RagNa OS- Heartbeats [Completed]

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This story is about a girl name kalpi who doesn't believe in kind of commitments or relationships,for her love n marriage is all just a time waste n nothing else,she is damm very carefree girl who doesn't care about anyone, she is totally a kind of mad,she use to flirt with boys,hangout n parties with them n sometimes even goes on night out with them but not at all serious with any of them,she use to spend all her day outside only,she never loves to back to her home even in nights too which is not at all liked by her mom n brother n many a times they both tried to talk with her but she always avoids the topic or sometime just left the house angrily after breaking something n moreover even though her mom n brother loves her more then anything else in this world n she too loves them a lot but still she use to maintain a safe distance from both of them n from her home too which makes them both more n more worried about her n by seeing her careless behaviour towards everyone n specially towards her life they both plans to let her settle down in her life by getting her married to someone n they both even forcefull let her meet many random boys among whom many of them run away out of kalpi's fear because she scares them n the one's doesn't run away form them she herself runs away her because she never wants to get married n by seeing all this drama all her neighbours,relatives n specially her friends keep on taunting n insulting her but she never cares about anyone, she just keep on leading her life the way she wanted,she never cares about everyone thinks about her nor she ever tried to change her image infront of any of them but in the end when her mom n bhai were all set tie up her with someone n that too without even telling or asking her so to escape from this situation she just run away from her house n comes to delhi where she starts working in a company so that she can atleast earn enough money to fullfill her basic needs n like this two years passed away n in this two years kalpi never talked with her family nor they able to talk to her because she just even changed her number too but finally after two long years she at last decided to go back to mumbai because she has a very good news to share with her family but when she returns back her mom n bhai totally ignores her,doesn't even talks with her but she never gives up,she always keep on irratting both of them n being her mom n bhai who could they both be angry on her for a longer time so at last they both forgives her after which through her mom she gets to know that her bhai use to love someone n now were all set to get married to her n kalpi too told her family that she too loves someone but doesn't told his name which shocks her family as for the first time they r hearing the word love from her mouth but then they thought that she must be joking with them or it would another her time pass but this time kalpi was really damm serious n it clearly reflects on her face too because of which her mom n bhai open their mouth on "O" shape because they still cant able to digest the fact that their little kalpi who always use to run away from relationships n thinks that love is just a sh** now really falls for someone n it doesn't go unnoticed by kalpi but like her family she too wonders that who could she falls in love with someone,who could she loves someone so madly but the fact is fact n the fact yes she loves someone n that too a lot, this two just totally changed her life n her too, she slowly but start believing in relationships, love n her family just loves this new side of their kalpi,in their hearts they both always thanks a ton to that someone special who just totally changed their little princess kalpi after which on the engagement day kalpi n her family gets to know that the one whom she madly loves was actually her would be bhabhi's maya bhai raghav which makes everyone damm very happy because together they all completes each other as kalpi n bhai jay doesn't have a father whereas on the other side both raghav n maya doesn't have anyone of them so they all together makes everyone happy n fullfill colors n loneliness in others life but as the marriage function proceed maya gets a to know a lot about kalpi n who she use to be in her past n specially that no one actually like her accept her mom n bhai because of which she just break up raghav's relation with kalpi n even bad mouths about her n about her character as she never wants this type of girl for her bhai n raghav too doesnt says anything n just nods in yes accepting her sisters decision as he use to respect his sister's a lot because she was the only one who looks after him after their parents death,forgetting her own pain she just played both mother n father role in his life n he just cant deny any words of his sister even whether he likes it or not whereas all this doesn't go well with kalpi n she just locks herself in her room n cries her heart out which her bhai cant able to bear,it prick's his heart to see his little sister in such a condition n even when maya was bad mouthing about kalpi their mother cant able to tolerate this she too said up that from now her daughter kalpi will never talk to her bhai raghav or even will look towards him also after which silently everybody went to their respective rooms whereas after sometime raghav comes to maya's room where she is still fuming in angry n tries to talk to her but she just doesn't respond to anything so raghav just left the room but before leaving the room he told to maya that di when u call off mine n kalpi's relation I was very hurt but still I didn't said anything n remains silent its not I don't love her well its because I respect u a lot n also loves u a lot even more then her but that doesn't mean that I dont love her,I just love her from the bottom of my heart n will keep on loving her until my last breath no matter we were ever be together or not,I just always wants her in my life n no one else in her place n if she was not in my life then I dont want anyone else so if it was not her then I would never marry anyone,I'm sorry di I know it will gone hurt u but still if possible plz forgive me because I had some responsibility towards her also which I cant able to fullfill so now at last I can be loyal to her love n when raghav left jay comes to the room,no he doesn't come their to make maya understand anything or to request her to accept his kalpi,he just come their to tell maya everything which she must need to know about kalpi's past,he told her that before kalpi was never like this,she use to be the very mature n understanding n specially very simple in their family in her childhood n even sometimes he n their mom n dad too wonders when they all were so naughty n pranksters who came she was like this but then it was her nature n u know what since our childhood I was very close to my mom n she use to very close to dad, I always mummy's boy n she was daddy's princesses,she may never shares anything with me or mom but she never hides anything from dad,more then father daughter they were like best buddies but when she was ten years n I was twelve our parents gets divorced because nothing was just left in their relation,everything had ended between them, they both doesnt even talks properly with each other n use to keep fighting with each other,its not that they never think about us they did n thats why for us only they both tries to sort out their differences,tries to out their relation but nothing works so they decided that n finally they both gets divorced n after the divorce kalpi wants to stay with dad but dad doesn't took her along with him n after divorced he never even for once also comes to meet us,he just disappers from our lifes like he was never the part of our lifes,kalpi always use to wait for dad but he never comes back,day passes,week passes,month passes,year passes but he doesn't back, kalpi always keeps on hoping that today dad will surely come but by the end of the day all her hopes n dreams gets shattered n broken into pieces but nothing works out n for kalpi me n mom even tries to find out dad,we enquiry with his friends n relatives but
