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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi, Me (@samarth300) and Sumayyah(@sumayyah1) are the writers of this FF. I am a beginner and really haven't written an FF before. While, Sumayyah seems to be like an expert and wrote several FFs.
Well, we hope you like it!



Plot:Karan and Sakshi are both in their second year of college.Karan just moved from Gujrat. He's known for being funny and making pranks. Sakshi is a simple girl, but if provoked, she knows how I give a good reply back.


Intro:




Karan and Sakshi are sitting next to each other in class. Both are smart in school. Both are bored because tht already know this. Sakshi pretends to listen, and Karan sees his friend who is sitting on the other side of Sakshi.


When the teacher turned, Karan threw a note to his friend. Sakshi notices this and flashes an annoyed look at Karan. Karan ignores her.

Note: I'm really bored, Yaar. Do something so tht time flies

His friend thinks and then throws another note when the teacher isn't looking. Sakshi tries to ignore those 2.

Note: Hmm... Ok. I got a challenge. You see that girl next to u. Her name is Sakshi. Try to successfully flirt with her. And because we are at the back, the teacher also won't see is I'm sure you won't be able too.

Karan raises one eyebrow. Let's see about tht he said to himself.

Karan to Sakshi: *sings softly* Tujhe dekha hai toh yeh jana sanam. Pyar hota hai deewana sanam. ( Its a song. Umm.. What was next... Age ke lines main to bhoolgayi sanam. Par mere feeling sayi hai sanam. Tujhe dekha hai toh yeh jaana sanam!

While Sakshi seems to be unfazed. She thought if she ignored him, he would stop.

Karan: I'm Rahul.* He extends his hand.* Naam toh suna hoga

Sakshi: * Sakshi gives a fake smile*
Ha, sunna tha. Mere pados uncle hai na? Uska kuttha ka naam hai. Kitna pyaara naam. Rahul

Karan's friend bursts out laughing. Karan looks embarrassed. And Sakshi looks satisfied with herself. The teacher gives Karan's friend a dirty look and only then does he stop laughing


Sakshi: Next time, I won't sit next to him, he will probably eat my head.

Teacher: For this semester, this would be your assigned seats.

Everyone: Start mumbling and Karan, Sakshi and Karan's friend is annoyed

Teacher: Quiet down! The reason I'm doing this is so I can learn your names. I know a semester is quite long, but what to do, I have grown old and can't remember things as well. Class is dismissed

Sakshi: I'm now stuck between those two annoying boys, especially tht Karan. It's okay. I'm sure tht I'll will be fine an control those two
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the intro is exciting waiting to read more
continue soon
concept is really nice👍🏼
lol kutte ka naam rahul😆
awesome sakshi😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start...
a new concept
cOnt soon ..
nd do pm me !!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start 👍🏼.
Do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Important Note:

Like this post, if u want a PM . For those who already requested, pls do so too. I've edited the post to include the plot of the FF and also some edited part of the intro. Srry, I was in a hurry, so I had forgot. Pls do so:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is so sweet Trisha😊. Waiting for the next part.In this forum all the FFs r gud, each having a different story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1

Sakshi rolls her eyes and walks away. Karan is clearly annoyed and sees his friend smiling at him slightly

Karan: Why are you staring at me like that? I haven't murdered anyone he said with a slightly annoyed tone

Karan's friend: Arrey, Yaar! Why do you have to get so angry? Anyways... that Sakshi...

Karan: Don't ruin my mood even further? Can you not talk about her?

Karan's friend: Okay but... Wht was up with those filmi dialogues. What kind of cheesy flirting was that?Did you never flirt before?

Karan looked embarrassed

Karan: It's not that. It's just that she looked like the type of girl in which it would work. All the hot girls in Gujarat used to form lines just to talk to me.

Karan's friend: Yeah sure... *he said sarcastically*

Karan: I'm not lying!... Anyways, I will see you later, okay.

Later in the evening when Sakshi and Karan were at home

Sakshi's mom: Sakshi, can you come along with me?

Sakshi: Where are we going , maa?

Sakshi's mom: We are going to our new neighbor's house. They just moved here few days ago. I talked to them today when you went to college. I wanted to show them you and welcome them too.

Sakshi: Okay, let's go...

Sakshi's mom: Actually, I think I should pack some halwa that I had made and give them some. You go to their house until then and I will come after packing the halwa. It's right next door.

Sakshi: They will be licking their fingers after they eat your world-famous halwa! And come soon!

Sakshi goes there, but she has no idea that it's Karan's house and neither does Karan know that they are neighbors. She rings the doorbell and Karan opens the door. They both stare wide-eyed at each other.

Karan and Sakshi: TUM!!

Karan: What are you doing at my house?

Sakshi: I'm...

Karan : * interrupts Sakshi*You are not stalking me, are you?

Sakshi: Why...

Karan: * interrupts Sakshi again* If you want to say sorry, then I accept your apology. But, why do you have to follow me to my house? Why can't you just tell me that at college?

Sakshi: I...

Karan: *interrupts her again* Wait a minute... you haven't...? *he laughs* Oh... Now I know why you came here. You have fallen in love with me, right?

Sakshi has that you-are-crazy look

Karan: I know I am irresistibly handsome, but I'm sorry we can't...

Sakshi puts her hand over Karan's mouth.

Sakshi: Now I will talk, and you will listen.

They share an eye lock. Then Karan holds her wrist and takes her hand down.

Karan: Okay, talk

Sakshi pulls her hand from Karan's grasp

Sakshi: First of all, am I crazy to have a crush on you?! And secondly, I don't have any interest in coming to your house. It's just that..

Sakshi pauses when she sees Karan's mom walking in the hallway

Karan's mom: Who is it, Karan?

She comes to the door

Karan's mom: You are Sakshi, right? Your mom had shown me a picture of you. You even look more prettier in real life!

Sakshi: Thanks Aunty

Sakshi gave a I-told-you-so look to Karan.

Karan's mom: Where's your mom?

Sakshi's mom: Here I am

Karan's mom explains how they are neighbors to Karan and while Karan and Sakshi went to college they had met.

Sakshi's mom: Wait, you go to the same college, right?

Karan's mom: Oh yeah. That means you have met.

Karan: Yes. And she welcomed me very well *he gives a fake overly sweet smile to Sakshi*

Sakshi: Ofcourse...

Sakshi's mom and Karan's mom engage in small talk. Karan and Sakshi glare at each other.Sakshi's mom gives the halwa and she and Sakshi go back home.


Don't forget to like and comment! Also, pls comment a suggestion for the name of this FF. We can't keep on calling this KaSak FF, can we?
Edited by samarth300 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it. grt part...
Saakshi nd karan got pissed off with each other !!!!
amazing... fabulous...
cont soon..
nd fr name.. I suggest
love changed our equation !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was really good..
Continue soon
And name - unexpected love?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update...
Continue soon..
thanx for the pm...😊

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