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farhana04

@farhana04

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

It was an awesome OS.

Totally loved it.👏

Beautifully written dear.

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Nikita

@Niki1980

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Beautiful OS...Amazingly written...loved it 👏 👏

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raghavkalpi

@raghavkalpi

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

My Res Os By you 😃 and by the way sexy UN 😆

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Swara

@swara2504

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

beautiful os Rishu...
hmm from tragedy to romance to comedy to chori bhi...and last ko kalpin still in coma ka dard..
very good
kamla bai ki daya bohot mehngi padi prem baba ko na kalpi mili na ghodi.
par ramu se goli jaroor mili
every part is just beautiful...
but kalpi ko coma se nikal deti to aur achcha hota...
par shayad tere kammi ne tujhe nahi kaha hoga..
chal next update me jarur utha dena.
lovely...muhhaa

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raghavkalpi

@raghavkalpi

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

I have just one word for you Amazing👏

l'm confused whether to cry or ROFL 😭😕😆

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Burns n Trolls

@shahsb_26

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Kahan gayo Rishu?? Pakdo usse, Kitna rulayegi kam se kam 20th Page tak usse utha toh deti... Khumbhkaran mein hoon yaa Kalpi... Oyee... Uthaa Kalpi ko... Uthaa... Jaldi Uthaa.. warna aa rahi hoon tujhe shoot karne..

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

omg rishu itna bada OS

Outstanding OS ...ekdum bole to zhakaas👏

Firstly happy ye ragna OS tha bade time ke baad tune ragna OS likha😉 n den isme emotion drama romance comedy tradedy sab tha...n brilliantly written 👏

Loved ragna moments😳

It was emotional to see rags gng thru pain seeing his wife lying lifeless for seven long yrs but like he dnt loose his hope...yaar end me kalpi ko thik kardeti na ...can seee rags in pain😭

Lol rishu best part was der past story...start to same emawala tha saahil aftr rags money n den him flying to US but wit ur added punch it was hilarious to read...fultoo rishu istyle me😉😃

Kammo ka beintehaah pyaar apne prem baba ke liye,kalpi ka explanation to prem to reject him ,den dhanno wala scene, n princess cuming on ghodi to get her prince charming , pakhi's pyscho exbf bro killing kapoors lol everything was amazing 🤣🤣(agar ye lastwala idea ema CVS ko bataya hoto tune to Hume wo crap nahi jhelna padta lol ragna wuld b living happily ever after😛)

All in all beautiful OS

❤️ 🤗

Edited by rani214 - 9 years ago

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IThinkALot

@IThinkALot

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Ragna1302

Rishu it's so fabulous. ...beyond to explain. ...I loved it sou change. ...yaar...no word I have 4 u..n this os. ...
Ragna pure love..There promise n wait 4 eachother. .loved it..
..kamala 😡..prem is good...pakhi 😆😆..
I like stage dance of neetu sahil n kamo 🤣...
N loved kalpi horse riding 😉😳...
Yaar but ..y kalpi not wake up. ...😭..raghav love her do much.

Plzz write next part...

Thnx Mango! kalpi is a sleeping beauty.😃

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IThinkALot

@IThinkALot

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sunyy
Beautiful

Par yaar kalpi ko coma se jaga deti 😭

😒

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IThinkALot

@IThinkALot

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: TheLifeDiaries
It is beautiful OS...i loved it...it had it all...be it emotional, funny, dramatic all...I just felt something missing...maybe a part 2 can fill the missing element...if you think of a part 2 do pm me...Thanks

thank you dear.

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