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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Congrats on the new story.



Thanx u both...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam_DDzfan

Very beautiful story
I m eager to read next part





thanx alot u alll...😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RM14

Congratz Vandy 🤗for new story here..🥳wow awesome start 👏and b'fully written dear..⭐️loved that Ranaji falls in love with Gayatri here..😳and no past of him in story..😆so his marriage is fixed but he loves Gayatri ..😛he fall for Gayatri and her beauty..loved how you described it..😳so what will he do now..waiting..update soon.😃

🤗 Thanx deepti...
glad u liked it...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Thank u guys for liking my story n giving wonderful comments...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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He never thought his life would change is just mere few hours...yesterday evening he was excited to confess his love to her ...n today he is already a committed man who is engaged to someone else...

He decided to bury his emotions n feeling to fulfill his father last wish ...he decided to visit temple n gave kangan there. He was climbing stairs of mandir still lost in thought when he collided with some one n both hold kangan to save each other from fall. Both looked in each other eyes n whole world stopped around them. God gave so many chances unknowingly to him where he met her n fall in love with her but today when he wanted to buried all his emotions for her...god again made him to meet her...he just want to keep looking at her without any blink...wants to capture her image in his heart for his whole life. They were just so lost in each other that they didn't realized that they are still holding kangan...beautiful moment between them got disturbed by loud bell voice from the mandir n without saying anything he started to move when he realized both are holding kangan...

She looked at him n than at kangan ...she felt uncomfortable for still holding kangan so she unloosens her grip over it...seeing all this ranaji say...

Waise toh yeh kangan ab humare kisi kaam ka nhi h par agar yeh apke pass rahega toh hum khushi milegi...aap isse apne pass rakhiye...

Nahi Ranaji...hum kaise yeh rakh sakte h...yeh bahut hi kimati h...

Hum chahte h yeh apke pass rahe isse jyada iske bare mein mat sochiye...ho sakta h yeh apke liye hi bana ho...Isse humari yaad samajh kar hi rakh lijiye...humein khushi milegi....

Gayatri smiled at him n kept kangan with her n he left from there...with peace in his heart that atleast kangan belong to her now for whom it was made even though purpose was unfilled...

Days keep passing n day of his engagement came...To be bride was standing infront of him in gunghant. He cared less about her...whats her name or how she looks as he already loves someone from his heart and will keep loving her for his entire life...marriage is just for name sake for him to fulfil his dad's promise...

Day of marriage also came n he is unaware of all the preparation n celebration around him...he confided himself in his room only...

He got dressed mechanically n came in mandap to perform last ritual of this so called marriage...again his bride was in gunghat n he care damn about her. He just wish she keep away from him n never show her face...its not that he hate her but he hate the circumstances in which they are getting married n deep down he know he is doing wrong with her...n because of his guilt he doesn't want to face her...

Being a rajput...being king of Ameerkot...he right now want to run away from all this n he was not ashamed of having such feeling...

He didn't know when all ritual were over n panditji asked him to stand for phere...he took seven phere with her n promised her to make her happy and keep away from all pain n hurt ...but deep down he knew, he will be giving her pain for lifetime...he filled her maang n tied mangalsutra around her without bothering to see her face n her long ghunghat helped him for the same...n now he is a married man.

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Ranaji reached his room where his bride was waiting for him. He decided to tell her that he didn't value this marriage n he loves someone else...

He entered the room...his bride was seating on middle of bed...her head was still fully covered n he was glad that he won't see her face as he didn't had the strength to speak such harsh reality of his n her life on her face...

He cleared his throat n said...

Mujh pata h apko humse n humari shaadi se bahut umeedien h...par hum apko aur dhoke mein nahi rakh sakte...hum apse shaadi se phle hi mil kar sab baat saaf karna chahte the par humein apse milne ki izzazat nahi mili...kuch rasmo ki wagah se dulha n dulhan nhi mile sakte the...par ab aur nahi...yeh sach hum apse nahi chupa sakte...

Yeh shaadi...

jo humari shaadi hui h...

hum...he was not getting enough strength to break her heart as he know what it feel like... how much it pains ...how lifeless u become when someone snatch ur dream...but he also can't give her hope n getting all his strength he closed his eyes n said...

hum yeh shaadi nahi karna chahte kyunki hum kisi aur se pyar se karte h...humein yeh shaadi sirf pitaji ke vade ki wagah se karni padi varna hum apni gayatri ko kabhi bhi kisi ke liye nhi chodte...hum jinse pyar karte h unka naam gayatri aur woh aam ladki joroor hai but humare liye bahut hi khas h...par shayad kismet ko kuch aur hi manjoor tha aur humein apse shadi karni padi...par hum apne pyar ko dhokha nahi de sakte...hum iss shaadi ko nahi maante...

hum apko apni patni hone ke haq toh nahi de sakte par aap ameerkot ki rani h n uske saare haq apko h...hum apse maafi chahte h humari wagah se apko itna sab sehna pad raha h ...par hum apne dil ke hatho majbur h...

n he left the room...

she lifted her veil n her face was showing mix emotions...her eyes were filled with tears which were flowing on cheek...she was gayatri...govind seth's daughter...

she don't know what to feel...happy as she heard confession of his love for her ...or sad being rejected by her pati on first night...she was too overwhelmed by the emotions which she was feeling right now...she hugged her knees n cried...she cried for him too...how much pain he kept inside n how much he struggled with himself to fulfill his dad's promise...

whole night just passed liked this only...he never came back to room n she kept crying...but first sunrays of new day brings hope in her...he loved her...she is his gayatri...he just need to know that he is married to gayatri...his love...than things will b normal...

