Betrayed - ch 11 pg 33 - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

164

Views

43.3k

Users

29

Likes

410

Frequent Posters

Nesansheki thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Nice dear
I dont want they separate
rachufan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Omg two chapters in one single day a big big big thanks wish it happens daily
About updates speechless speechless speechless speechless
Raghav felt her pain but he wants she complaint s it but her calmness makes him restless he knows whatever he is doing with her it is wrong but he wants to listen it from her mouth
And other side she doesn't want to show him her broken state
I love ur all stories and always crave for updates
Please try to complete it
Thank u
MagicalMadness thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#73
So kalpi has given raghav his divorce

When will he realize his true feelings for her

I truly feel for kalpi

Kalpi is such a selfless soul even though raghav has wronged her and used her as a tool for revenge she still agrees to help him

I hope Raghav comes to his senses

Continue soon

Love that ur back

Thank u for such wonderful updates

Mwah
pratibhas5 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#74
OMG two updates wo bhi itni jaldi Oh I am really surprised and happy

Thaanx so much dear Part 7 what is happening now I am really crazy to know what happens next...😎
meenukansal thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Awesome update dear
Thanks for updates dear
When raghav realise his love for his wife kalpi
Waiting for next update dear
sampa79 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Awesome update
Back to back update
premap thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Excellent ! The update is superb ! Kalpi gives Rags his divorce without any 'dramatics' !!!! Rags highly disappointed that Kalpi made no objection , infact she does not even attend the hearing ! Empty victory for Rags ! Thanks for update.
naam11 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#78
I think you are back. Please complete this beautiful story.
Chap 7 is awesome. Kalpana and raghav are divorced now. Kalpana is pure and beautiful from inside. She is protecting raghav and her father. Raghav is really unlucky he is lost such a nice human being who only thinks for other without thinking about her own pain. She is alone and in pain. How she get happiness.
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON.
Edited by naam11 - 7 years ago
premap thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Update please and relieve us of our tension ! Thanks.
angelpureness thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Thank you guys for the interest and feedback. Glad ur all enjoying this Ragna journey.
Am trying very hard not to let this story become dark. :)

Chapter 8

Three weeks later - court house.

Dressed in a charcoal grey suit, kalpi's demeanor is somber as she waits for her lawyer for any last minute instructions. Looking at the four walls, around the empty room, her body shudders slightly as she recalls the lawyer's warning that she could face jail time. Taking a deep breath, she clears her mind, not wanting to think of anything.


Kalpi's lawyer frowns at the sight that greets him when entering the room. Ragav looks up when the door opens. Turning back to Kalpi, he gives her a reassuring smile, pats the back of the palm he is holding and says softly, "I will see you inside.


Heart racing, nervous, Kalpi stands before the judge, waiting for the verdict, whispering reassuringly, "Ragav said to trust him... I won't go to jail... trembling slightly as the word jail crosses her mind... " no, I won't go to jail... Ragav said... Hearing a loud metal click, kalpi snaps back into the present, confusion seeping in as she sees her wrists handcuffed. Her mind in a daze, u able to form a coherent though, "... huh... what... but... Her gaze searching for ragav's admist her confusion. Unable to see him as she is jerked into motion by the officer as he pulls her along, she turns to the voice telling her not to worry, that they will appeal. Teary eyed she meets her lawyer's gaze as she is led away, telling herself, "no. You must not cry.


Kalpi looks around in earnest as she is being led away towards the prisoner transportation vehicle... her gaze still searching for Ragav. Wanting to reassure him that she still trusts him and that... she stops midstride and mid thought... watching the play unfold before her at the end of a deserted stairwell... Maya's arms clasped around Ragav's neck, grinning as she says aloud, "we did it, before leaning in and kissing him on his lips. Breaking the kiss as he pulls Maya's hands away from his neck, wanting to ask her why she asked for jail time when it was agreed they would ask for community service and fines.

Instead hearing his name called out with anguish, Ragav turns around, instinct telling him it's Kalpi. He takes a small step back, reeling from the gaze filled with silent accusation and pain from his betrayal. Filled with remorse and guilt for having Luther in such a situation, Ragav takes a few steps towards her, wanting... no, needing to express his innocence... that he ever wanted to send her to jail... never wanted to punish her for her father's crimes. He stops abruptly, his path blocked by a furious Neetu Kapoor. Like an enraged lioness ready to protect her cub, she glares at him icily, slapping him hard across his face, her huge diamond ring, cutting his skin as she says, "stay away from my daughter. You are toxic for her. A hint of regret etched in her eyes as she wonder how she got it so wrong.

Tears pour down her cheeks, unchecked, no longer does she have the strength to hold them in, turning to the officer by her side, Kalpi whispers in a wobbly voice, "please take me away.


P.s. this chappy is short, coz in my next chappy I want to focus on Kalpi's strife in jail. Thanks for your patience girls :)
Edited by angelpureness - 7 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".