Raga OS : Yeh Haseen Vadiyan

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Raga OS : Yeh Haseen Vadiyan

She was at the waterfall of their kingdom in the evening, wearing a white saree with golden border and sitiing on the rock on a cliff as she didn't know how to swim. she was up at the rocks and down, in the water , Rana went swimming and she was waiting for him . It was cloudy , and earlier it had rained a lot .

Rana came out of the water , with still his half body in the water.

Yeh Haseen Vadiyan Ye Khula Aasmaan

Aa Gaye Hum Kahan Aye Mere Saajna

In Baharon Me Dil Ki Kali Khil Gayi

Mujhko Tum Jo Mile Har Khushi Mil Gayi

Gayatri was spellbound of that sight she had in front of her , that wet well toned body , those broad shoulders , that wet hair , all that made him look , not less than a greek god. Gayatri stood up , when he was still in the water . Gayatri was completely lost in this view, with lush green trees and grass around her . Then , climbed the rocks to get to the top of the cliff , where gayatri was , his wife was .

Tere Honthon Pe Hai Husn Ki Bijliyaan

Tere Gaalon Pe Hai Zulf Ki Badliyaan

Tere Daman Ki Khushboo Se Mehke Chaman

Sangmarmar Ke Jaisa Ye Tera Badan

Meri Jaan-e-jaan Main Teri Chandni

Ched Do Tum Aaj Koi Pyar Ki Raagini

Finally, he was standing in front of her. Staring at her beautiful light brown eyes.

G. Chale rana ji ?

R. Itni jaldi gayatri ?

G. Haan rana ji , ghar pe sab hamara intezaar kar rahe hai .

And she took a step forward but stumbled and she collided with ranas chest with her hands on his back and her face hidden in the crook of his neck . She could feel his cold body against her , That

gave her goosebumps . She slowly pulled back a little and with her hands moved up to reach the back of his neck.

Ye Haseen VadiyaanYe Khula Aasmaan

Aa Gaye Hum Kahan Aye Mere Saajna

He brought his lips close to gayayris ears and whispered in her ear

R. Ab toh bhagwaan bhi nahi chahta ki hum abhi yaha se jaye

Gayatri blushed heavily . Rana and gayatri were standing on the edge of the cliff and next to it , there was a waterfall flowing and down ... The lake where the water from the waterfall fell.

Ye Bandhan Hai Pyar Ka

Dekho Tute Na Sajni

Ye Janmon Ka Saath Hai

Dekho Chute Na Sajna

Ranas foot slipped from there and he Grabbed her waist tightly and pulled her towards him . They both fell in the lake ( gayaatri over rana ji )

Tere Aanchal Ki Chaaon Ke Tale

Meri Manzil Mujhe Mil Gayi

Teri Palkhon Ki Chaaon Ke Tale

Mohabaat Mujhe Mil Gayi

Gayatri panicked , but rana calmed her down... He held her waist and her hands were on his shoulders ... And their heads were out of the water .

R. Gayatri ghabeao mat ...mai hoon yaha .. Kuch nahi hua hai tumko aur mai kuch hone bhi nahi dunga .

Yeh Haseen Vadiyan Ye Khula Aasmaan

Aa Gaye Hum Kahan Aye Mere Saajna

In Baharon Me Dil Ki Kali Khil Gayi

Mujhko Tum Jo Mile Har Khushi Mil Gayi

Ye Haseen Vadiyaan Ye Khula Aasmaan

Aa Gaye Hum Kahan Aye Mere Saajna

Gayatri was breathing heavily for two reasons mainly , because she fell on the water and the other reason was ... Ranas closeness , His touch . They were in the middle of the natures beauty , lush green trees surrounding them , few colourfull bitterflies roaming on the plants which had red , pink roses . Rana was lost in gayatris beauty , he tucked some hair locks which were covering her face while gayatri closed her eyes.

Jee Karta Hai Saajna

Dil Me Tumko Bitha Lu

He noticed her heavy breathing and lifted her in his arms And brought her out of the water . He gently placed her on the ground , took his white shirt and placed it on her shoulders .

Aa Masti Ki Raat Me

Apna Tumko Bana Lu

It was night by then , and he was sitting on the grass , next to her , woth his hands extended at the back of him for support and gayatri was still wearing his shirt and so... He was shirtless.

R. Acchi hawa chal rahi hai yaha ... Tumhe sardi toh nahi lag rahi na ?

G. Mujhe toh nahi lag rahi ...par aapko.. ?

R. Mujhe toh aisa mausam bahut accha lagta hai , monsoon ki in barishon ki baat hi luch hoti hai, baarish ke pehle woh garmi, phir baarish ke baad wo sardi

Uthne Lage Hai Toofan Kyu

Mere Seene Me Aye Sanam

Tumhe Chahunga Dilon Jaan Se

Meri Jaanejaan Teri Kasam

Gayatri was lost in his words , and the way he spoke . She just couldnt take her eyes off him , she was Looking at him lovingly .

Yeh Haseen Vadiyan Ye Khula Aasmaan

Aa Gaye Hum Kahan Aye Mere Jaan-e-jaan

In Baharon Me Dil Ki Kali Khil Gayi

Mujhko Tum Jo Mile Har Khushi Mil Gayi

Meri Jaan-e-jaan Bin Teri Chandni

Chedo Tum Aaj Koi Pyar Ki Raagini

With her hand , she slightly pushed him on the grass . Then, She leaned forward And rested her head on his chest very close to his shoulder , and she placed her hand on his bare chest . He put his hand on her waist and brought her even more closer to him. He then came over her ... ... He was over her ... With both his hands on each side of her neck on the grass, which made gayatri blush heavily .

G.rana ji ... Yeh ap kya karrahe hai ?

R. Kyu kuch galat kar rahe hai kya ? ( and he smirked )

They spent the most beautiful day of the monsoon together, near the flowing waterfall.

Yeh Haseen Vadiyan Ye Khula Aasmaan

Aa Gaye Hum Kahan Aye Mere Saajna

Yeh Haseen Vadiyan Ye Khula Aasmaan

Aa Gaye Hum Kahan Aye Mere Saajna

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wow so romantic os beautifully written lovely song suit the scene very much just loved it thnx
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You are excellent writer 🤗
Such a beautiful update 😳 romantic
I love the way you write dear
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Again a beautiful piece of writing. So romantic
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mar gaye M.V.Kohli... OS pad kar khushi se 😉😊😊


itna superb OS likha tumne ki bas...


My most fav song ... & uper se roamantic Rana Gayu... 👍🏼


mai to dram land chali gayi...
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Oh wow !!! Another beautiful song from your collection & a lovely OS. Good going dear

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