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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sweet update. Wow ! A 6yr old out to 'protect' the adults ! What bravery , hope it is still with her , as she needs all the courage to face the disappointments . Good story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww too cute update
Kalpi is in so pain n smoothing her baby with words
Hmm kalpi hold rag hand
Raghav as thief omG haha
Kalpi t protect the adults
Lovely update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
its awesome..
update soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update. FB was awesome.
I think it's kapoors who made Raghav believe that vithal killed his father.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update😊
raghav😡 want to gve divorce to his pregnant wife
kalpi talks wth her baby and 6yrs old kalpi scene is too gud

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmmm.!!..I hope Raghav gets well soon ..
And uses his own head to think ..
Awww!...that flashback was so funny ..
Six year old Kalpi ..was so protective ..😆
Beautifully wriiten sweetie..
Thank you ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh god so another story from neha...lovely but how raghav Can do this...didn't he has any love for her wife and unborn child...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: FALAK_SKY

Oh god so another story from neha...lovely but how raghav Can do this...didn't he has any love for her wife and unborn child...

kya karu yr main majboor hu😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 3


Kalpana go & say sorry to Raghav ...Kavita say to kalpi . Kalpi nodded and immidatly went to say sorry to Raghav before Gauri stop her ...
..
Raghav was in his room holding his & his dad pic close to his heart .. Sad with himself over the fact that he smile for even once ...pleading his dad to come back

When he hear knock on his Room door but he won't answer ...
Kalpi knocked 4/5 times but gain no responce , she was about to go back when she noticed door was in actual not locked .. So using this opputuinity she enter in his room who was muttering something
" dad i miss u na plz come back . U know how much i missed u? I promise i will do what u want . I'll not ask for choclates for toys plz na i miss u . U know u are very bad don't even think once about me ? How could u just leave?"
But kalpi unable to hear his murmers she see tears in his eyes and think that she is the reason , feeling guilty she take step toward him . Standing in front of him holding her ears she start sit up & down . When Raghav notice her again he get angry as he won't like anyone in his room and she entered in his room without even knoking ..

R- what are u doing here ?
Hearing his angry tone kalpi stop her sit up's .
K- i came here to say sorry . I'm sorry i hurt u !!

R- how dare u enter in my room without knoking??
K- but i knocked but u wom't rply
R- don't lie
He say in more angry tone
K- i'm not lying . I just came to say sorry .
Kalpana answer him back in same tone unable to take false assusions .
R- u said sorry na . Now go from here !!
K- hww don't u have manners how to talk with girls .
R- why just u can't live ?
K- u say u are not upset i'll leave then .
Taking a deep breath he say
R- k i'm not upset bcoz of u now go !!!
K- don't lie . I saw when i enter u was crying
R- why u just can't leave ??
K- i don't like when someone get upset bcoz of me !!
He was hell angry now
R- I'M NOT UPSET BCOZ OF U !! DO U UNDERSTAND . I'M UPSET BCOZ MY DAD LEAVE ME . HE WON'T THINK WHAT I DO AFTER HIM ? HE WAS MY BEST FRIEND HE PROMISED ME HE WILL ALWAYS REMAIN BY MY SIDE BUT HE BROKE HIS PROMISE.
R- happy now i'm not angry bcoz of u . Now go!!

In mean time kavita & gauri came hearing his loud voice ..
Gauri was about to went toward Raghav thinking may be kalpama got scared but kavita stop her holding her hand and eyeing gauri not to interfare . Then both went attantion toward Kalpana . Who was sad but not scared ..

R- go n
Cut in middle by kalpana
K- so ur dad also leave u like my dadi??
Causing Raghav to look toward her
K- u know my dadi also left me some months back ...
I'm also angry on her !!

R- so will u forgive her for leaving u ?
Causing Raghav to ask that question unknowingly forgetting that he was angry ..
K- yup
R- don't u love her ?
K- i love her soo much . Kalpana say while spreading her hand as much she able to do !!
R- then don't u miss her??
K- i miss her so much . But baba say god need dadi more than me ! Baba say that god need good person to make everyone happy . So he called her ..
R- that's not fair . How could she leave u for anyone ? Don't she know u'll get sad after she went away??
K- baba say i'm a good girl and i need to understand dadi wish also . Dad say even if i unable to see her . But she always see me whatever i do and also she never want me to cry while remembering her . Bcoz she never like to see me cry . He say she will always by my side and get upset if i'm upset..
Do ur baba love u too ?