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they too doesnt know about his wearabouts as my mom n dad did a love marriage so his family had broke up all their relation with him but dad's leaving us n going away for forever left a great impact on kalpi's life,that mature,sensible kalpi just totally changed herself from what she use to be,she thinks when her own dad doesn't care about her then why would she care about anyone,when her own dad left her then why wont others will also left her n go away n moreover when she saw our parents love marriage falling apart she assumes that love doesn't exists in this world,she denies in believing on kind of relation,commitment,love or marriage n she becomes totally carefree n spent all her day outside only because when she comes back to the house everywhere she could feel the dad presence,dad memories haunt her so she perfers to be always outside only n moreover yeah she use to flirt with boys but she never hurts anyone because before only she use to told that boy that he was just a time pass for her so if still that boys loves to be with her, enjoys to be with her in what was her mistake,I'm not justifying her but still n moreover yeah she use to maintain a safe distance from me n mom but its because she dont love us well its because she is afraid of another heart break,she thinks that what might if she would get close to us n just loke if we also leave her then she won't able to bear that pain n it was not her mistake but our's that we cant able to make her understand that no matter what happens we will gone never leave her,being her family also we fails to understand her n thats why she was like that but trust me after meeting your brother raghav she had just totally changed herself n she loves him a lot so its wish that what u will choose whereas in her room kalpi just tear up all her photos she had with her dad n ask to that tear up photos that why dad why u left me alone,why u did this to me,I hate u, I hate u a lot n while she was talking a photo she hear a knock on her door she quickly throws all the photos under the bed, wipes her tears n then opens the door only to find her mom,bhai,raghav n maya standing their smiling at her to which in return she gives them all a fake smile n request them to come inside but she avoids any eye contact with anyone of them but still by seeing her red eyes they all understands that she had cried a lot but then all of a sudden maya hugs kalpi n told her that she was ready for her n raghav's relation which makes everyone damm very happy as till now maya doesn't even tell any of them about her decision but this time kalpi denies by saying that she doesn't want anyone's sympathy or charity n saying so she just left from their but as the day passes everyone made her understand n finally she acceptes n that night for the first time she sleeps in her mother's lap n her brother prays that this will never change n her sister gets all the happiness but the very next day brings a strom in all their lifes as that day when kalpi goes out to collect her dress she met up with a accident n she died on a spot whereas when kalpi's heart stop beating here in home raghav's heart too stop beating n he too died at that very moment only because of their heart were connected to each other n after their deaths everyone gets to know that they both had planned to donate their hearts,it was their last wish because they wants that may be they both die but their love story never die,their love will remain in this world even after their exist n people never forgets their love story n after this incident two long year passed away after which the scene starts in xyz clz where in clg library a boy name raj n a girl name kajal were searching for a book called heartbeats because of which both of their collides with each other n they felt a unknown connection with each other but like always ignores it n then they both finds the books but in library their was only one book of it so like always they both keep on fighting with each other whereas their friends tries to stop them so like always at end they both decided to read that book together n while they both were reading that books their friends ask them that what they both finds so interesting in that book that they both keep on reading that book always,its more 100th time that u guys had read that book but still u both never gets over with that book why,whats in that books that u guys r so mad about it to which they told them that the story of this books is actually a really story after which they both tells their friends everything about kalpi n raghav,yeah guys this books was written on our ragna n that too by their siblings n after telling everything about our ragna when both raj n kajal stops their friends says that we all think that it was ur own love story,we mean that the way u both told about them so passionately it gives us a feel like that only n even u both had lots of similarities with them but they both rejects it n goes away in opposite direction but yeah they two also feels themselves very similar to both raghav n kalpi,it might could be possible that they both r so damm lucky that they had raghav n kalpi's heart with them n god had choosed both of them to complete their incomplete love story n if it is so then they cant wait for it n r damm excited for it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice Jiya
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely dear
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely os.thank u for pm.please update your other stories next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Nice Jiya
Continue soon 😊

dear it is already completed just see the second post
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Originally posted by: sharda_123

Lovely dear

Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Thanks dear n its already completed dear just see the second post
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful OS
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its different bt awesome dear
Kalpi alwz daddy princess
Poor she f to go through all tis
Flirting n do whatever she want...doesn't believe in relationship
Until our hero come..frm rejection to acceptance
Suddenly big tragic...both passed away
Bt its rely miracle even after death their love alive
Love means RAGNA
thz dear...superb
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suPerb jiya what an emotional and heart touching storysu

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