VEEBA OS Col.:OS-12:~A MIDNIGHT RENDEZVOUS..~,pg113.. - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ST0207

Great OS ! ! šŸ‘Jealous Baldev = HOT HOTTER HOTTEST ! ā˜ŗļø Cannot wait for your the update ! ā¤ļø



Thank u so much dear!😃M updating!šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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[NOTE:I am not entirely sure if the song choice was correct,but if you listen to it while reading,it sounds okay..I think..šŸ˜•]


Part-1,page-1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100607096


Part-2.

Veera was busy dancing with Karan and her friends..

Suddenly Karan pulled at her hand,and as she laughed out in surprise..Then before she could react she suddenly noticed he had placed his hand on her waist..Her smile faltered as she suddenly started feeling uncomfortable at his act..

Hugging him in a friendly way was something,but she was feeling uneasy at his touch on her waist..Giving him a polite smile she removed his hand off her waist,and moved a bit distant from him.

Karan was now busy flirting and dancing with the other girls,and oddly Veera only felt relaxed at that.

She slowly moved backwards..Deciding she needed to rest a bit..Her eyes searching for him..It had been a long time since she had seen him,and oddly his absence was gnawing at her..

Where is he?She thought with a frown,when suddenly the room went dark,and the music stopped..

Everyone gasped out,and everyone was murmuring within themselves,all confused as to what had happened..

Veera now really wished he was here nearby to..

" O...
Aaja aaja dil ke gaaon
Raahein dekhe koi
Jaagegi phir kismat sohne
Jaagegi phir kismat sohne
Thi ab tak jo soyi..."

Veera and everyone turned to see where the song was coming from..

There at a corner a spotlight fell on a male figure in a purplish kurta,standing with his back turned to everyone..Veera frowned and tried to get a closer look..As the music swept across the hall..

She was almost behind him now,when suddenly the guy without turning grabbed her hand,surprising her..


"Hua chaaron ore shehnaai shor
Tu meri ore chal nikla
Chadhi prem lor, O dil ke chor
Kar meri bhor, ab mukh dikhla"

The lights came on and her eyes widened,as she saw His handsome face smiling hotly at her..And before she could react,he was whirling her round,as the music went on..

"Raanjhanaa hua main tera
Kaun tere bin mera
Rounaqein tumhi se meri"


He caressed her cheek lightly,making her skin heat up..

"Kaun tere bin mera
Tera hai chaar chuphera
Kaun tere bin mera
O.. kaun tere bin mera"

He let go of her hand and danced around her,as she staredat him with her eyes wide open..

" Hua chaaron ore shehnaai shor
Tu meri ore ab chal nikla
Chadhi prem lor, O dil ke chor
Kar meri bhor, ab mukh dikhla.."

Veera suddenly felt embarrassed and walked away..But strangely Baldev did not follow her,and she badly missed him already,as the music went on..She had just stopped to peep a look backwards,when out of nowhere,he came and stood in front of her ,and pulled her strongly into his arms,making her gasp out..

"Tan thirke thirke
Man behke behke
Tera kehke kehke khudko
Mere dil ki baat jaane qaaynaat
Tere dil ki khabar bas mujhko .."

He danced with her in his arms,and whirled her around twice..Then caressed her cheeks softly again,and also lightly touched her long swinging jhumka..

"Tan thirke thirke
Man behke behke
Tera kehke kehke khudko
Mere dil ki baat jaane qaaynaat
Tere dil ki khabar bas mujhko"

Veera tried to move away,when he stood in front with his arms open wide..

Aaana baatein pyaar ki laana
Aana thoda pyaar jataana.."

Veera smiled shyly and ran away..While Baldev gave a knowing hot smile,and ran his fingers through his thick dark hair..


"Raanjhanaa hua main tera...
Kaun tere bin mera
O.. kaun tere bin mera.."

Veera had ran to a corner,and was breathing heavily leaning against a pillar,when Baldev again came out of nowhere..She tried to send him a warning look by widening her eyes..But he only smiled naughtily and winked at her..

"Rang bikhra bikhra
Sab nikhra nikhra
Jaayein jidhar jidhar ye naina
Mujhe khud pe naaz
Hua pagla aaj
Raha apne hi bas hoon main naa .."

Veera walked backwards,shaking her head at him warningly,but Baldev just sent her a hot look and pulled her into his arms and made her dance with him..

"Rang bikhra bikhra
Sab nikhra nikhra
Jaayein jidhar jidhar ye naina
Mujhe khud pe naaz
Hua pagla aaj
Raha apne hi bas hoon main naa .."

Veera set herself free and was about to run away again,when Baldev's hand held her back from behind..

"Aana mujhe bas kar lena
Aana jaa has kar lena.."

Breathing heavily Veera slowly turned to face him.He looked at her with all the tenderness in the world,nearly making her heart stop..


