair was wet as she took a cool bath.



Baldev could not take his eyes off her.


She blushed.
VEERA:Baldev...You are staring at me.

Baldev rolled his eyes deeply on her.
Baldev:Even in the simplest outfit you are so beautiful Veera...more beautiful than this winter.


She blushed.



She became naughty and went towards Baldev.She put her hair forward flashing the little water drops from her hair on his face.It aroused sensuous feelings in him.He put his arms on her shoulder.They both were lost in each other.


She closed her eyes when his fingers pampered her soft pinkish face.



Her heart beat fast drowning in him.


jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai,
tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha - (2)
dekhatee hai jis tarah se teree najare mujhe,
mai khud ko chupau kaha) - (2)
jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai,
tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha yeh pal hai apna ,
toh iss pal ko jee le shwalo kee tarah jarah chal ke jee le,
pal jhapakte kho na jana chhuke karlo yakin,
na jane yeh pal paye kaha jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai,
tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha baaho me teree yu kho gaye hai,
arman dabe se jagne lage hai jo mile ho aaj hamko dur jana nahee, mita do saree yeh duriya jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha dekhatee hai jis tarah se teree najare mujhe, mai khud ko chupau kaha(Jism).

The next morning...
They roamed around in the jungle.Seeing a lake,Veera could'nt control herself and she jumped into it.
BALDEV:Veera...the water must be very cold.You will fall sick.Why did you jump into the water?
VEERA:Baldev...you know that i can't control myself when I see water.
BALDEV:Oh!
Suddenly Veera cried loudly:Baldev!
She was drowning...

Baldev was shocked:What happened sweet heart?
VEERA:It's very deep.
She sank.She disappeared.
Baldev was shattered:Veera!
He jumped into the water.
Suddenly she appeared in the water laughing.
BALDEV was petrified:Veera..are you ok?
She kept laughing.
BALDEV:You were fooling me?Do you know what i felt for a moment?

I thought i lost you.You are my breath Veera.If you had gone i would have died letting me drown in this water even though i know swimming.
Veera became upset:I am sorry Baldev.It was just a prank.
He cupped her face in his hands:Please don't do such pranks.It will kill me.
He was very emotional.
She nodded her head emotionally.
He took her to the shore.
She was wiping her wet face.He was lost in her.She blushed.
BALDEV:I can't control myself when I see you wet.
She blushed letting her wet hair's water drops fall on his face.
He carried her in his arms.

...

Baldev woke up from his sleep with a smile.

Gunjan came:Veerji...you look so happy today.

B:Gunjan...I saw a dream.Veera is a prankster.

Hearing Veera's name itself Gunjan's face became gloomy.

B:Do you know what prank she played on me?In order to scare me she pretended to be drowning in the lake.I got scared.I thought I lost her.But thank God...I saved her.Then she laughed and told me that it was only a prank.Veera is so mischievous.

Gunjan lost her control.

G:Stop it Veerji.Don't say that it was a dream.It was reality.A real incident which happened 2 months back.

Baldev's face went dim.

G:And the truth is that Veera was not playing a prank on you.She really drowned.And you could'nt save her.

Gunjan's eyes got filled with tears.

G:And you lost Veera forever.

Baldev's heart was pricked by her words.

G:You know what the truth is.Still you are not willing to accept the truth.You are making a fool out of yourself by imagining that it was Veera's prank on you and you saved her.Purposefully you are trying to believe that your dream is true.No Veerji...Come back to your senses.What ever you imagine,the fact is that Veera is not there in this world anymore.Accept the fact and break the shell of your dream world.

Tears dwelled in Baldev's eyes.Gunjan was helpless as she knew that she would not be able to wipe her brother's endless tears as Veera was his life.

Baldev had lost himself.Tears rolled down his cheeks silently.Baldev knew that he had lost his Veera.Still he loved to believe that the tragedy which took place 2 months back was only a nightmare.Because he knew that without Veera...without her sweet memories he would not be able to live.

Gunjan was scared to see his numbness.

Her lips shivered:Veerji!

Suddenly Baldev burst into tears.

A sudden outburst...flow of tears...

He screamed loudly:Veeraaa!

His tears flowed like the water flow in the lake...the water flow which took his Veera to the world of death.



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TehsinaJFJ thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Its beautiful! 😊 But da end was shocking! y did u kill her? 😭 Next tym write a happy 1! 😉
I have sth against sad stories.. 😳 Well I get depressed nd da effects lasts..so..but I lykd it! Kip writn on Veeba..Nd da pics mk dm real too! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks.I write a lot on Maaneet & Arshi.Sometimes on Samud.This is my 1st ate,pt on VeeBa.And I can't write any story without adding pics.thx 4 loving it.

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Its beautiful! 😊 But da end was shocking! y did u kill her? 😭 Next tym write a happy 1! 😉
I have sth against sad stories.. 😳 Well I get depressed nd da effects lasts..so..but I lykd it! Kip writn on Veeba..Nd da pics mk dm real too! 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww it was so emotional ... Poor Baldev :(
You wrote it very well ... It makes me cry :( thanks ... Plz keep it up ... I mean write more stuff on VeeBa :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww oh no.

I loved the pic idea...and it was well written...but super sad.

Next time can they have a happily ever after? 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So sad, but so well written. Did not expect that ending at all. Keep writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow,it's beautiful! but the ending was so sad! 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG OMG awesome OS
you writen style freaking good
its sad OS in d end but loved overall,,,
i know how awesome writer you are dear..., i used to read ur Maaneet Os's
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was amazing!👏!at the end i was shocked!!Veera Died!!Baldev crying!!😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ur os on his dream veeba was awesome and very nicely written...poor baldev...veera dead...feel like crying...whenever u post a new story do pm me:)

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