Heartless For You. (RagNa FF) Prologue - Page 1, 9th January 2016

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Heya girls!! Howz everybody doing? Okay, okay.. firstly, I am ready for all the joota & chappals of different brands & even assorted varieties of veggies, 'cause I know I have no right to start a new story when I have threee pending that too at their initial positions. God I suck at updating..!! Well, I wrote the updates for my other works, numerous times, only to be deleted by me, thinking it's not worth it. *sigh*
I promise to get myself regular for two of my works.. Love Never Dies (RagNa FF) will take time because that's my dream story & I want it done to perfection. Hope u guys understand. . I know, u will. . 'Cause u people r just superb! ! Love u all to bits..!!

Now, coming to this story..
It's a really dark, something like Oreo biscuit coloured story. Raghav & Kalpana r mysterious characters. Kalpana is a dark character in the beginning whereas Raghav is a simple, annoying, light-hearted businessman. Raghav turns evil later because. ...ssshhh! Hehe, I could have ended up telling the whole track LOL. Well, the most important thing which matters is that our RagNa will end up together. .BUT, only after a lot of things, ugly things, which will happen to them & their loved ones.
I promise to keep it pretty romantic throughout. .I have my ways! *wink*
So my sweetus, please read the prologue below & let me know ur views.. will continue it only if u guys like it. Much love.

PROLOGUE :
It was Raghav & Kalpana's marriage day. Everything was organised to perfection in the Singhania mansion. It was one of the most lavish weddings the world would ever come across. Though, the guest list included only their close relatives & friends.
It is one of the most awaited day in one's life. And Raghav was really happy that he was doing it with Kalpi, the love of his life. He smiled at the thought of having Kalpana marked as his today in front of the whole world. He was happy she was going to be his. He was happy to make her Mrs. Singhania from Ms. Khanna. He was overjoyed. He sat at the mandap, awaiting Kalpana, his bride to be. The muhurat was of 8pm & it was 7:50 already, still no sign of Kalpana. Raghav started growing worried with every passing second, he felt his world slipping from his hands. But he still smiled for the sake of other people. It was 8 now, & Raghav's heart was in a million fragments thinking why didn't his Kalpi show up? Didn't she love her? No, no that's not a question. .she of course does. That's y we were getting married! Kalpi, where r u? Please come ba--.
Raghav's thought cycle was broken when he heard the noise of heels making their way in.
The hall grew pin drop silent.
He looked up gradually, his eyes meeting the person's face.
He gasped.
"Kalpana?" He murmured under his breath, as he saw her approaching him.
He stood up silently, never once breaking his eyes from her.
Kalpana was dressed up in a professional suit with her hair loose open & a pair of sunglasses on.
She looked ethereal but emotionless too.
Raghav slowly got off the mandap, to be face to face with Kalpana, his life.
There was a moment's silence.
Her slender fingers reached out to her sunglasses, & she took them off gently. And while folding her shades, she said,
"Mr. Singhania, I am just here to get my house emptied. Please leave right now because u can't even take a single thing out of here..'cause it all belongs to ME!!!!! Now leave. I don't want to waste my precious time, u see!!" Kalpana muttered at his face with words dripping with venom.
Raghav was speechless. He couldn't even move. He was out of reactions. He just wanted to stand there & watch the girl who was the only being whom he loved so dearly in his entire life, ruin him, totally ruin him, mentally & economically.
"Are u listening! !??? Get out of here!! Otherwise I'll have u thrown out! !" She roared.
Raghav had lost his voice. He continued to stand there as a statue, staring at her unbelievable form.
"Oh, now I get it!!!! U want proof that this property belongs to me?? Hai na?? Wait.. I'll get it for u!!" Kalpana said before gesturing someone to bring the papers.
"HERE" She muttered with gritted teeth, throwing lots of copies of the agreement at him.
Raghav closed his eyes when he felt the cold sheets touching his face.
His hand automatically grasped one of the sheets & he went through it. It was true. It all belonged to Ms. Kalpana Khanna. He stared at his signature to ensure it was his. They were. He dropped the paper & closed his eyes not allowing his tears to fall.. not allowing himself to fall weak.
He passed a disgusted look at Kalpi and started taking small steps to leave only to be stopped by Kalpana.
"Wait, ur watch. Take it off." Kalpana said, her words as cold as ice, piercing right through Raghav's skin, up till his heart.
He turned & kept his watch on her out stretched palm while staring at her emotionless eyes.
Slowly, Kalpana took everything from him, including his watch, mobile phone, car keys & even his engagement ring. She took it all.
Raghav left the mansion which was once his with Sammy following him.

Done, done, done!!
How was it??
Please please please like & comment.
Negative comments accepted too.
Note- I wrote it down because this story was doing rounds in my brain since few weeks. And I wanted to let u all know about it.
No updates until end of March for this FF.
Sorry, because I hv quite important things lined up personally & this FF needs a fully functional brain cause of all the serious plotting.
Hugs!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's awesome. ...
Continue soon. ...Update part 1 ...plzzz
My raghav😭..y kalpi did this...n raghav love her do much...
Poor he...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😛Superb .go girls its beautiful story line .Thanks .please try to update ur dream story and other too .with this one .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start...why kalpi is like this poor raghav...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for your new story BUT I prefer to read your previous lovely UNFINISHED stories. They are simply FAB !!! No chappals available and I love my veggie ,so I cant waste them , to throw at you !!! LOL ! But I can go on with my irritating comments ! [ Worst than tomatoes n chappals ! ]
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg my poor raghav
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start dear.interesting update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful prologue honey
Update soon
Love to read next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😲 😲 Kalpi is So Heartless😲 What Did Raghav Do? 😆 Hmm I Wonder Why Kalpi is So Angry?. Loved it,Update soon Prathu😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it. Why kalpi is so heartless? What did raghav do with her? Seems like she is taking revenge. Please continue

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