"Hua chaaron ore shehnaai shor
Tu meri ore chal nikla
Chadhi prem lor, O dil ke chor
Kar meri bhor, ab mukh dikhla.."


He pulled her tightly within his embrace,and slowly swayed to the song with her,his burning eyes looking deeply into her wide ones.


"Raanjhanaa hua main tera
Kaun tere bin mera.."

His fingers traced her face again,making her close her eyes,as her skin tingled at his touch..


"Rounaqein tumhi se meri
Kaun tere bin mera
Tera hai chaar chuphera
O.. kaun tere bin mera.."

He twirled her around for some more time..And then pulled her into his arms,within his tight embrace.


"Hua chaaron ore shehnaai shor
Tu meri ore chal nikla
Chadhi prem lor, O dil ke chor
Kar meri bhor, ab mukh dikhla.."

The music stopped and everyone stared at them.But they both stood unmoving,and breathing heavily,staring into each other's eyes..Both lost in a different world where no one existed except the two of them.

Veera was completely mesmerised by him,his touch,his eyes,his entire self..Completely lost in a world he had created..

Nor did she feel any unease at the way he held her close to his hard male body,his hands curved round her slim waist possessively..

Suddenly a mobile rang out somewhere,breaking their trance,and Veera blushong red,moved away from his arms and ran away..

While Baldev stood still,looking at her running away,his eyes burning hot with an all new heat..

Veera had calmed herself down a bit,and was standing alone on the terrace,staring out at the surrounding fields,now covered in darkness..

She was lost in thoughts of Baldev..What just happened in the party had shaken her up..She had to get a grip on herself,her turmoiled and gone haywire emotions,and return to her old form..She had to be normal with him again..

Or else..Or else the only other option she had was avoiding him,and staying away from him,which..

She sighed out..It was not possible for her to stay away from him..She did not know why..But it just was not..

She had just stood straightened,as she decided to return to the party,when suddenly a pair of male hands encircled her waist from behind..

Veera instantly turned rigid in alarm..

"Veera..?What are you doing here all alone?Waiting for me..?"The slurred voice of Karan reached her ears,sending a chilling sensation down her spine..

She instantly tried to set herself free from his grip,but he was not letting her go..

"Karan!Tu ki kar raha hai?!Chadhdh mainu!

[Karan!What are you doing?!Let go of me!]"She hissed out angrily,as at the same time she felt him nuzzling at her hair..

Her skin crawled with revulsion at his unwanted proximity,and the smell of alcohol that came off him was giving her nausea..

"Oh baby!You look so hot today!And I thought you were just a normal village girl!Why protest now..?I know you enjoy being in my arms..!"His slurred voice near her ear was irking her even more.

Squirming,she finally managed to push him off her,and was about to run towards the terrace door,her way to freedom,when he blocked her way..

Veera,for the first time in her entire life,felt terror take over her heart,as he forcefully pushed her back against a wall..

Her heart thudding,her eyes widened in fear,her mouth suddenly choked dry,she stared at his ugly real face for the first time..His lustful ugly face..Thick bile rose in her throat,as she stood rigid,terrified out of her wits and unable to move an inch,or shout for help..

As her once good friend,Karan,came closer to her,ready to finish off his prey..


Part-3,page-9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100662523


Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ



Its ok Sonu!šŸ˜›No need to say sorry!I know u r busy!šŸ˜‰Actually da idea is our friend sarunfan1's...😃I just described da scenarios and added a bit masala..Thats it..😊Nd Kammo just popped in my head..M sorry if it seems lyk copied from ur FF..
But truly I did not..😳A party in village only leads to wedding in my head logically so..😳
Thank u once agn!
Nd yes Y dnt u write another OS on Baldev's jealousy too..M sorry if u were about to write dis 1 too..But plz do write a OS..I love reading ur works..Nd I dnt mind reading bout Ballu jealous countless of tyms!šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰
šŸ˜‰

i was just talki about the name..haha..v all think alike..il dp am os too..tonight..highly passionate
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
awesome continue soon .poor veraa
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
nice os plzz update soon cant wait to read more u r very good at writing and its a request do write one ranjan too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
OmG...just loved veeba dance...hope baldev save veera frm karan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
I hate that karan and thank god CVs is ending his boring track
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
di read the two chapters in one go!!! it is amazing!!! thats not the end na??? i know baidev is gonna show to veera that he is her knight in shining armours!!! wow!! baldev ko.bhi prithvi ke tarah acha sa fight scene dena di!!! he's too good at it!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Karan karela tere toh 😔😔 I hope baldev comes in time to save his sherni šŸ‘ Thanks dear for the pm as always too good šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
well when i saw her post,the 1st name came 2 my mind was urs but then i thought ur already having a bunch 4 urself so i shld not trouble u,but u understood it and worked on it,really wonderful do continue ur magic in here 2 😃

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