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Posted: 11 years ago
I love dis story! 😛 Thank you for dis! Do update soon! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update!!!
Love this story!!!!
Thnx 4 the pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love love love the updates!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update yaar sonu and haan plz ye sad plot ko 2 or 3 updates me finish kar dena
And yeah I agree with sana they r married yaar so plz show some romance between them and baldev ko papaji bhi to banna hai 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part_25
Baldev still on the table.

Baldev; kya? kuch keh rhi thi tu.

Veera; nhi nhi kuch nhi.

In that moment she had a feeling, what if he breaks her up again, she can't afford to loose him now, not him not at any cost. She wont talk about surjeet, she can't risk everything now, now when she's so happy, when she feels free and safe.

Baldev; tu surjeet ka kuch keh rhi thi

Veera; han wo me...pooch rhi thi k tu inna mun qn phula k aya he

Baldev; wo surjeet singh k nakhre...uff menu surpanch banne k liye na jane kya kya krna padega

Veera was quiet again, this dream of his was her sautan. Ofcourse baldev didn't like surjeet, but he needed him, and she had no idea how he got them out of the loan, she was too hesitant to ask, to bring up that topic again, that would bring pain and nothing else, everything was perfect now, or was it just the peaceful night before the storm.

Veera was in her room thinking what if Ranvi comes to know about everything, would he take her back, or would he forgive him, but did she forgave him, had she forgotten the pain she felt, the loss she suffered. Going against ranvi, ignoring him and above all she lost Karan. She did like him, she was not sure about love and now it was a sin to even think of him she belonged to baldev now, in every sense she belonged to him. He was the only true relation she had now. Ranvi though her brother, her mother but was her half brother after all, having no claim on her, and otherwise she was an orphan, which meant she belonged to him and only him.

baldev woke up in the middle of the night to find her sobbing.

Baldev; Veera..veera ki hoya...ki hoya meri sherni nu.

She didn't reply, she was unable to...she just stared at his name on her hands.

Baldev; veera..
he said concerned.

Veera; kya hai..(she shouted) getting out of the bed.

Baldev was surprised at her changed behavior..he got out too and went to hug her

Veera; mat chu menu..door hat...(she pushed him)

Baldev; ki hoya..akhir mene kya kardiya?

Veera; tujhe poochne ki zarurat he...tune...aur surjeet singh ne choda hi kya he mere pass...tune mujhse sb kuch cheen lia..meri azadi mera sapna...aur

Baldev; (he was in anger too, he asked in pain and anger) aur?

Veera; aur karan..

Baldev was out of his mind now...he took his hand up...and shouted her name in anger...he was about to slap her but something held him...an inner voice.

Veera; ruk qn gaya maar na...ab ye kami bhi poori kr le.

he was quiet unable to understand what went wrong...they were happy..discussing about their future and suddenly their past came up but why..

She was on the floor crying badly. He was unable to control his feeling so he kicked the sofa and left the room.

Veera kept crying on the floor.
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no😔 i was a totally confused right now ,what's veera doing what went wrong all of sudden ,yaar bohot tension he plz kuch kar ke jaldi update karna,varna mein pagal ho javugi & pm me plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello.. this is such a sweet story... i discovered it a couple of days back... i had send a buddy request to you.. which you accepted😊 and from then you are pm ing me the updates.. not only veeba story but the other one too..😊 thank you so much... both your stories are too good...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeh kya tha Yaar..such a sudden change..??
Offfoo..jaldi se update karo..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 26

It was morning Veera was still in her room, Baldev didnt go to her until bansuri became restless and was going herself..he didn't want her to see veera like that so he had to step in.

He opened the door, Veera was asleep on the floor her head resting on the table on 1 of her arms..he went to her and hugged her tight..he wanted to cry too..as he was in pain too...but he couldn't.

baldev; kya hojata he tujhe..jab ai thi to laga tha tu kabhi hasse gi nhi..phir tu inni khush inni pyaari hogai..aur phir achank ki hogya.

he kissed her eyes..and held her close to his heart.She was too hot,almost burning, he felt it,

Baldev; isse to bukhaar he.

He picked her up and put her on the bed.

He ran downstairs.

Baldev; bg..veera nu bht tez bukhaar he...kuch kijiye

Balwant; o nalaiq ja k dr. sahab ko le k a.

Baldev was going crazy, Dr. said it was no big deal but he was still restless.

Baldev; e sb meri galti he menu use pyaar se smjhana chahiye tha, veera uth ja menu maaf kr de...bs uth ja.tu jesa kahe gi wesa hoga.

He kept placing cold strips on her forehead.

Baldev; ranvi ko bulaon..nhi wo hazar sawal karega mere se..ki jawab dunga

she opened her eyes.

Baldev; veera..veera tu theek to he na
he was so relieved to see this..

Veera; veerji?

Baldev; dekh use mene nhi btaya wo bht pareshan hojata na.

Veera; paani

Baldev helped her sit up and drink water.He hugged her again...the tears in his eyes were out finally but he wiped them before she could see them.

Veera still remembered everything..she wanted to say something..like sorry..after all she hurt him by taking karan's name. but she remained quiet.

Baldev; menu maaf krde..me..me tujh pe haath nhi uthana chahta tha...me..veera me

his heart was screaming..i love u..i love u...

Veera; maafi to menu

and then there was a bang and the door opened. Ranvi was there..in complete anger...his eyes red...burning. He went straight to veera and pulled her out.

Ranvi; chal veerakhdi...ghr chal.

Baldev stood up.

Baldev; dekh ranvi use bukhaar he...abhi

Ranvi; bs..ab ek aur gal nhi sunni mene..menu apni veera ka diyan rkhne ata he...

Baldev veera were both shocked.

ranvi; ese kya dekh rha he...meri veera...abhi bhi meri hi hai..tu isse kisi qeemat pe nhi khareed skta.

He threw some papers on Baldev's face

Ranvi; e le..tune paise diye the na...to rakh mere khait aur chahe to ghr se bhi niqal de..pr veera ab is jahanum me tere sath nhi rahegi.

saying this he pulled veera out with him..and baldev was left alone.

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Posted: 11 years ago
ranvi took veera away from baldev???😲 now this is amazing.. they cant live without each other😛 they will now confess their love and will be back together😊 please say that this will happen!!!!

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