A Day in Ragnaland (os as ts) Last Shot up, page1 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Hanz91

Very lovely ending ❤️

Originally posted by: b.baheti

I am waiting for your comment Sejal😉

Originally posted by: b.baheti

I know you're madly in love with SamLa your pic says it all😉

But I anyday prefer RagNa over SamLa! 😛

Mein Kamla Bai ki hotness nai jhel sakti...baksh de mujhe 😆

Aweome beautiful blissful
thanku soo much for giving another master piece of writing from u my os queen want to read u more please
kalpi was overwhemled with herdaughter and husband 's unconditional love raghav's eaction was awesome

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

I decided to read your last shot in fully air conditioned Bus.. Kya karu? Phir bhi garmi lag rahi hai...

Finally someone can make their husband cook and clean haan tution maine hi diya tha😛... Baaki sab comments... 😆

I seriously missed romantic OS from you... SamLa ki kasam miss kiya.. chal jhooti. I don't believe you😒

Now coming to Shirin... Cutipie..is soo adorable... Loved how she could even make her daddy dance on his tune...

And finally family would be complete... Hahhaha what a way to inform that he is gonna be daddy again...

Originally posted by: rachufan

Aweome beautiful blissful
thanku soo much for giving another master piece of writing from u my os queen want to read u more please
kalpi was overwhemled with herdaughter and husband 's unconditional love raghav's eaction was awesome

Originally posted by: naam11

Beautiful update.
Beautiful family.

Rishu. I really really really loved the whole story, or say these shots. Phew ending toh dhamkedaar tha, and loved little doll of papa and mumma. 😆 and only the innocent character in the story.

Kalpana kitni budhu hai, man I literally wait day and day out for Gandhi Jayanti, you know. It's so special day. Janam hua tha kai mahan logo ka. and this madam forgets her birthday, 😆 and don't worry, shaadi ke baad itna asar nai hota, experienced hoon.😉

Woh last wala scene toh I was wondering how would Pakhi and Pakya look on that, ☺️ bass man mein se RagNa ko replace kar diya tha, 😆 , it was wayy more hotter, trust me!!

Loved your narration, ab samay aa chuka hai tu ek kadam aage badh and apne khudke books publish kar

Originally posted by: Cute_Kate

Rishu. I really really really loved the whole story, or say these shots. Phew ending toh dhamkedaar tha, and loved little doll of papa and mumma. 😆 and only the innocent character in the story. I'm glad you liked it. 😃

Kalpana kitni budhu hai, man I literally wait day and day out for Gandhi Jayanti, you know. It's so special day. Janam hua tha kai mahan logo ka. and this madam forgets her birthday, 😆 and don't worry, shaadi ke baad itna asar nai hota, experienced hoon.😉 haan bhn I remember tu dhokebaaz hai. 😒 waise your opinion doesn't matter as of now. Abhi kuch saal jhel le shaadi the biggest musibat, then we'll talk about it. 😛

Woh last wala scene toh I was wondering how would Pakhi and Pakya look on that, ☺️ bass man mein se RagNa ko replace kar diya tha, 😆 , it was wayy more hotter, trust me!! Ewww, Hotter or distasteful? Chal koi nhi nobody writes on your pakau PakPak, tu ase hi kaam chala le. 😆

Loved your narration, ab samay aa chuka hai tu ek kadam aage badh and apne khudke books publish kar soch samajhkar bol yaar mai chane ki jhaad par chad to jaugi lkn utarna nhi ata. 😆 phle apni vocab, literature skills aur grammer improve kr lu, dher sare novel pdh lu fir schti hu.😉

Sorry for being late Rishu I was busy in exam. I'm a fan of your style of writing very different and fresh. 👏 Coming to the os it is another wonderful work by you. Everything waas described beautifully. And my favorite part was Ragna's doll Shirin, such a beautiful name you gave to their angel. I'd love to read you again and again. Please keep writing. ❤️