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Posted: 11 years ago
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its sweet this is real bro sis combo jo har jaga me dekne ko milta hai...i too like baldev gunjan...baldev kyaal rakhtha hai gunjan ko bus woh express nahi kar raha hai...😊
great os i enjoyed a lot...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read all the parts in onego :D

nice& cute written...
i liked part 5 the most am sure you know the reason 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sana2511

its sweet this is real bro sis combo jo har jaga me dekne ko milta hai...i too like baldev gunjan...baldev kyaal rakhtha hai gunjan ko bus woh express nahi kar raha hai...😊
great os i enjoyed a lot...👏

thnk u sana😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonu-monu

read all the parts in onego :D

nice& cute written...
i liked part 5 the most am sure you know the reason 😉


thank u and i m glad u liked all OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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actually i like baldev-gunjan more tham ranveera.
bcoz they r like true bro sis.
me and my bro always fight with each other.
but i know he loves me a lot and very protective for me.
i hope cv will show baldev as a protective and good brother.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajolkonna

actually i like baldev-gunjan more tham ranveera.
bcoz they r like true bro sis.
me and my bro always fight with each other.
but i know he loves me a lot and very protective for me.
i hope cv will show baldev as a protective and good brother.

hey thanks for ur comments and s
even i love baldev-gunjan jodi real bro-sis
even same i and my bro always fight but again care for eachother
and this baldev in beard look looks like my bro only 😭 i want ballu bck in stubble look
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Baldev was searching for gunjan she went out after bansuri ruining her b'day

Baldev:gunjan gunjan kithe hein tu yeh beeji ko bhi kab kya bolna hein pata he nahi chalta

Gunjan saw baldev is coming towards her and said ranvi to go and she will go to home with baldev

Ranvi agreed and left

Gunjan was sitting there sadly and baldev finally found her

Baledev:gunjan ithe hein me tenu kaha nahi dhoonda tu ghar se inni raat ko kyu nikli

Gunjan:ab aap bhi mujhe daato veerji

Baldev saw her face she is still crying and sat beside her and said

Baldev;gunjan abhi bhi rohahi he tu

Gunjan:veerji menu bohut bura laga jab beeji ne mujse aisi baat ki

Voh mujhse bilkul pyaaar nahi karti voh toh sirf aap ko hi pyaar karti

Baldev felt very bad becoz tats true

Baldev:gunjan par papaji tujhse pyaar karta hein ...hein na

Gunjan:sirf papaji aur koyi nahi karte

Baldev:acha toh ki mein nahi karta tujhse pyaar

Gunjan:aap bhi mujhe daat the hein ,mujhse ladte hein

Aap aur beeji dono ek hi hein menu bilkul pasand nahi karte menu sirf papaji he pyaar karte aur meri fikar karte app dono ko toh mein rehkar bhi na rahi jaisi na

Baldev felt very sad and just seeing how gunjan is trying to hide her tears

Baldev:oye gunjan mein toh tujhse bohut pyaar karta hu, teri fikar hein menu meri ek loti behen he tu, menu teri bare mein hamesha sochna hein uss din tenu jalsa mein gusne se mana karraha tha kyu ki vaha pind ki ladke peekar tenu pareshaan na kare

Lekin tu toh menu damkake gusi meine vaha kuch nahi kaha na tujhe,beeji ko toh bolna hi tha taki phir kabhi tu aise party mein na jaye ,tenu kuch hota toh menu kinni takleef hogi

Aur ladna gunjan ab mein choti choti bato pe tujhse na ladu toh kisse ladu bol aur sab avi mazaak se kiya ladayi thi na

Agar inni dil pe leta hamari ladayi toh uss din jab tune mujhe veera se baat kare jaisa mujhe satayi, uss ki agli din hi mein tere liye nri rishta leke aata kya bol .menu tujhse bohut bohut pyaar hein gunjan .

Ab yeh meri pyaar ri si gunjan ki shaadi ke pehle hamari saath aakri janamdin hein aur tere vaaste kuch vadiya tofha dena chata tha mein

Gunjan:menu voh payal bohut achi lagi veerji

Aap mere bare mein inna acha sochte hein menu pata hi nahi

Baldev:gunjan aakh band karo ek min ab kyu maat poochna

Gunjan closed her eyes and baldev kept a box in her hand and told to open her eyes

Gunjan:was shocked and said yeh ki yeh veerji

Baldev:khol na tere janamdin ki tofa hein yeh

Gunjan:she opened and saw beautiful necklace set with bangles

Veerji yeh toh sone ki hein aap yeh mere liye laye bohut kimti hein na aap ke paas inna sara paise kaha tha

Baldev:ab kya saddi behen nu mein sirf voh chaandi vali payal du voh toh meri behan ke liye sab ke saamne diya tha

Yeh sone ke set keliye toh mein bohut saalon se paise jama karraha tha taki teri shadi ke pehle aakhri janamdin ke din tujhe du

Aur yeh sone ki set toh meri natkat,pyaari,bholi,chulbuli behan ke liye joh menu papaji se daat khilati hein ,menu daarati damkaati hein,menu tang karti hein,menu jab gusse mein hu tab balckmail karke khana kilati hein ,menu sab se jyada smajthi hein,menu iss duniya mein sab se khoobsurat dikthi hein sirf chehre se nahi dil se bhi ,menu bohut bohut pyaar karti hein aur menu bohut dukh bhi deti hein jab voh shadi karke mujshe door chalijati and had tears in his eyes .

Gunjan hugged him and said veerji menu aap ko aur papaji koh chodke nahi jana and was crying badly .

Baldev was crying as he cannot leave without his sister and it will be difficult for him and to make her happy he said

Baldev:gunjan ab subah hone vala hein pind ki ladke tenu aise bina makeup ke aur rote shakal mein tenu dekh liya toh darr jayenge bohut buri dikh rahi ho chale yaha se

Gunjan:ha chalo veerji aise dekhliya menu toh acha nahi dikti mein

Lekin veerji aapne toh abhi kaha ki mein duniya ki sabse khoobsurat ladki hu toh app ...

Baldev:who mein avi boldiya taaki tu rona band kare aur menu ghar bhi jake sona hein agar tere bina ghar gaya toh papaji menu ghar ke andar aane nahi dete isi liye .mere liye toh sar dard bangayi tu ab chalo jaldi

gunjan:veerji jab aap ne avi mujse inna bola na tab menu aap ki aakho mein sachayi dekhi,mere liye pyaar dikhi aur mere jane se app mein joh dukh hein who bhi mujhe dikhi .aap ki zabaaan jhoot bhol sakta hein par aapki aakhe nahi .

mujhe bohut kush huva yeh jaankar ki app mujhse itna hi pyaar karte hein jitna papaji mujhse karte hein,meina aap ki diya huva set hi shaadi mein pehanoongi.

Baldev happily smiled at gunjan and said

chalo jaldi der ho roha hein gurudwara jane ke baad papaji aur hum dono aaj khana khane keliye bahar chalenge aur poora din ghoomenge.

Gunjan hugged baldev and said aap bohut bohut ache veerji ho.

mistakes ke liye maaf karna

hope u guys like it and comment

Edited by sparkle2985 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written... Bro-sis bonding is really very sweet ...loved it thanks MB :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome yaar ambi
Baldev is a caring brother
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nicky13

Beautifully written... Bro-sis bonding is really very sweet ...loved it thanks MB :)


thanks nicky 😊

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