She get freshen up n get ready to perform ritual of new dulhan n bride of rajmahal...she was doing her first aarti when ranaji came back to rajmahal n directly went to his room. She then went to kitchen to make sweet dish for her first cooking. She was passing by when ranaji saw her...he was astonished to see gayatri here ...he dismissed his thought as illusion.

He moved towards the hall to meet some guest when he again saw her cooking in kitchen...he shook his head...he think he is going crazy thinking about gayatri that's y seeing here again n again...he again ignored n moved towards the hall. After meeting them, he decided to spend his day in his study to avoid her wife. He was on his way when again he saw her in corridor...this time he tried to follow her but was interrupted by his worker and when he looked towards her ...she was gone...

He was going crazy seeing her again n again in rajmahal...he just shook his head n headed to his study.

Whole day passed in luka chupi. It was night time n now he can't avoid his room as people will surely talk about it. He was lucky no one noticed him yesterday night as all slept due to tiredness but today he can't take that risk...

He came to his room when he heard sound from bathroom, he guessed her to be in there. He came near the window n start looking outside...when he heard her bangle sound which again pushed her to the gayatri thoughts. He realized that she is standing behind her...maybe she wants some answer ...y he ruined her life...why he did this to her...

He broke the silence...humein pata h apko humse bahut sawal ka jawab chaiye hoga...apko hum par gussa bhi araha hoga...apse humse naraz bhi hogi...par is waqt hum kisi bhi sawalo ka jawab nahi de paayenge...humein kuch waqt dijiye...yeh sab humare liye bhi asaan nhi...apko kuch kehna toh aap humse keh sakti h...hum..

Aap bolne de toh hum bolenge ranaji....she cut in between as she don't want to lose this chance...whole day she waited for him...n now when she met him ...She feared may b like yesterday night too, he will leave after saying whatever he want...not giving chance her to speak...

Haan ap boliye jo ...than it strike him...her voice...that's sounded so much like gayatri...is his mind working too much...or its true...his heartbeat get high thinking of possibility that this voice belong to gayatri...

He slowly turned but his eyes were on floor...he was too scared to assume anything...he lifted his eyes from downwards to above...he saw her saree...same saree he saw gayatri in morning when he thought he is dreaming her...he looked at her hands which were adorning with bangles when his eyes caught kangan he gave to her...his heart beats were increasing each second...he looked at her face...his breath stopped...his heart beat stopped...he kept looking at the face infront of her...his gayatri...

His hand moved on their own to touch her...to make him believe she was here...no illusion...no dream...in real...in front of her...

When he touched her...his heart gave it away...he fell on his knees n cried...all emotions coming out today...she was gayatri...gayatri was in front of him...he got married to married to gayatri...

Gayatri reached near him n enclose him in her hug...her hand moving on his back to give him sense of belonging...warmness...to make him realize of reality that they got married...

After sometime when things get sober up, he looked at her asking so many questions still silent not to break this moment...both were looking in eachother eyes n holding hands.

Gayatri just nodded her head to answer her unasked question n said...

Haan hum hi apki gayatri h...apki shaadi humse hi hui h...hum gayatri seth h...govind seth ki beti jis se bachpan mein apki shaadi pakki hui thi...humein yeh bachpan se hi pata tha isly jab bhi ap mere samne aate the toh mein ghabra jaati thi ki ap kya sochenge mere bare mein...isi darr ki wagah se jab us din kaka ne humein apni beti bola hum chup rahe...kyunki hum apko khona nahi chahte the...hum apse bahut pyar karte h woh bhi aaj se nahi...bachpan se jab se...

Listening to her confession ...ranaji cant control his emotions n hugged her tightly...he is married to love of her life n above that she also loves him like he do...

Hum b apse bahut pyar karte hai gayatri... I Love U...(ab ranaji bahar padh kr aaye h toh itni English toh banti h...)


Hope u liked it...please do give me ur comments n press like button...

Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Beautiful update and an ending that made the reader feel super good...
You wrote in a manner that has made RNJ more humane...loved that concept. Thanks you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Ranaji is the more emotional one here ❤️ nice part
loved it ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vandy28

🤗Thanx deepti...

glad u liked it...😳😳

Welcome.🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome part dear Vandy..⭐️story is b'fully written..⭐️Wow so Ranaji thought that he married anyone else but he is married to his love..😳and he came to knew it late..but good Gayatri knew it before him and was waiting for him to come..😃so lovely..and the kangan scene is also b'ful..and how he clear his side to Gayatri.😳and later Gayatri also told her her side of story..she too love Ranaji..woww..😛superbb👏ending is perfect ..loved the story..❤️ keep writing.👍🏼keep shining..🤗
Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update and perfect ending. Loved the TS.

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