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In an holy orphanage some of the reporters comes their to make a documentary film on orphanage so the head of orphanage tells prem to help them all in every possible way which prem agrees and then he take them all to a mini darshan of orphanage,after seeing entire orphanage when they all were heading towards their rooms suddenly one girl kalpi bump to one of the reporter raghav due to which all the books in her hand falls down which make her angry so she start shouting on raghav by saying that are you blind,don't you have eyes, can't you see,though kalpi was continuously shouting on him but he just kept on staring her,he was very much lost in her beauty which irritates her so she just bend down to pick up her books but still she kept on cursing raghav under her breathe,after a min when raghav comes out of his dream world he too bends down to help kalpi and start picking up books due to which their hands touches each other by mistake and raghav again gets lost in his dream world,he holds her hand and was not ready to leave her hand though she struggles a lot to free her hand,so she just jerk his hand away with the force due to sudden force he just fall down and all his friends including prem and kalpi too burst into laughter,seeing kalpi laughing he just gets memorized and again start staring her,when sam brings him back into reality he noticed that kalpi had already gone from their so he runs behind her but till the time he could stop her she already went inside her room and lock it,he decided to knock on the door but prem stop him,so disappointed he returns back where all his friends were waiting for him,seeing all his friends staring him he just run inside the washroom,inside he remembers kalpi's face,her smile,her beauty which unknowingly brings smile on his face whereas on the other hand all of raghav's friends finds kalpi very rude,ignorant,short tempered so they decided to make raghav stay away from kalpi but on the hand raghav decided to talk to kalpi,later in the evening when prem takes the food to kalpi's room,she denies eating by saying that she don't have mood to eat so prem decided to feed her by his own hand but in angry she throws away the entire food and moreover she shouts on him too and says that she don't want anyone in her life,just leave her alone...raghav and his friends witness all this drama due to which they all develop a negative view about her except raghav,he finds kalpi's behaviour very strange but kalpi doesn't care about them,throwing prem out the room she just cry her heart out whereas after all this drama everyone went to their rooms and sleep,next morning raghav tries to talk to kalpi but she kept on avoiding him but still he kept on trying so in frustration she went to garden and start smoking...after five min prem too comes their and sits besides her,sensing someone's presence kalpi turns and find prem their so she apologise to her for her rude behaviour to which prem forgives him within a sec as he very well knows about her condition,he request her to stop smoking and for once just try to live your life,try to be happy,try to smile but kalpi doesn't pay any attention to his words and ask him that why did when people left from our life's after hurting us why their pain, their memories goes along with them,why they always kept on haunting us,why can't we ever able to move on from them why, cryingly she just hug and he too consoles her,raghav witness all this and understands something else so he just went from their and let out all his angry, frustration on punching bag continuously punching it,his angry even scare his friends too as they all had never seen him in so much angry before so they decided to confront kalpi about this but prem doesn't let them talk to kalpi...as time passes even though raghav and his friends gets busy in making film and kalpi never even for once take straightly to raghav and all of them,she always kept on avoiding her,insulting her but still raghav develops a strong bond of affection towards her, hr falls in love with her,he could clearly sense that something had happened in kalpi's past which had turned her into stone,he want to remove all her pain but he can't do,he want to made her smile which had lost a long ago but all this first he had to find out about her past so he ask prem about it but prem deny answering any of his question so even though prem says no but still raghav decided to tell his feelings to kalpi,to proposed her for marriage...later in evening when kalpi returned back from her work,raghav take her hands in his and speak out all his feelings to her,he proposed her with a beautiful diamond ring which left kalpi stunned and she quickly jerk her hands away,she told him that how could you even dare to think so,you are nothing to me and I never loved you,nor had ever seen you with that eyes,you are just a stranger only stranger so just completely your work for which you had come here and left from here,you will get nothing from here nothing you understand saying so she was about to go but raghav hold her waist and bring her closer to him and due to sudden force she kept her hand on his strong chest to stand properly,though with this they both share a cute eye lock but when reality strikes kalpi,she just pushed away raghav and was again about to go but before she could leave raghav again hold her and ask that why she didn't love him why,he kept on asking her and was in a no mood to leave her so at last kalpi blast out and say I never loved you because I don't believe in love,I don't believe in any relation,love is just waste of time which only and only gives you lifelong,never ending pain nothing else and I just even hate the word love also,it doesn't had any place in my life got it,she again says that and you Mr raghav whats your problem,why you or any man can't bear any girls rejection,you all man can reject any girl but when a girl rejects you why does it hurts your man ego why can't you all able to understand and digest a simple No why saying so she just left from their,after she left raghav just broke down seeing him totally broken his friends went to console him,they told him to forget kalpi and move on but in return he told to them that I love her madly and now I can't even imagine my life without her as now she had