ArChi os -' waiting for someone special' Note on pg-2

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Hey erskian let me do first intro myself for those who dont know me... I am pratiksha well I am not writter nor I write any thing on any couple till now. Its my 1st ever story for ArChi😳Plz tolerate my nonsense..-----------------------------------------------------------------the story has only aryan's povtime -5:45pm , location- coffee cafe,jaipuroutside of the cafe one young boy who was around 23 years old leaning on his car may be waiting for Someone. Yes by looking at him anyone can easly guess he is waiting for someone no someone very special. By the expression which was on his face are clearly saying how impatient he is right now just to see that person...Yes the boy is none other than our hero Aryan.aryan is waiting for his soon to be wife SANCHI. As a promise that they given to each other this morning to meet in cafe for coffee at 6 pm. its true there is 15 minutes are still remaining for 6 but aryan didnt want to late on his & sanchi's 1st date so he come early.ohh its their 1st date oops coffee date😳. Actually aryan want a dinner date but then thought may be sanchi will not be comfortable & he didnt want to make her uncomfortable. May be dinner date that to soon will not be the perfect idea so coffee date is final.aryan's heart told him he care so much about sanchi & aryan blush by listening this bcz its true😳Aryan again look at the watch who was showing 5 minutes are still remaining for sanchi's arrival. Now he cant wait more. Its only a one day & he cant wait to see her beautiful face , her amazing smile & the glow which come on her face whenever she is with him. Little did he know that his mere presence affect her. aryan chuckled at his own thought what happen to him at the beginning when that ji-ji drama of both going on at that time he cant imagine his whole lif with this girl and now he cant wait just to see her.time changes so fast.he remember the time they spend during the shital's marriage. those are beautiful moment how can he forget about this.it give him a perfect life partner. He remember how she blush She look so cute. Thinking this aryan has wide grin on his face. He was 100% sure that while talking to him on phone last night during their 1st ever phone conversation she was blushing.Aryan look at the watch who was showing its time for sanchi. Bzc its 6 pm. Aryan again smiled he was thinking about sanchi for whole 15 minutes its unbelievable but its true.Now finally time come & he cant wait to see his sanchi (Aryan again blush) its feel so nice to say his sanchi.yes "MY SANCHI" He said it little loud unknown to someone who was right behind him. The person just blush by hearing that word from aryan & think how luck she is.. ----------------------------------------------------------------- the enduff I write so much I am so shocked as I know how I write my exam😆I know may be its so stupid. as I am thought what will happen in todays episode this thought come into my mind & I pen it down.plz ignored the grammar & spelling mistake..ITS NOT A readproof as I update from my phone.feel free throw tomatoes 🤣.all comments are welcome and also tomatoes & chapples are welcome😳~Pratu😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its amazing! keep writing more..i would love to read it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pratu dear u nailed it yaar😊
First take a magical hug 🤗 from me...
Now coming to ur OS
The POV of aryan was beautifully written❤️
Der flashback his blush her blush😳
His impatience while waiting for her😉
OMG it was too gud😊

But ek request h can u make it TS...
Plz plz mujhe unki coffee date ki aur detailing chahiye m too greedy u know😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: urvi25

its amazing! keep writing more..i would love to read it😊


Thanks urvi🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: itznimi003

Pratu dear u nailed it yaar😊
First take a magical hug 🤗 from me...
Now coming to ur OS
The POV of aryan was beautifully written❤️
Der flashback his blush her blush😳
His impatience while waiting for her😉
OMG it was too gud😊

But ek request h can u make it TS...
Plz plz mujhe unki coffee date ki aur detailing chahiye m too greedy u know😉

Thanks nimi🤗 ya I am totally fida on their shyness...they look so cute. about the next part maine abhi tak socha nahi...I cant promise u but I will try to update next part if I get some idea..still not sure😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very well written dear keep rocking as alwayyss👏😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: prathe

very well written dear keep rocking as alwayyss👏😳


Thanks prathe🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinii01

Awesome os...loved it.


Thanks vini😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Can I give you hug for this story prati?🤗
Lolz.. Who will throw eggs and rotten tomais on you after reading this beautiful story dear!
You write it amazing sweetheart.. Keep it up and keep writing.. Aisa laga hi nahiki tumne first time likha hai kuch!
It was nice dear! 😊

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