Two Shot : LoSt In YoU......Complete

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey friends...
m Vandy...u guys might not b familiar with me as m not that active in making post...😆
so thought to make one 😉

so here goes...

My first RaGa story ...so read at ur risk...

Just random thought what if ranaji is in love with gayatri not the other way around...so story will be from ranaji pov n yup ranaji is not married in this...so no past

First part is totally inspired by serial itself...


P.S. ...As Always...Thanx to vampy n sweta for their support n Thanx shivi for suggesting title ...

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Ranaji was lost in his thought which nowadays seems to be most important thing for him. He was always lost in thought of her but today he got a valid reason too though he never needed one...

He got first special gift from her...his gayatri...

He met her in mandir today where she gifted him a handmade handkerchief to him with his initial embroidered on it. This was her way of saying thank u to him for saving her life n returning her notebook. His hand on his own was caressing the initial of his name on handkerchief...he felt special ...n he remember his meeting with her


Flashback

He returned to his state Ameerkot after long 6 years. He was happy as well sad with his return. Happy to be near his home, his mom n his people but sad because it always make him reminded him how 6years back he lost his father and how he left Ameerkot for his further studies. Once back here, he decided to cherish all the memories of his father n him which he missed in all this 6 years. He decided to visit library first where his father used to take him n introduced him to the literature n history of his kingdom. He was moving when he collided with someone. He tried to hold her n balance both but he lost his balance n fell on floor. His heavy body was above her petite body but he was lost in her eyes...her eyes were brown hazel type which was very deep...her eyes were very expressive. He was lost in her eyes when his thought process was broken by a push from her than he realized situation they were in at present n he get up and gave hand to her to stand up too but she didn't take his help. She gets up on his own n said sorry before running away...

He was bowled over her voice too...so honey like but what surprised him was her behavior she didn't take his hand n just run away. He was about to move when he realized a notebook on the floor. He guessed this book belong to beautiful girl he met just now. He curiously opens the notebook to see what's inside it. On first page, a name was written in beautiful handwriing...Gayatri...he caressed her name n was ecstatic to know her name. He turned next page to find poem written in it in same handwriting...he guessed it to b written by gayatri herself. He checked few more pages which were filled with poems. He closed the book n decided to head towards his mahal to read all her work in peace n alone.

He met for second time near lake...he still get scared of thought what would have happened if didn't reach in time. He was on field visit that day to meet farmers to know about their problem when he saw someone drowning in lake. He jumped in lake to save her when he get her out of lake he was shocked to see her. His heart stopped to beat for a minute over the thought if something bad happen to her. She was breathing unevenly and her face was pale even her legs n hands were cold too, he asked women around him to rub her leg n hands...he pressed her stomach so that water comes out. After two three times, she split water n get her conscious back. With her breath, his breath also came back to him n that day he realized he feels something strong for her than mere attraction. He comes to know that she belong to poor family n live in that village with her father.

After realizing his feeling, he was too eager to meet her again. He was bowled by her poems already. They were portraying such emotions which unknowingly pull more towards her. He wants to know more about her. He used to visit library every day in hope to see her again as he realized her love for poetry n literature. He was lucky that day when he saw her entering the library but she was looking tensed. She was searching something and he guessed it...she must be searching her notebook. She was unaware of his presence around her; he moved towards her n clear his throat to get her attention. She was shocked to find him here. He forwarded his hand holding her notebook. She took her notebook n thank him million times for giving it back to her. Before he can carry forward the conversation, she heard voice to leave as it was getting late. N she left.

Flashback End


He was now sure of his feeling n decided to confess her love for her. He was confused what to gift her for proposal when suddenly sounds of bangles solved his problem...yeah kangan...she loves kangan as he noticed her always wearing them.

Next day he met jeweler n asked him to make exquisite kangan which was never made in India...n asked to deliver him as soon as possible.

He was extremely happy that day as kangan were delivered today itself n now he gonna confess his feeling to her but he was not aware that his happiness is not for long when he entered mahal he saw some people gathered in main hall n some rituals were performing when he asked about it. He came to know that his marriage was fixed with Govind seth's daughter and ritual of roka was performed just now. He was shattered with the news and feeling extremely angry...how can they fix his wedding without consulting him...how can rajmata do such a big injustice to him. He confronted rajmata...

Aap aisa kaisa kar sakti h rajmata...humari shaadi humse puche bina kaise ap kisi ke kar sakti h...

Yeh apke pitaji ki aakhiri icha thi ranaji...hum bas unki akhri icha ko puri kar rahe h...govind seth bahut hi izzedar n naamcheen gharne se h aur who apke pitaji ke sabse kareebi dost the...unhone apke bachpan mein hi apki shaadi unki beti se tay kar di thi...

Aisa kaisa ho sakta...itni badi baat humein kisi ne batyai kyu nahi...

Hum apse yeh baat chupana nhi chahte the but bade ranaji ki mutye ke baad aap vilayat chale gaye...aur phir jab govind seth ne baat ka jikar kiya toh hum manna nhi kar paaye ...aur humein pura yakeen h ap apne pitaji ki akhiri icha jaroor puri karenge...ek rajput jaan de sakta h par apne vachan se nahi hatt sakta...

He just left from there...his heart was broken so brutally into so many pieces...still no one heard voice of his broken heart...his heart died that day.


just one more part...hope u guys likes it...n sorry for any mistake...

p.s. here ranaji don't know about gayatri as govind seth's daughter...

Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice he fell for someone but his marriage is fixed woth someone else waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing..
Update 2nd part too soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely start liked this ranaji with no past ranaji fallen for gayatri in first sight n he smitten by her beauty n her poem also but when he was going to confess his marriage got fixed n he cant do anything as its his father's last wish loved it plz post soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woww that was awesome! Please update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow this is so awesome..loved it
Cant wait to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..
Amazing start.
Ranaji in love with Gayatri but his marriage fixed wih Govind Seth's daughter.
But,Ranaji doesnt know that Gayatri,whom she loves,is going to become his dulhan.
Wow..
Really excited.
Continue sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A little bit of change in characterization...nice.

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