become my life, my love,my everything,without her I won't be able to live,I just want her in my life by hook or by crook so his friends advice him not to loses his hopes and kept on trying until she accepts you,your love which raghav agrees and wipe out all his tears but prem who is standing in the corner and had listen everything thinks that raghav you can try as much as you want but she will never gone accept you not even as her love or as her friend because of painful, tearful past,you will only and only gone hurt yourself because of her, I just hope and pray that you realise everything before it gets too late,before you yourself ruin your life,in mid of all this pakhi told raghav and everyone else that tomorrow is kalpi's birthday so they all decided to plan a surprise party for her which as usually prem denies,he warns them all not to plan any party for her as its result will be very dangerous,to which raghav ask him are you stopping us,first please tell us the reason to which prem remains quite but then after a min he ask them all that why they again and again wants to get hurt,insulted from her but this time they all remains quite and no one pays any attention to his words and plans to surprise her at 12:00 am with a birthday cake, with this thought they all start doing the preparations for the surprise whereas prem thinks now only god can save them all from her angry,at 12:00 am raghav continuously bang her room door until she opens it,once she opened the room door without giving her any chance to say anything raghav almost drag her to the hall,as soon as they both step inside the hall maya opens the light and they all together loudly says surprise which shocks her,she was about to say something which doesn't go unnoticed by prem
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Before kalpi could say anything raghav again drag her infront of the cake and ask her to cut the cake but instead of cutting the cake kalpi just throw away the entire cake in angry and ask them that who dare they all could plan all this without even asking her,what they all think of themselves,doesn't they all know that she doesn't like celebrating her birthday,she doesn't like mingle with people before she could say anything further prem interprets in between and ask kalpi to calm down as they doesn't know anything about her,her past to which raghav says yeah we all don't know but we all want to know about her past,please tell us which irritates kalpi even more so she left without uttering anything, its not that she doesn't know that she had hurt some innocent souls, who had very clean hearts and had only intentions to bring smile on her face with all this but still she can't do anything,her painful past doesn't allow her to trust on people,to mingle with people,to make any friends and relation and believe on it so in her room she led out all her pain,guilt, angry,frustration by dancing on broken pieces of glass and hurting herself even more...hearing voice of music coming out of her room,everybody rush to her room,seeing her dancing like mad and that too on broken pieces of glass,they all try to stop her but she doesn't listen to anyone and kept on dancing so maya runs to call prem and as maya tells all this to prem,he quickly runs to kalpi's room and ask her to stop all this and just forget your past and move on in your life,you will get nothing by hurting yourself,they will never gone realise your pain,your suffering,please just let go off your past,all the pain,suffering, please for god sake stop all this before prem could say anything kalpi cryingly broke down and hug prem and within a sec she went unconscious due to the excessive blood loss,after removing some glass pieces from her wounds,he did her first aid cryingly...after all that still tears were not stop flowing through his eyes so he comes out of the room where raghav and others consoles him, he tells him that you were right,we had listened you,we shouldn't have done all that but what to do we all doesn't know that kalpi was so selfish,short tempered,rude, mean and ignorant to which prem shouted on them and say no you guys are wrong,she is not mean, selfish,whatever you all think about her is totally wrong,she is not like that...he again says that you guys want to know that why I always stopped you from talking her,why I stopped you guys to give her a surprise birthday party,you guys want to know about her past na so today I will gone tell you guys everything which had turned her like this...kalpi's parents had loved each other a lot but their parents were against their relation so they both just runs away from their home and get married, everything was going well between them,even they both had two lovely lovely kids also but one day everything gets changed when kalpi father gets dismissed from his job,after trying a lot also he didn't get job anywhere due to which be slips into depression and their financial condition start getting disturbed so aunty decided to find a job to make everything back to normally and luckily in first attempt only she gets a job,she start managing both her house and job very well, slowly everything again starts getting fine but it doesn't go well with uncle,seeing his wife working and managing the house it hurts uncle man's ego,they both always end up fighting on small small things,the both who loves each other truly now wasn't even ready to see each other,whenever they both even talk with each other they both always end up fighting with each other,uncle wants aunty to leave the job but aunty was not ready at all so at the end they both decided to part away their ways,they both get divorced and then the custody case begins for their children's,they both wants kalpi's bro but none of them wants kalpi custody as she was a girl and were amused to be a burden on the family nothing else so when no one wants kalpi's not her family nor any relatives so at the last she was send to this orphanage and the day when she comes here was her birthday, though she was send here and her parents doesn't want to accept her but still she believes that at least on her birthday her parents,her bhai will come,wish her and celebrate her birthday...whole day passes like this and she kept on waiting but her wait never ends,no one comes,they not even call her and wish,entire day she kept on thinking