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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
how ruthless rag is being on kalpi
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Raghav 😡 jerk...
Kalpi poor, she is such a innocnt grl n only of 19.
And hv to bear all dt pain😭
i think raghav is gud bt revenge make him lyk ths,feeling bad for kalpi n soothing her pain.
Bt as d reality hit him he again becm a jerk. 😡

superb neha 👏
update nxt part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting. Waiting patiently for Kalpi to realise that she deserves some respect as a HUMAN ! Agreed she is young and nave But Dignity is inborn in you ,whatever age you are. Sorry if you are not happy with my views. It is only my views , not important . Thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome updatee
Kalpi is soo innocent and naive and thinking abt relation with raghav who want only revenge. Raghav is soo ruthless. I hate him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: premap

Interesting. Waiting patiently for Kalpi to realise that she deserves some respect as a HUMAN ! Agreed she is young and nave But Dignity is inborn in you ,whatever age you are. Sorry if you are not happy with my views. It is only my views , not important . Thanks.

first of all i'm happy to read ur view as it's imp for me writing after a long time and equally important i understand ur pov . But it just being a dark story i set kalpi behaviour as a child but it will take turn with conditions . I'll not say soon but say just u need to wait as i'm working on 12th part of this story so i think it after 20. But u need to wait
hope u give me that much time .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kalpi is so innocent and naive. .Raghav is disgusting jerk. Why he is taking revenge from her for her sister's crime 😡. And kalpna's father knew about pakhi and Raghav's relations then why he send kalpi in that hell 😕... I hope there will something or someone who can help kalpi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Just becoz pakhrefuse him he became so cruel 2 an innocent grls.
just waiting when dis monster will become d slave of our kalpi.
lol dat sounds aweful but
a nice name monster turn 2 slave.

Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome...
raghav jerk😡

hope he realize his mistake soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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First welcome back neha 🤗
N sorry for late comment dear
All four part is superb 😊
Omg 👏 raghav married kalpi buc he want reveng from his sis n his money
Guri did do kalpi arti n left from there without saying anything
Ohh god now raghav use her till she didn't give him his heir
Omg 😡 that raghav so harsh on kalpi he never think about her once
Update next part soon neha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanx for likes and comments
Chapter 5
2 hours later
It's 9 am in morning
After claiming her he went to bathroom to get ready . She was lying on bed as he leave her after claiming her .
Soon he come outside after getting ready . When she see him she try to get up but her body was paining due to their encounters and she has pain in her lower adomnant.
She waited for some seconds so that her pain reduce he noticed but didn't utter a word to console her.
He come to stop in front of mirror buttioning his shirt . While fixing his tie he say
R- get ready fast . We need to go downstairs .
She nodded and wrap sheet around her body .
She goes toward him hesiate to ask but gathering her courage she ask

K- i i w wa n t to a aa s k s s om e t t hing
R- ask
Without turning toward her
Why are u stammring

Relax by his answer she take deep breath to calm down her nervousness and fears she ask
K- a are u ang gry o on me ?
Raghav stop for a moment
but again calm down his anger

R- why i'm angry on u?
I'm not .
A small smile come on her lips and he see a brightness in her eyes like a child got his favarate candy
K- u not angry & maa?
R- i need to go get ready fast
K- u sure u are not angry?
She ask once again
He rolled his eyes in irritation and again nodded in yes
and nxt moment he feel her lips on his cheeks
She hug him exitedly and say
K- u know i was so scared i thought i did something wrong bcoz of that maa & u both are angry on me & not talking to me and she immidatly run inside bathroom to get ready.
Her pain dissaper by his slight nod
Raghav was too schoked to react for a moment think that she is not like pakhi but on another moment scolded himself.
Yes she is more dangerous than her sister playing innocent .
...
Kalpi get ready feeling something better after taking warm bath to sooth her pain but more than hot water it's Raghav aasurance that he is not angry on her . A smile play on her lips which dissapered somewhere after entering singhania mantion and her one part of her relaxed after knowing that what happen last night is only result of her over thinking and she blused too much after seeing his marks on her body. But somewhere she don't want to go things like that dismissing her thoughts she get ready as she was running already late and don't want to angered Gauri & Raghav .

Raghav was in his room when he see her coming out after taking bath and somewhere he too noticed her smile .

But he can't risk anything as he want her property on his name to take over jadhav industries and leaving pakhi with NOTHING AT ALL.
Both went downstairs

Gauri , sammy , maya already seated on dining table and waiting for Raghav to come .

Raghav greeted everone morning so does kalpi
G- Good morning Raghav
Have seat breakfast is ready .
None care to rply Kalpi . Leaving kalpi standing on her place Raghav start eating his breakfast . None glance at her once or ask for breakfast .
Her smile dissapered for a moment angered on Raghav but at other moment her anger vanished as she see him discussing some bussiness issue with Sammy .
For a second she think that he is upset with het but on nxt moment she scolded herself in her mind

Kalpi tu bhi na kuch bhi sochti h he say na he is not angry he must be buay with work like baba most of the time .

She decide to help servants in serving breakfast and after they complete breakfast in cleaning kitchen. And Gauri , Raghav & Sammy & Maya settled to hall .

She was cleaning kitchen convencing servent to do any other work . When Gauri enter inside kitchen
G- Radha ( their servant)
She stop when she see Kalpi in kitchen
Kalpi turn on Gauri voice
K- maa vo she goes for dusting as i assure i clean kitchen .
G- u have no need to interfare in any house matter DO U UNDERSTAND?
Kalpi for once get nervous after hearing her cold & firm tone
K- I i a am s o or y y m m aa
( she say while stammering due to again get nervous by her tone )
Gauri turn to leave when she hear her stammer again

K - a a r re u a n gr ry w wi tth m me m maa
( are u angry with me maa)
D d i dd i ma ake a any
m iis tak e .
( did i make any mistake)
a aai t to lld m me i i t's a a b bad ha abbi it t to w wak ke u up l la ate
( aai told me it's a bad habbit to wake up late)
S s he a al lso g get a a n n gry w w with m me w wh hen i i w a ak ke u up l late
( she also get angry with me when i wake up late)
I i a am s o or y y m m aa
( i'm sorry maa)

I i p rr o m i ss e i it n nvr h ha p en a ag ain
( i promise it nvr happen again )
She hold her ears to say sorry to gauri
P p a akka p rr om mi s e
( pakka promise)

She say while putting her hand on her head.
Gauri was surprised by her conffesion for once speechless thinking may be they are doing wrong she is innocent

Kalpi was looking toward her with so much hope but before Gauri say anything Maya come inside kitchen

M- maa Mr Vitthal Jadhav come to take Kalpana with him for "paag phere".

Kalpi eyes went wide and she small brightly
K- bhabhi my Baba come ?
( all her nervousness flew by hearing her baba name)
Maya nodded
M- he is in hall
Without listning anything kalpi run to meet his baba.
Edited by darkloveriam - 10 years ago

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