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foraml

@foraml

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello i am new here and i am writng a story on raga.

I have became ranaji fan frim now
..hayu ranaji...

Pls cooperate.. Shoud i continue..???

Nd i have no budddy from this forum. So hw will i send pm?? Pls help nd reply..

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello n Welcome to ETR2 forum.
Please continue your story.. :)

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foraml

@foraml

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey thanks for the cooperation... i will continue story..

so hers the starting...

enjoy..

CS:

Gayatri..devi

Rajmata...

Our cute ranaji...

other all characters as same in show..

PROLOUVE:

Ranaji and gayatri are married.. they both love eachother...

so should I conitnue... ?

pls comment...

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foraml

@foraml

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello all. So hers a small update..

Chapter-1

PS: in y story badi rani ma is not villain... However she will be introducein middle of the story..

All were sitting in the mahal.. And discussiog aboutsome function to be taken place in amirot.

Rajmata: kunvar sa humein yeh jasn dhamdhum se karna hain..
Aur koi kami nai rehni chahye..

All nodded..

Gauatri: ha rajmata meri shadi ke bad yeh pehla jasn hain muje bhi dhamdhum se amirkot ke praja ke liye yeh jasn karna hain.

So this the small starting...
Will vontinue soon.. Do comment...

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

Welcome to the Forum

Congrats on the story, Awesome start, continue soon, waiting to read more.

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foraml

@foraml

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Welcome to the Forum
Congrats on the story, Awesome start, continue soon, waiting to read more.

Oh thankyou so much... Ya will continus..

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foraml

@foraml

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello all am my updatE cntinues

All were dis ussing about jasn in amirkot..

Gayartri was in her rum .. Thinking of jasn amd enjogment.

Suddenly. Ranaji comes and hug vayatri from behind..

Gayatri comes out of her thougjts.

Gaya: ranaji kya kar rahe ho chodiye na jazn ki bahut sari tIyari kRni hain..

Ranaji: ha to karo na meine kahan apko roka..

Gayatri: aise kaise karu mein..

Rana ji pulls her more closer and kissess on hsr forehead.

Gayatri: ranaji..

Ranaji: hmm gayatri...

Gayatri:: kitna maja ayega na is jasn mein. Mein to bahut exckted hun..

RNaji: mein bhj tumhein dekhne ke liye excited hun..

Gayatri blushes..

Just then someone knocks on door.

Gayatfi: rNaji jane dijuie na koi hain .

Ranaji: nai jane dunga..

Gayatru: pls..

Ranaji: ok. Jao. Yar yeh kon hain kBab mein haddi.

GayTri opens the door and its rajmata.

Gayatri: are rajmata ayie Na.

Rajmata: mein tumhein aur rNaji ko kuch dena chahti hun.

Raga: kya hua rJmata??

Rajamata vives one envelope to ranaji.

Ranaji: yeh jya hain?

Rajmaya: kholkar dekhlijiye.

Ranaji opens and its ticket of darjeeling.. Their honsymoon.

Ranaji: yeh..

Rajmata: h Tum dono ki honsymoon Ki tickets.

Gayatri blushes..

Rajmata: jasn khatam hone ke bad tum dono honeymoon par jaoge.

Abhi thdi der mein update karti hun...

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foraml

@foraml

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Posted: 9 years ago

RajMata leaves from there.

Ranaji: ab kahan jaogi miss rani gayatri??

Gayatri blushes.

Ranaji: gayTri abhi se itna sharmaogi to muje to abhi darjeeling janae ka man hi jayega..

Ap kahe to amirkot ka jasn postpone karva dun.

Scrool down

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foraml

@foraml

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Posted: 9 years ago

Gayatri:ranaji kuch bhi mat boliye...ap ko pata hain na mein is jasn ke liye kitni excited hun.. Aur P postpone karne ko bol rahe hain.. Nahi

Hum hon eymoon par jasn ke bad hi jayenge..

Ranaji: thik hain rani sahiba. Apka hukum sarankhon par.

Gayarti smiles and hugs ranaji.

Ranaji kisses on her forhead.

Full to prep going of jasn in amirkot...

Lekin kya raga ka honeymoon hoga?? Kya yeh ja payenge...

More twists and turn coming... Stay tuned...

Nd comment pls... Should i continu..

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foraml

@foraml

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hello all am here with the update.

Recap: jasn ki taiyari in amerkot.

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All are sitting in main hall.

Kunvar chccha: Ranaji ap badi haveli jake wahan ki praja ko nyota de aye aur. wahan ka kam kaj bhi dekh aye.

Ranaji: thik hain chacha. mein abhi nikalta hun. ssham tak laut aunga..

Gayatri becames dad. and goes in room..

Ranaji comes in room..

Gayatri sees ranaji. she comes and hugs her...

Ranaji: Are gayar=tri kya hua? ap ro kyun rahi hain.? mein sham ko wapas a jaunga na..

Gayatri: ha ranaji lekin jasn ki taiyari mein ap hu nao honge to meuje acha nai lagega.. na..

Ranaji hugs gayatri and kiss on hr forehead.

Ranaji: mein jald hi wapas a jaunga..

Gayatri: hmm.

Ranaji: kissess on her hair hug her tightly..

Ranaji: heyy gayaatri bus ab rona bandh karo.. muje apke ankh mein ansu bilkul pasand nai hain..

Gayatri: smiles and hug.

jaldi wapas ana ranaji..

abhi ke liye itna hi... bki ka rat ko likhungi

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