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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. So pakki is back.update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update , though tooo shorrrt to satisfy ' thirsty ' readers ! Rags is in a dilemma , ' to want or not want ' but his sympathetic part is trying to hold on to her. Well , sympathy can always develop into Love ! Well written , Neha ! BTW , we want your thoughts in the story and not ours , so go ahead and ' pour your thoughts ' [ even sleazy ones LOL ] and the readers are waiting ! Thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely.
pakhi😡
hope raghav and kalpi get back together...
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Posted: 10 years ago
fabulous update
love raghav so sweet picking up his wife
n makhi yuck wat timing
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update doctor need dose ur patients condition critical 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
plez update soon... waitinggg😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanx for likes & comments
chapter 20
Pakhi didn't like a bit that way Raghav holding her in his arms in front of all.
His grip doesn't lossen a bit instead he held her more possesively when his eye fell on Kamala & Vitthal who come after pakhi.
That night scene flashes in front of him where vitthal push kalpi out of house .
Anger rising with in her as he see them again .
P- kalpi wo
Kalpi unserstand pakhi hint embarecced with all as she is in his arms in front of all.
His mind divert from jadhav's as he feel her struggling to free herself . He smirk
R- welcome Mr Jadhav come
Kalpi wisper in his ears to leave her but he went toward table and made her sit on chair
Kamala was a bit angry with the show off in front of family & vitthal too but they can't express it pakhi was fuming . But for the first time his intentions are not about pakhi & revenge but kalpi insult . He want to detroy them now for hurting her .
Vitthal clear his throat to gain some attantion
V- Raghav i hope u won't mind our sudden visit . Actually pakhi want to meet kalpi so we too think to meet her .
Composing his anger
R- oh not at all mr . Jadhav
After all she is ur daughter too.
Km- kalpana will u come with me for a second.
But Gauri intreput
G- kamala let her eat first after that u'll chat with her as much u want
R- yea . Come u all plz join us .
Kalpi was too nervous bcoz she know vitthal & kamala won't like a bit what they saw
Raghav sit beside kalpana , pakhi vitthal & kamala on other side .
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Dinner table is a silant war field after that . Kalpi didn't utter a word as vitthal & kamala are here she didn't refuse to eat while Raghav was in full mood to grab this oppurtunity to let her agree to eat food forgetting too pakhi presence . While pakhi throughoyt fuming and vithal & kamsla just silant suspector. But whom who are surprised by Raghav behaviour is Gauri , sammy & maya. On side they are thinking he just pretending but on other side it won't look like that at all , he was looking possesive toward her , may be he won't able to notice his action himself .
As dinner finished . Kalpana went to kitchen for helping maids for cleaning & kamala grabbing this opputunity follow her .
Vitthal & Raghav settle himself on study as vitthal want to discuss some impirtant matter regarding same allince for which Raghav & kalpana got married same deal .
V- Raghav i think we need to sigm those deals now .
R- i agree mr. Jadhav !!
V- so send those papers to sign them as soon as possible u know very well all mine investment gonna used in this project.
He smirk
R-i know ms jadhav . I KNOW HOW MUCH IMPORTANT IT IS FOR U !!
I'll send papers as soon as possible .
Vithal nodded
Meanwhile sammy came their to discuss some issue with vitthal and Raghav excused himself when he went toward outside while msgng for prepare some important documents . When he hear some noises coming from kitchen
Kamala was scolding kalpi
Km- what is all this kalpi ?? U forgot all traditions?
What is all this ? I taught u all this? What i answer to Gauri ji what she was thinking about me . U need to be in ur limits in front of elders.
K- a aa ii vv o
Km- kya vo kalpi
R- anything serious mrs jadhav ??
Kamala look toward Raghav
Keeping his cell in his pocket he went toward kalpi sliding his hand around her waist pulling her close to himself .
Kalpna eyes widen as he hold her possesivly in front of her aai . She gulp and look toward kamala who was cursing kalpana and start struggling to move out .

R- have u any problem mrs jadhav if i hold my wife??
I've all rights on her!!!
To hold her .
Km- u mm vo beta
R- mrs jadhav
I don't want to be rude with u but u need to keep in mind that u are talking with my wife . She is free to do what she want . If u ever try to rule her then sorry to say i'm bounded to take some harsh steps hope u umderstand .
All the while kalpana mouth become wide open one side she is angry how dare he talk to her aai like that on other side she is happy he stand for her
Saying so he held her and take her to their room
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Ragna Room
He shut door with a bang .
Leaving her
R- what was u doing their?? When she was blaming u ?
Don't u have tounge to say something?
Resting her hand on her waist she look at him with equal anger
K- is this way to talk to my aai??
How dare u to talk to her like that?
He take a step toward her
R- how dare me ?? U still talking her side?
K- yes , she have rights on me .
Taking a step morw closer to her
R- she have no right to talk with u like that don't forgot that u are KALPANA RAGHAV SINGHANIA and none have rights to talk to my wife like that

Her eyes sadden with his words
K- u have no rights on me!!
U are no more my husband . I've singed divorce papers .
Before he react to this she without even meeting his gaze went outside.
He was feeling something . He was feeling sad soon she gonna leave .
That morning which start with some beautiful teasing end up with a bitter taste and some sad memories for them .
But some one happines knew no bounds after what she listen . Who qas fuming in amger since morning now cometo know he is actually going to be free .
Now she have chance again to win her to be MRS RAGHAV SINGHANIA.
Pakhi all doubt flew about his love for her .
She was on cloud nine after listning this.
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2/3 chappy more ro go
Edited by darkloveriam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fab ! This update is like a ' Slap ' on Paakhi, Kamala, Vittal ' faces !! Great ! Even Rags has got some sense !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg neha
U dont know d main rule of india forum .
Well as a frnd its my duty 2 inform u before anything bad happen.

Dear u dont know but its a crime on india forum 2 keep d update incomplete.
I know u were not know 2 dis crime u did but if u complete d update with 1 new additiinal update den it can sort out.
N u have 2 do dus really fast as in today only.

Love u

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update. .
Thank god raghav give kamala some lessons. .n pakhi😡 I want give her punches😡😡 shemless ..kamala kuch sikhavo apani badi beti ko...kalpi ko nahi...brainless kamo

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