that for what she got that punishment,for being a girl,what was her fault in that,if they don't want a girl then they had killed her before her birth only,why they give her birth...with the end of the day she loose all her hopes,dreams,smile,her believe on love,relations and people,she loose everything,she accept that her parents,her bhai never loved her,their love was always a fake,she made herself stone so that she won't get hurt again,people won't use her again but in all this she was proud on herself,she was proud to be a girl, she lived her entire life hating her family,hating everything,she never allowed anyone to come near to her,in her life as she doesn't want anyone's sympathy,hearing all this everyone had tears in their eyes, they can't believe that kalpi had gone through so much in her life, raghav decided to make everything fine for kalpi,he decided to make her smile,laugh again but first for that he need to make her forget her past,he ask everyone that will they all help him in making kalpi smile again and everyone including prem too promise him to help him for kalpi's better future and they all name this mission as bring back kalpi's happiness...their mission starts from the very next day,in morning when kalpi refuses to do the breakfast raghav says that they all will also won't eat until she will eat and if they all won't eat it will be very shameful to their orphanage as in India guests are like God and for now they all are their guests but kalpi just left from their without eating anything so none of them eat anything,later in the evening also they all did the same so at last annoyingly she sits to eat with them and its the first from the time they all had that they all had eat their food together...from this time they all always start doing something or other which sometime irritates her or sometime unknowingly brings smile on her face,slowly but she again start living,enjoying her life,she start laughing,slowly but she start enjoying with raghav and his friends but again their life's take a complete U turn when one day sam goes to kalpi's room to return back some books which he had taken from her to read but finding kalpi's room locked,he went to prem's room and give him the books so that he can give it to her but when he was going out something strikes at his hand and he comes back and picks up a photo frame from side table,he was seeing that photo were seriously so prem told him that it was his and kalpi's childhood pic which left him totally shocked and in shock he just drop that photo frame leading it to get broken into pieces which shock prem but sam,he just left from their without saying anything,in his room he wonders that how could it be possible,no it won't be possible, they can't cheat me,wiping away all his tears he called someone and after talking to the person he again broke down with tears, today all his beliefs got shattered, his heart gets broke into million of pieces but then he promise himself to fix up everything as soon as possible...from that time he start caring,loving kalpi even more which not only shock his friends and prem but kalpi too, they all wonders that what happens to sam,why now a days he is behaving very weird but he didn't say anything so raghav and others decided to confront sam about all this,they all kept on asking him that what's going on in his mind but he keep mum but at last when raghav told him that very soon they all will left the orphanage as their work is almost done,its shocks sam and he just blast out that no we all can't go from here until but then he again stops so raghav ask what until, speak up sam...
Edited by jiya007 - 9 years ago
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Fab concept. Interesting. Please complete it soon. Eager to know Kalpi's past !!!!
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Awesome os...plzz complete soon...
Yaar tu tere os kab complete karogi😡
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Sam again says guys we all won't go from here until we will get back our Kalpana,hearing kalpana's name everyone gets shocked,raghav ask him that sam have you lost your mind,did you even know what are you saying,your sis,our best friend Kalpana had died a long ago,till now we guys only had some of her beautiful memories with all of us,we all request you please won't ruin that memories with your stupid jokes,raghav I had in my full sense and I not joking,if you won't believe me then for once come with me sam replied and take them all to prem's room,when prem was not in the room,he shows all of them the sane pic which he had seen someday ago which left everybody stunned,they all can't able to believe that what their eyes seeing,for them its totallyp impossible so they look towards sam with confusing look which sam within a sec understands and says our parents not only lied to Kalpana but me too,whatever they told us about Kalpana that she died up with her granny in a car accident in her childhood was all a lie,a big lie,the truth was that she never died infact they send her here and lied to me to keep me with them away from my sis to which pakhi ask him and how did you get to know this,so sam narrates the entire story that how he had comes here,how he saw this photo then how he called his parents and whatever they say, how they both accept their lie and apologise to him for everything, hearing all this everyone left stunned,they wonders that how can any parents stoop so low and lie to such a extend which always end up hurting their kids only,they thinks that if every parents are like them then its better if we doesn't have any parents,they promise sam that they all won't return back until Kalpana forgives them and accept them back all wholeheartedly,their happiness vanish away when they hear prem's sound,yes prem was standing at the gate and had listen up everything,he warns them that doesn't they all every dare to say truth to her,if we tells her the entire truth then what nothing,I am sure she will listen to us and will surely understands us raghav answered,if she ever gets to know the truth then without giving you all a single chance to explaining anything she might kill you all or may killed herself because she had spend her almost life hating you all,she hates you all more then she loved herself and that's why she herself changed her name to