Hated Love (RagNa SS) Chap 4 on pg 28

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Hello everyone! Here I am again with a new story. I just got a beautiful concept and can't keep it inside. So here it is and let me know if I should proceed.


Prologue

Kalpana was sitting in the middle of the bed with her head covered with a pallu and waiting for her husband. Hearing the sound of a knock on the door, Kalpana's heart skipped. He entered into the room and closed the door. He walked slowly toward the bed and sat beside her. He moved her pallu to reveal his beautiful wife's face. Kalpana lowered her eyes shyly. He placed his palm on her cheek and said, "Mashallah! Kalpana, you are so beautiful." Hearing her husband, Kalpana looked up and got off from the bed. She bent and touched his feet to take ashirwad. He softly pulled her up by her arms and said bringing her into his arms, "your place is not there but here, in my arms." He added, "Thank you for coming into my life. I am very lucky to have a girl like you in my life." Hearing him Kalpana hugged him tightly as she found peace in his arms after a long time in her life. Now she has someone who can protect her from all the evil eyes. And she doesn't have to scare of that person who made her life hell. He broke the hug and said cupping her face lovingly, "Kalpana I love you." Kalpana smiled and lowered her eyes shyly feeling his desire eyes on her. He brought her more closer to him and was about to kiss on her lips, tring..tring..."One second," Saying so he picked up the phone and said, "Hello?" The person from the other side said, "Sir, sorry to disturb you at this time but you have to come to the police station for a while. It is a big emergency." "Okay, I am coming." Saying so he cut the phone call and walked toward Kalpana and said apologizing, "Sorry, Kalpana, I am feeling bad leaving my newly wed bride alone and doing my duty. But I have to go to the police station for a while but I will be back soon." "You don't have to say sorry." Kalpana said smiling, "I can understand, you are a police officer, so your duty is first."

Two hours passed but Kalpana was still waiting for her husband. Tring..tring..Kalpana picked up the phone and said, "Hello?" the person said from the other side, "Hi! Are you Mrs. Kalpana Prem Kapoor?" "Yes, I am," Kalpana answered. "Mam, I am calling from XYZ hospital. Your husband met an accident," The person said. Hearing him Kalpana dropped to the floor as her knee were shaking and she felt weak.

Kalpana reached the hospital and asked the doctor how was her husband. "I am sorry Mrs. Kapoor," Doctor said, "His condition is very poor as he lost lots of blood because of the accident and he needs immediate operation." "Please do the surgery and save my husband," Kalpana said pleading. "Okay, deposit five lacks and I will start the processor," the doctor said. Hearing him Kalpana mumbled, "Five lacks?" "Yes you heard right," Saying so doctor left from there. "How I will be able to save his life," Kalpana said crying. "Why bappa, why can't you see me happy?" Kalpana said as she couldn't believe her luck. "Kalpana." Hearing her name from behind, Kalpana looked back. She saw the person. The last person she wanted to see. Her eyes enraged. She tightened her grip on her pallu. He stared at Kalpana wih her bridal attire. "Kalpana, why are you worried?" The person said, "I will save your husband." Hearing him Kalpana looked at him with the look of disgust. She knew what he was going to say. He continued with a smirk, "In return," he paused then walked toward Kalpana and whispered into her ear, "Baas one night..."

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Character Sketch

Raghav singhania: 24 years old. Masters Final year student. He is the only son of Vikram singhania. He is a rich spoil brat. He changes girlfriends the way he changes clothes everyday. He is very stubborn. Once his mind is set on a thing he gets it.

Kalpana Jadhav: 19 years old. First year Graduate. Sweet, innocent, honest, fighter, poor.

Prem Kapoor: 25 years old. He is husband of Kalpana.

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INDEX

Prologue

CS

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooohhh faru 😳 loved the concept. Kalpi is married to my handsome Prem but he go into an accident. Both seems to love each other 😳 but Is that Raghav in the end 😲 how can he ask that..??
Hmm interesting 😃 please continue sweetie 😳
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Concept is awesome
Wow! Kalpi is married to Prem who is a police officer and is badly hurt on his wedding night
Kalpi need to pay a large amount of money to save her husband and it look like the mighty Raghav is here to pay the fee but with his indecent proposal
I can't wait to read more. Hope you continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aagay aagay Tum tere peeche peeche hum. 😆 Tum nay likha aur hum chale aaye aankhen pad ne kay liye saath lay aaye 😆

Any way u got me hooked. What a concept. So prem is married to kalpi and has gotten in a accident. Will kalpi save and will she compromise her integrity to do it? Will rags succeed in his Gandhe motives? I m waiting to read more 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue 👏Sound interesting
Nice concept
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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New ss thank u. Rags is so much spoiled brat how dare he ask kalpi for one night stand. Is prem accident yar planned by rags already to get kalpi?is kalpi going to agree rags condition to save prem pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow farha is fabulous update interesting concept
Want t read wat next
Update soon
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Hi farhana wow amazing concept
kalpi and prem love eachother
😭 😭 poor prem met in accident on his married day
Ooh raghav is so spoit he want kalpi 4 onenight
i think rahav is behind prem accident
poor kalpi what will she do
and plz update ur cl plz im waiting 4 it

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