I will give you some credit for /attempting/ to apologize since some of it seems like you are still trying to act innocent. Yeah you should have just approached me. I don't know why you made it sound like I wasn't approachable since I was very cordial and kind to you on my blog. The fact that you didn't read the reply is a bit insulting. But here let me repost it here for you in blue. There is a difference between getting inspiration from something and outrightly taking characteristics from the characters and plot points and stitching it on to your characters and story. So be mindful of that for your future writing. And again, I was disappointed you lied to me again and I was able to pick that out easily. This is the reply you chose not to read.
Your explanation is so comical it is making me laugh, no offence. The mere fact that you said your character isn't involved in sports, you can't use that show as reference because I can used my story as reference where all of the characteristics are present. Also if you got this idea from the show, why did you say in the beginning of the thread that /you/ got this /different concept/ and want to try it out? That simple sentence made it look like you were saying you came up with this on your own really. Writers sometimes mention their source of inspiration or where they got the idea from. I know I did for Lion and Panther and even Face in clouds.
The characters being married, hello Aria, I am sure you read the initial chapters of heartbeat. They were not married there they were in school.
As for dancing in outside, I know I saw that but to go back to the chapter, now I don't know if that is edited out. But there was a scene with them slow dancing outside something along that line to show a growing bond <----- Now that I have double checked it again, it wasn't slow dancing but they were outside. You used a song, they were hugging or something like that. So that was my mistake. With the song, I thought it led to slow dancing. However can't help but think the aim was the same. Show them outside with a song in play to show bond growing closer. But I am sure you got that conveniently from a movie.
Also don't get me started on the overly possessiveness, you don't need a boyfriend. I can point to heartbeat which you did read where Rey showed the same possessiveness of telling her that he wasn't going to allow her to have a boyfriend if he knew her.
" Many Stories Around Have The "Angry Young Man Who Sleep,Drinks and Smokes." Not Only Yours Nor Mines. Because If Your Story alone In the World Have That, Then I Am Certainly A Major Thief and Others Before You Are Thiefs,Life Is a Thief. truth Be Told,I Cannot Name All The Stories That Have Drinking and Smoking,I Can Name Many Shows and I Can Say people In real Life Does It" <---- I honestly feel like you are just not understanding what I am saying by trying to use this useless justifications. Yes other stories have these things. But do those stories also have, involved in sports, daddy issues, standing up to family boldly to show they are going to do what they want to be with the person they like, arrogant and rude but still shows kindness to those he loves, overly possessive, threatens to shoot father for interfering with his relationship. No right? Again let me point you to two stories that has all of this going on. In a heartbeat and fated to love you.
And just so you know Rey is reckless. He is a motocross racer which is a reckless sort of sport. He still has his temper and you saw it. And yes my character showed changes but he was nice to those he loves, his friends, his mother. So again don't know what you were trying to prove here by saying Raghav is still reckless but you wanted to show he still cares for others because you actually confirming this is another characteristic that is similar with Rey and your Raghav. WELL DONE.
"But I Made Her Strong and Fierce That She Fights Back With Others the same way. She's Not Meek." <------ Wow. You are trying to show originality here?And Kaashvi didn't show her fiery nature when she had too? Should I point to the updates where she shows her fiery nature with Reyansh particularly during the school project?
As for everything else where you want to say stuff are from other stories, movies, it has been done before. AGAIN. I was ASKING YOU to POINT ME to a story or movie THAT HAS ALL OF THESE THINGS AT PLAY AT ONCE. Your story has these things in play AT ONCE, down to the pendant, down to every damn thing. The only story that has ALL OF THESE THINGS AT PLAY AT ONCE, is mine.
TWO STORIES. BOTH WITH TWO CHARACTERS WITH SIMILAR CHARACTERISTICS. BOTH WITH SIMILAR PLOT POINTS. COINCIDENCE? And you want to give me this rather patchy explanation to say you pulled it from here and there. Yes other stories have playboys. Yes other stories have innocent nerds and bookworms. BUT WITH THESE SAME CHARACTERISTICS, IN TWO STORIES WITH SIMILAR PLOT LINES, I haven't seen another story like that.
Oh and again with the lies? AGAIN WITH THE LIES ARIA? You never read twisting??????????? OH REALLY? Kind of like you never read lion and panther and then admitted, oh yeah you read some chapters. I HAVE SCREEN SHOTS OF YOU LIKING TWISTING UPDATES. ENOUGH WITH THE LIES. I think you just managed to dig yourself into a bigger hole here by proving you are a liar.
This is the height of despicableness. Disgusting that you still think you are innocent here.
Change these characters. REMOVE THESE PLOT POINTS. This explanation IS NOT ACCEPTED.
My thoughts on you haven't changed probably because it is just too much happened now. Maybe in time I will forgive you but not now. Take care otherwise.
