VeeBa SS: Veera ke Dil Ki Baat Conclusion Updated on Pg 5. - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww very nice
can't wait to read next part..:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohooo..can't wait 4 nxt update..plzz jaldi update naa...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohooo..can't wait 4 nxt update..plzz jaldi update karo naa...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Hmm Veera jealous and Baldev knows the truth about Veera and Karan ... Very nice ... But what is this Veera ko sab pata chal giya and she is missing ... Aww .. I really hope Baldev and Ranvi will find her soon ... Thanks for the update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome ff dear
and sorry for late reply
i hope ranvi and baldev soon finds her😔
how baldev is bewakoof😛
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JAJfan_Inshifan

awesome ff dear

and sorry for late reply
i hope ranvi and baldev soon finds her😔
how baldev is bewakoof😛
waiting for the next update



Thank you so much!:) glad you liked it.
Edited by pinkrose90 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Conclusion


Baldev: "Yeh Veera kahin dikhai nahin de rahin. Ab
sirf ek hi jagah hai jahan Veera ho sakti hai.Lagta hai mujhe Ranvi ko bulana
padega."


Baldev called Ranvi to let him know his speculation
of where Veera might have gone.


Ranvi: "Haan Baldev, Veera wahan ho sakti hai.
Bachpan mein bhi jab Veera pind chod kar sheher nahin jana chahti thi toh who
vahan jaati thi. Main bhi vahaan aajata hoon."


Baldev drove in his jeep to the gurudwara. Baldev
tied a cloth around his head and went in to the gurudwara. There, sitting at
the front praying was Veera. Baldev went and sat next to Veera.


Veera: "Rabji, menu maaf keejiye. Main apne veerji
aur beeji, chaiji ki baat samajh nahi payi. Unhone mere liye kitna sab kiya,
mujhe padhaya, aur likhaya, aur mein unke aur papaji ke sapnon ko samajh nahin
payi. Lekin ab main apne parivar ko kabhi nahin chodungi aur unke karz
chukaungi."


Baldev saw the innocence, devotion, and
determination in Veera and understood why he loved her. He could see tears
streaming down Veera's face. So Veera finally knew the truth about the debt
that her family owed to Surjit Singh.


When Veera opened her eyes, she saw Baldev.


Veera: "Baldev, tu yahan kya kar raha hai? Ja yahan
se. Mainu akela chod."


Baldev: "Nahin chod sakta tujhe akela. Tera dard
main dekh nahin sakta. Pyaar karta hoon tujhse."


Baldev couldn't believe it. He had finally said it.
He had finally admitted to Veera and in the presence of rabji in the gurudwara
that he loved Veera. Veera couldn't believe it. Baldev had finally told her
what she had been waiting to hear.


Veera: "Kya kaha tune? Phir se bol?"


Baldev smiled and was happy that Veera was finally
coming back to her usual self.


Baldev: "Veera Sampooran Singh, main aaj yahan rabji
ke saamne qubool karta hoon ke main tujhse pyaar karta hoon, aur hamesha karta
rahunga."


Baldev gently held Veera's hand and helped her up.


Veera: "Lekin Jasmeet? Uska kya?"


Baldev (grinning said): "Voh toh bas ek dost hai.
Main toh sirf tujhe jalane ke liye uske saath ghoom raha tha, jaise tu Karan ke
saath natak kar rahi thi."


Veera was surprised. Baldev had figured out the game
she played with him about getting engaged to Karan.


Veera: "Tujhe pata tha? Kaise?"


Baldev: "Uss din ke baad jab Karan confused dikh raha
tha, mujhe shak ho gaya tha. Ussne mujhe sab sach bata diya ki uski sagai
Gurpreet se hone wali hai aur voh Gurpreet se pyaar karta hai."


At first Veera got angry at Baldev, but she realized
that she had done the same with him.


Veera: "Chal, ab hum dono jeet gaye, theek hai.
Khush!" Aur main bhi tujhse bahut pyaar karti hoon mere pind da sher."


And Veera hugged Baldev. Baldev couldn't believe it.
It was so unexpected that he just stood there in surprise. Then slowly he put
his arms around Veera as well and hugged her back.


Baldev: "Mere pind di sherni, pyaar mein haar, jeet
nahin hoti. Ab chal ghar chal. Sab log tera intezar kar rahe hai."


Veera smiled and was ready to go home. Just then
Ranvi arrived.


Ranvi: "Veera, tu theek toh hai. Tujhe Baldev aur
maine kahan nahin dhoonda. Tu abhi bhi mujhse naraaz hai ki?"


Veera: "Sorry, veerji mujhe maaf karna. Main aapse
kabhi naraaz nahin ho sakti. Naraaz toh aap ko mujh par hona chahiye. Main hi
aapko aur hamare ghar ka haal samajh nahin payi. Ab main aapko aur beeji,
chaiji koh, kabhi chod kar nahin jaongi. Issi pind mein rahungi."


When Veera said this, she looked over at Baldev as
well and went and hugged Ranvi.


Baldev smiled back at Veera, happy to know that the
girl he loved was not going anywhere. She was going to stay here in their pind.


Ranvi: "Lekin veerakhri, tere videsh jaane ka sapna?"


Veera: "Veerji, main videsh sirf aapke sapnon ko
pura karne jana chahti thi. Main aap sab ke bina phir se door nahin reh sakti."


Ranvi smiled and hugged Veera back, happy to know
that this time Veera was here to stay, and would not leave him and their family
again.


******THE END******


That's it for this fanfic on VeeBa. Hope you all
liked it. What did you guys think? Once again feedback would be greatly appreciated.:)



Edited by pinkrose90 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
super hit conclusion...
wow veeba hug in the end...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: raithena1

super hit conclusion...

wow veeba hug in the end...


Thank you so much!:) glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Wow perfect ending... Loved VeeBa confession ... Plz continue your writing on VeeBa ... Thanks for this sweet story :)

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