Ragna OS Ragna/Ashna phone conversation. pls have a look.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey girls...!!

This is ABI. im new here. some knew me here. i need to share our ashna/ragna phone conversation after their marriage. i hope u all would love this short conversation. Aanchu and Kavi this is mainly for u both... Lets deticate this for our new wouldbe bride PRIYUUU...

TO MY ANGEL



(Scene starts with phone conversation of ragna/ashna)

Tring Tring Tring Tring

KALPANA
Hello! Who's this?
Its me, how are you?

Her face gloomed and redded like a red rose on the word of IT'S ME

YOU? Wait. I'll come to terrace. Can't speak here. She felt her MIL'S questioning eyes on her. But without glancing back she ran upstairs soon like a wind.
Ya tell me now. I'm in terrace now.
Had ur dinner? Came the voice of her man RAGHAV on other side.
Hmmm... Came the reply from Kalpi.

Their conversation continued. Its been 10min and she is waiting for her expected question from him.

" My husband has just recently started a new company in U.S working away on a barge for an month, never realized how daunting this would be until he went 10 days ago. Im really struggling with this any advice from anyone who been through this would be of great help!"

Her thoughts got distrubed by the word "THEN" from his mouth.
Hmmm... nothing Came the response from Kalpi with eyes full of tears.
Ok! Take care! Kalpi. Ill contact you soon.
Hmmm... Take care Raghav.
Love you!
Love you too my love!

Call has been disconnected but still they had their conversation through their heart.

Tears flow from Kalpi's big round beautiful eyes. She scolded Raghav in her heart.

He forgot it? How can he? Even though he is busy in his work atleast an "WISH" for his wife on her birthday.

She is very angry on him. Kalpi controlled her tears, took a deep breath and managed herself to be normal. Wallef down the stairs. Avoided to face Gouri. Went directly to the kitchen.

Started her blaberring section. How can he forget? How dare you Raghav? I wont let you as easy when you are back. Do he think I should ask him everything I needed. But not an birthday wish Raghav. Moreover this is my 1st birthday after our marriage. How can you miss this Raghav? I hat...

Doorbell rang before she would complete her sentence.

Ramu Kaka came in with a parcel in his hand.




Kalpi betiya parcel for you.
For me? ok kaka. thank you!
She glanced the parcel which is wrapped in white gift sheet with an bunch of beautiful red rosess.



No name mentioned.
Expect,
" You are the love of my life. I cannot believe you said yes to a man like me. Seriously, I count my blessings everyday that I wake up next to you. There is nothing I want more than to spend the next 100 birthdays by yourside. If that is not possible, then we might have to pull a NOTEBOOK because I cannot live a day without you."

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MY OTHER HALF

Reading the wish note in her hand she smiled and opened the parcel by knowing its from her love of life. Its an ANGEL doll.


Her phone buzzed an text. She opened the text and read

TO MY ANGEL

Hope u all like this short but long conversation... This is my first writting. So sorry for any mistakes...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww so swt my Abba... So swt thanks for updating this short story... Love u
Nd it is superb... My ragna's silent convo ... How raghav sent her gift, when she read his msg came ... It is cute...muuahh
U knw wht u shd think abt writing ragna stories..love u
Priyuuu love u... I hope I loved the gift Abba gave to... I m so happy for u love u..
Edited by aanchuxoxo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 supreb it was tooo good
keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally you have put it here it's very nice Abi 👏 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its awesome & adorably cute !!! 😳
Keep up with the good work and plz come up with more os'

MARUSHKAA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww it was super cute Abi !!! i loved it
you should keep writing dear !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Truly cute abi...
Love it..
Aww Raghav finished his blabbering in soon and Kalpi responded him only as hmm
Very bad husband... Made my angel Cry
But loved his surprise for her
And the quote was so beautiful
Awesome work abi
Keep it up😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woww !! Superb Abi,
You started writing on our RagNa, I m very happy to you

Little but cute conversation between RagNa😊
Now continue with this. ...you always welcome my dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww so sweet
Keep up the good work
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchuxoxo

Res😃

Unres😆
Awww so swt my Abba... So swt thanks for updating this short story... Love u
Nd it is superb... My ragna's silent convo ... How raghav sent her gift, when she read his msg came ... It is cute...muuahh
U knw wht u shd think abt writing ragna stories..love u
Priyuuu love u... I hope I loved the gift Abba gave to... I m so happy for u love u..



Hehehehe aanchu priyuu going to kill us.

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