Raghav nodded in yes
K- so why are u sad? U wanna make ur baba sad? My baba always say those who love us don't want us to cry they will always remain by our side even if we won't see them !! So if u love ur dad amd don't want to make him upset then be a good boy !! And u know boys look ugly when they cry .

Causing him to think about his behaviour

K- but tell me one thing
R- hmm
K- how dadi is with me when i can't see her ??
When kavita intruppt
Ka- u can't see them bcoz they are gods angels but they see u what ever u do .
Saying so she kissed kalpi forehead .

Turning toward Gauri kavita say
Ka- we will leave now it's late .

Gauri come toward kalpi coming on her level kissing her forehead she say
G- thank u beta !
Kalpi look toward kavita confused why gauri aunty was thanking her??
But kavita just give her smile amd say
Ka - come kalpi ur baba must get worried .
Kalpi nodded and left their with kavita ...
Leaving behind Raghav who was still thinking about her words ..
..

K- Raghav
Listen plz it must be a misunderstanding

Jerking her hand away he say y
R- misunderstanding kalpana??
U wanna say i'm wrong ? U trust ur baba more than me !
K- but
R- but what kalpana
( he yell)
K- baba i wanna talk with Raghav alone . Plz u all wait for some timr
Vi- but kitto
Before vishal say vithal keep hand on his shoulder

Vi- kitto we are waiting outside for u come fast .
Saying so jadhav's went outside and kalpi call an old lady who work for them and say her to take gauri medicines and be with her ..
After all left kalpana say

K- why are u doing this ha ? U know na baba never do it ?
Turning towerd her he say
R- but ur baba did it !!
K- try to understand Raghav their must be something wrong . If it's truth that dad was killed then we will find out about truth and punish culprit togather .. She say while placing her hand on his cheeks making him to look toward her ..

Jerking her hand away he say
R- u wanna find culprit ?? He is ur baba !! He kill my dad . U said once na kalpana god need good people so he call my dad . BUT NO HE WAS NOT CALLED BY GOD . UR DAD SNATCH MY DAD FROM ME . MY DAD NEVER WANT TO BROKD HIS PROMISE . UR DAD SNATCH HIM FROM ME ... HE NEED TO PAY

He say in a loud tone ..
Her eyes was moist with tears .
Holding his hand once again and putting it on her belly causing him to look toward her
K- for once if i agree with u that my baba snatch ur dad from u . For once if i trust u just tell me where i'm at fault Raghav?? Where our baby is at fault ? Why u just can't listen us once . We both make everything fine just give us a chance ... I know u love ur dad more than anything . I promise we will punish them ..

His expression change once again listning his dad name . Coming closer to her he whisper in her ears in a dangoursly cold voice
R- u wanna know kalpana jadhav where are u at fault ?? U wanna know ?? U ARE DAUGHTER OF MY DAD MURDERER AND HE LOVE U SO MUCH . I FEEL GOOD WHEN I SEE PAIN IN HIS EYES TODAY WHEN HE SEE HER DAUGHTER HOME BROKE BCOZ OF HIS DEEDS . U are nothing but a source for me to hurt vitthal jadhav . I'll destroy him in every aspect . Soon ur dad is in jail and for child I WON'T CARE IF U AND THIS LIVE OR DIE NOW !! U both are none to

and she slap him hard on his cheek .
Her eyes went red due to pain & anger . She can't believe it he is same person whom she love most . She hear her every word thiking he is angry but when he whisper he won't care about their child , his child ,her child if it live or die her anger knew no bounds . How could he say something like that about his own child ?? She slap him as hard she able to bcoz no mother able to tolrate anythung against her child ...

K- u wanna destroy everything na ? Then do as much u able to i won't let u harm my family . I love my baba & my child and i'm enough to protect both of them ! U wanna leave me na Raghav ? Don't worry my lawyer will send u my singed divorce papers !! I don't wanna live with a man who know me since i was 6 years old . Who was with me since last 18 years and still he has no faith in me . I don't need a father who wish death for his child ...

Saying so she went toward exit of Singhania mantion

R- Do what u able to do Kalpana jadhav !! I won't leave ur baba for snating my family happiness ...

Without even looking back she left singhania mantion .
and her small happy world get DESTROYED ..

...
do tell me ur views plz it help understand where story went wrong :)
or where i unable to put words proprly

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