kalpi from Kalpana because she doesn't want to keep any of thing giving by her parents or by you all,not even her name prem replied I totally understands that she was bought up with hatred for all of us and we all were bought up with her memories only but now after knowing the truth it would be impossible for us to stay away from her sam says,he ask prem that will you help us in uniting kalpi and us to which prem reply I will try my best to help you but I can't say or promise anything as she lots of mood swings,she is totally unpredictable saying so he left from their,once he left raghav asked sam that what's the need to take prem's help,why can't we do all this without his or anyone's else help,no we can't do all this alone,it was very much needed to take his help as till now he was with kalpi not us,he understands kalpi much better then all of us sam replied whereas on the hand prem ask kalpi that just amuse that one day you meet up your bro so what you will gone do at that moment to which kalpi picks up a knife from fruit basket and say if it happens ever then she will gone kill him that at very sec only without thinking twice to which prem again says but if you got to know that your parents lied to him also then what,then also I will not gone listen him or believe him and will gone stick to my decision kalpi replied which made prem gulped down in fear,he just left from their without wasting any sec or without uttering anything again but his action,his words made kalpi suspect on him,she clearly feels that he is hiding something from her,so she decided to get deep into the matter and to do some investigation,two days passes from the day she starts her investigation but she doesn't get anything because prem very well knows her and he too understands that kalpi start doubting on him so he along with others remove all the things which could reveal sam's or others real identity but one day kalpi gets to know everything through sam's ID card which he by mistake left in the hall,he,raghav and others tries to talk to her but she just locked herself into her room,she stops talking to anyone even prem too because she felt cheated from him,she thinks for them prem back stabbed her,she start hating him too so sam decided to end all this for once and all so with this thought he called his so called parents and ask them to come to holy orphanage as soon possible, seeing her parents again standing infront for her after so many years all the flashback start playing infront of her eyes,her unshed tears,broken beliefs,heart,lost trust,smile,her never ending pain, sufferings,sorrows everything,it again start haunting her so she decided to end up her life so that everything ends up with her only but then she realised that why would she hurt herself,she was not at fault,it was not her mistake,she had not done anything wrong,why would she get punishment,punishment will be given to them and their punishment will be that she will never gone forgive them all nor will accept them back into her life, though everyone tries to make her understands sam side too but she doesn't listen to anyone,she kept on avoiding sam,raghav and others due to which sam slowly start going into depression and as a result he end up hurting himself and everyone blames kalpi for everything but she doesn't care... everybody warns her not to even try to meet sam,and she too don't want to meet sam but this time her heart doesn't support her,so she finally goes to meet up sam at hospital,but come back without meeting her,she sits in the garden and remember their old happy days to which unknowingly tears starts flowing through her eyes but before her tear could fall on ground prem takes it on his hand, seeing prem their kalpi quickly wipes out all her tears...thought prem requested her that for atleast once go and meet sam but she denied by saying that she doesn't care about anyone,to which prem says why today your words are not matching with your heart,why it feels like that you are saying something else but something else is going on your mind,please tell me whats that maybe I can help you,I feels very scared to be get cheated once again,I had never seen so much happiness in my life what if god can snatch everything from me, what if my bhai,my friends again disown me I won't able to bear all that again,I won't able to stand up again,this time if again anything bad happens na then it will take way my life for sure,I doesn't have the guts to face all that again,I doesn't want to go through all that again kalpi replied to which prem takes her hand in his and place it on her heart and tells her to listen and follow your heart,it will clearly all your confusion and will show you the right path and kalpi did the same so after listening to her heart kalpi quickly went to hospital to see and meet her bhai leaving all her tensions,thoughts asides but in hospital no one let her meet sam,so she forcefully enters to his room though everyone tries their best to stop her,hearing kalpi's voice sam not only get back his conscious,but he starts getting fine too so at last finally kalpi accepted sam and others back into her life wholeheartedly and raghav proposal too and they both gets married becoming one as RagNa for forever,even prem too gets married to maya and sam to pakhi finally all of them together achieving their "Ek Mutthi Aasmaan" "THE END"
Edited by jiya007 - 9 years ago
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Thanks huma and had updated it
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Originally posted by: Ragna1302



Awesome os...plzz complete soon...
Yaar tu tere os kab complete karogi😡

Thanks swati and dear see I have completed this OS specially for you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful story, with emotions depicted so beautifully.
Ragna memories got refreshed after a long time.
Feeling bad for kalpi but nice to see everything ok.
The end was so perfect..
Thanks for the pm.
And pls continue writing stories, particularly os .I like os very much. He he greedy kid, u see.
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Superb update😛awesome awesome superb loveddd it plz cont writing thanks for pm😛😛
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beautiful story jiya like always thanks for pm dear

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