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BertieWooster

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shruthiravi
@Bertie I loved your last para so much👏👏

Thank you Shruthi 😊

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BertieWooster

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Gul.S_Ef

@bold This my friend sums up everything beautifully 👏 👏 👏

You just gave a whole new meaning to that last scene.

Thank you Gul 😊

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SoreThumb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Bertie..you write so well

It makes so much more sense then the scene made yesterday

The scene in itself should have given the idea..no one should have had to explain it (and you did a splendid job at that)

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-Shwets-

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Posted: 9 years ago

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B,

How many times did you watch ?I glad you did 😛 Well written ..still stuck to my original views ...don't think have the patience to re watch ...There was no emotional connect ...the writer , actor, director all shoulder the responsibility for the failure ... .. ...the same scene DD did a phenomenal job conveying her emotional state ...this was the same team right ? Why I could connect to her and not Ranaji ? Many cracks ...

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BertieWooster

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Shwets-
B,
How many times did you watch ?I glad you did 😛 Well written ..still stuck to my original views ...don't think have the patience to re watch ...There was no emotional connect ...the writer , actor, director all shoulder the responsibility for the failure ... .. ...the same scene DD did a phenomenal job conveying her emotional state ...this was the same team right ? Why I could connect to her and not Ranaji ? Many cracks ...

The answer is simple, Shwets...you know how madly G loves RNJ..you know what it would do to her to see him break down...so the connect was instantaneous...

RNJ's guilt, his self loathing was simply not established enough...how do you connect to something that has simply not been clearly delineated...! You'd have to go into RNJ's mind and read it for you to know what he was feeling. I bothered to because I am rather fond of RNJ. Why would the lay audience?

And to answer your question, just once 😆

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BertieWooster

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: SoreThumb
Bertie..you write so well
It makes so much more sense then the scene made yesterday

The scene in itself should have given the idea..no one should have had to explain it (and you did a splendid job at that)

And yes, it should have been self explanatory...bad and lazy writing I would say!

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